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GETTING TO THE GOOD PART—Ch. 2
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“I’m sorry to have upset you Peggy I…”
“Peggy I’m heading out…oh I’m sorry I didn’t know you still had company.”
Peggy happy for the interruption put out a welcoming hand to Tina hoping she’d join them.
“Tina there’s someone I’d like you to meet.”
Bette heard Tina’s voice and her mind went blank closing her eyes slightly unsure why her heart was racing. Bette silently hoped Tina was the beautiful blond she saw walking along the water’s edge but felt nervous at the prospect of meeting this woman.
“Bette…Bette are you okay?”
Bette’s eyes opened her cheeks somewhat flushed. Before her stood Peggy and behind her was her beautiful blond.
“Hi.” Bette said looking directly into Tina’s beautiful hazel eyes with a shy smile.
Tina smiled in kind, unsure why she was so drawn to Bette’s eyes. “Hi.”
Peggy was looking back and forth between Bette and Tina seeing the obvious attraction between the two women but there was something more…they were virtual strangers however they already appeared to be lost in their own world.
Tina stepped closer to Bette putting a comforting hand on top of Bette’s. “Are you okay?”
Bette turned her hand around so it was now holding Tina’s. The feel of Tina’s hand in her own felt right…her soft skin against her own. Tina smiled at the beautiful contrast of their skin tones enjoying the gentle way Bette held onto her hand.
They looked away from their hands and back up at each other. Tina found Bette’s smile to be captivating and quite infectious as she felt her mouth turn up into a smile. There was something about this beautiful woman that made Tina feel warm inside.
While still holding onto Tina’s hand Bette stood up wanting to be closer to her.
“I’m Bette Porter.”
“Tina Barton…are you feeling okay?”
Bette could see the concern in Tina’s eyes and smiled at the realization that Tina really seemed to care. “I just got a little lightheaded I’m a lot better now thanks to you.”
Tina blushed at the intensity in which Bette was now looking at her. Tina laughed shyly. “I didn’t do anything…”
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Alice will find out who the artist is. I love this story…I hope Bette & Tina will come across each other again soon. More please.
DID ANYONE SAY GOOGLE? LOVE THIS.. please finf the time to post both stories sooooon,please! im greedy…lol
oh yay, another b and t beginning…this sounds very promising…seems like i missed chapter 1 so will go backwards now…love your other story too, post when u can ok?
This is going great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
This is going great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
TMerlin, you took the words right out of my mouth… twice! ;-)
Love this story! The twist of Tina being and artist is brilliant! Please post soon…don’t make me beg? LOL!
Oh MY Fricken God, another Toribio story!!!!!!!!I luv it. This is so good, but don’t forget about helping hand. I luv that one too!You better be posting soon, cause i am greedy toooooo.
very good! the chemistry between B&T are incredible since the first time, Bette should try to talk to Tina again, thanks for the post
Any begining of B&T is always welcomed, and this one’s looking so good. Wonder why Tina is hiding that she’s an artist, but I’m sure Alice will find out.
Another wonderful story from you. I love how your brain works. Bette and Tina do seem to have a connection and Peggy saw it from the moment they laid eyes on one another. What will Bette think or feel when she finds out the artist that she wants to get to show her work is Tina? Great post and thanks for taking the time to post.
Toribio, this is just awesome! I know you said you didn’t know how far you’d go with this, but please, please, please, continue with this! This is such a great start! I loved their meeting and amazing connection. Of course, I LOVE “a helping hand…”, but if you could pursue both… Even if you don’t post too often… I mean, I really love this new story, please keep it up. Thanks very much!
Hmm… I thought Peggy just told Bette about how Tina’s parents weren’t happy with Tina’s sexual preference? And that she had paid Tina’s university tuition fees? Maybe I’ve mistaken again :P PPS… love this story and eager to see how it’s going to turn out :D
love ur new story with the twist! can’t wait for more! =)
This just keeps getting better. Thank you PPS I love it
i really liked B&T first meeting, the connection, the attraction, hopefully it will develop in something more
i just got all caught up i love this story pms
Hey Toribio, That was awesome. I lvoe all the intrigue in this mysterious take on Bette and Tina’s beginning. It is good to see that Peggy is still in charge of everything; the matriarch protecting her family and friends. The instant that Bette and Tina met there was a real sense that neithers life would ever be the same again. Alice;s confusion at Bette’s actions and admission on how Tina had affected er was brilliant. I could imagine Alice sitting there open mouthed at Bette’s statements. The whole idea of getting a picture or necklace from Tina and the Center was delicious. The connection between them was palpable. More please of this pleasurable and addictive read. Many thanks, Your Loyal Fan.
Another WONDERFUL story … hopefully you can post the next chapter of A Helping Hand and Neighbors.. THANK YOU.. hope the intership is going well!!
And the plot thickens… Ah, I love this story so much (you can’t tell, but I sung that). MORE SOON! Seriously, love it a lot.