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Hello sex. I am loneliness.
“It isn’t like we are the real thing. I can see it when she smiles at me. She holds back. I can’t imagine being her true love. I don’t think I am strong enough. It would take a remarkably strong person to be loved completely by Bette Porter. They would have to have the patience of a Saint.” I chuckle. “Really though that person would have to be more then I am. She can be a little overpowering; without even meaning it she over shadows everyone around her. She doesn’t even see it. I think that is the problem. She doesn’t see herself as the world sees her.” I lean forward. “You know she thinks of herself as a failure most times. I think it has something to do with herit must be a combination of things really.” I sit back on the chair. I must be masochistic, that can be the only explanation for this situation. “I know what this looks like, us living together. It isn’t like that. We are not a couple. We are just companions, someone to keep the loneliness at bay. We are there for each other. Ya know to make sure we stay motivated to participate in the land of the living and to keep each other from jumping.” I chuckle again but my guest looks horrified at the thought. I guess not everyone finds the morbid humorous. “That was a joke.”
She broke the awkward silence by asking, “So if you woke up and she was gone, how did you end up in LA? In this house?”
I cock my head to the side, “Do you really want to hear this?”
“Yes, why wouldn’t I?”
“It seems a little odd” I just shrug it off. “Who am I to decide the standards of normalcy?” She is beautiful; of course I really didn’t expect anything less. She would have to be stunning to fit my vision of the world. It doesn’t seem appropriate for me to be telling her this story. Yet I can’t help taking a deep breath and begin or rather finish my story. Have I said I hate being a sucker for beautiful women?
“I can’t believe we got him! I thought for sure that son of a bitch would walk.” She beamed at me. I could believe we got him; I wasn’t going to let him walk. One more woman beater in the slammer, for the moment anyhow. “I think we should go for a drink.”
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(33 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Hey Vfull you can’t leave us hanging like that. It sounds as if Tina realizes her collossal screw up she has made and this is her first shot over the bow so to speak. I would love to see hao Ash can help guide our dynamic duo to safer waters. MORE PLEASE
A wonderful change of pace and direction…You have to read carefully to follow and that makes it all that much sweeter!!! Tks for this story, pls take pity and post soon…!!!
I read the first chapter of this story and now this one and I am completely lost. I don’t understand this one at all.
I really like this story. It’s different in tone and direction. Post some more,pls.
i like it, bette should take a chance and at least get back into her daughter’s life and then eventually into tina’s…seems like they both still love each other
I agree with Jwet, please don’t let this one end here. This is a beautiful story and you didn’t say it was only going to be 2 chapters. So pretty please continue it Val—See I’m begging. I know deep down you want a happy ending for our B&T.
It that baby can remember Bette, Bette did something right. Loving her like she was her birth mother. Bette needs to give it a chance LIKE TO SEE HOW aSH GETS THIS ALL IN LINE WITH THESE TWO THANKS
I’m glad Bette could see Angie again. But I think now it’s not time for her to accept Tina again (and Tina didn’t ask her back, either). I know love will make you forgive someone easily. But I still can’t see how Bette could forgive Tina right now.
Please continue. This is interesting and I want to read more.
slightly confusing but I got the jest. I’m really enjoying this story so far.Good Job.
Moody, quirky and unique. A film noir B&T. I want more.
Yes, continue. i think i like where it will to. Bit confusing for me in the beginning but i think i get it now.
Very well written. This is extremely interesting. I will read it as long as you post it.
Great story! I’m enjoying the dynamics between Ash and Bette. Leave it to Tina to show up and throw a monkey wrench into things.
Great story! I’m enjoying the dynamics between Ash and Bette. Leave it to Tina to show up and throw a monkey wrench into things.
Interesting, I am liking the story. Maybe it would helpful to italize the flashbacks, just so it won’t get to confusing. Please continue!
This was great,i really enjoyed it and would love for you to continue….At least Tina sees that Bette should be in Angelicas life…and it took the baby to show her!!!Hope theres more of this ..Thanks
I love all your stories, I hope you find some inspiration and write again. Thank you.
You’re amazing, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.
Wow, this story totally rocks. You have an amazing touch with character development. Please continue this – soon!
This is good and please conitinue, thanks!