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    I Need My Best Friend – Part 17

    Story written on December 22, 2004 by asalways.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=50879
    Author Notes:

    It’s the last night and then time to go home.

    Chapter Seventeen

     

    Without much conversation they had decided to go inside for dinner.  Bette started a fire while Tina started dinner.  Bette quietly entered the kitchen and started helping, occasionally glancing at Tina, wanting to say something, wondering if it would be safer to just keep quiet.  Tina knew that look that posture, Bette struggling with what she wanted to say.  She just hoped Bette wasn’t going to try to bring up their earlier conversation; she just wasn’t up for it.

     

    They had eaten, quietly, in front of the fireplace only sharing small talk about the girls or what time they should leave the next morning.

     

    As Tina started to clear their dishes Bette touched her arm, ‘I’ll do that, you relax.’

     

    ‘Thanks.’

     

    ‘It’s the least I can do; you took care of all the details for this weekend.  Did I thank you for that?’

     

    ‘Yes, more than once and you’re welcome.’

     

    ‘I’ll be right back.’

     

    Tina’s mind wandered as she sat staring at the fire.  She thought of all the changes they had undergone and wondered if they were still right for each other.  Had they ever been right for each other?  In the beginning she never doubted that she was the one, the only one, who could truly make Bette happy.  Well that hadn’t exactly held true now had it!  What was it about Candace?  No, I’m not thinking about her.  Bette isn’t seeing her anymore and I really don’t believe this was about Candace.   This is about us.  She wasn’t sure she was still the one to make Bette happy.  Bette hated to lose, was she trying to hold on just because she didn’t want to give up?  Had Bette really paid attention to who Tina had become, especially at the end, and had she realized the changes she had made for herself?  What was going to happen when every moment wasn’t filled with the push and pull from the turmoil they found themselves in?  What happens when Bette realizes she has overcome most of things that had her spiraling out of control and Tina was not the person she thought she was?

     

    Bette had come back into the room just as Tina wiped away the tears that were streaming down her cheeks.  She knew this was difficult for Tina and wished she could do something.  All she felt she had the right to do was leave the room and give Tina a few more minutes to herself.

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    1. this was a great story. I would hate to see you go but this would be a good place to end it. Ihope you decide to either continue this or start a new one. Either way thanks for the great journey. enjoy the holidays.

    5. I loved this series. Thanks! I hope you either continue with this story or sequel or write a different story.
      I liked Bette fairy tale and I’m glad Tina wasn’t fully asleep.

    6. I was holding my breathe the entire story with a pit in my tummy wondering what would happen. Great story, the loving make scene would be a great ending ;)

    7. This was so wonderful. Tears running down my face,when Bette started talkingI just knew that Tina was going to leave her. Love then together. A second chance to get it right. You can’t call this the end.Only if you promise to start another one Befor The New Yerar. Thanks for taking you time energy,and effort to make a crazy bunch of fan fiction readers happy. Merry Christmas.and a very safe New Year,

    9. I teared up, couldn’t breathe for most of it, and was hanging on by a slender thread. Thank you for writing such a heartfelt, sometimes painful, yet beautiful story of love and redemption. Your talent of evoking emotion and storytelling is immense. Happy Holidays and thank you again for this wonderful treat.

    10. This was a wonderful chapter…this whole story has been heartwrenching, but heartwarming at the same time. I have truly enjoyed every step along the way. I hope for at least one more chapter, but you do what feels right…then get busy writing your next story!!! Thanks for this…

    12. oh.. MERRY CHRISTMAS (if you celebrate it) and HAPPY NEW YEAR. And thank you for your time to write this story and sharing it with us. I have enjoyed every bit of it.

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