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Giving Up Or Giving In – Part 1
Chapter One
Tina’s attorney insisted Bette get up off the floor and stop trying to run things. As she started to stand her fingertips brushed across Tina’s stomach, she knew, instantly. Tina saw it, that flash of pure joy reflected in Bette’s eyes that rapidly turned to sorrow. She wanted to reach out to Bette, but before she could gather her thoughts Bette was walking away.
Bette looked at her attorney, ‘Give her everything she wants, no more arguing.’
As she gathered her things her attorney started to protest, she held up her hand, ‘No more arguing, give her whatever she wants and make sure there is a provision for child support. I would like the opportunity to know this child but you are not to make that a condition of support. Whether I see this child or not is totally up to Tina. Just draw up the papers and I’ll sign them.’ And with that, she was gone.
Tina started to stand, ‘I need to talk to Bette.’
‘That can wait; we should get this done now before she changes her mind.’
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‘Bette Porter’s office.’
‘James this is Bette I won’t be in for a few days. You can reach me at home or on my cell if you have to, but I really don’t want to be bothered. Tell
‘I take it things didn’t go well.’
‘I don’t think they could have gone any worse. I’ll see you in a few days.’
Later that night
Bette had been walking through the house all afternoon remembering everything that had happened there, good and bad. She remembered more good than bad, but was sure all Tina remembered was the way things ended. How did she let things get so messed up? All she wanted was Tina and their baby and as far as she was concerned, it is their baby. She thought about that last night and wondered if Tina already knew she was pregnant, she had to at least know there was a possibility. Something else to feel guilty about!
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(76 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
I say play on, play on.
Woohoo! I get to leave the first comment! I better hurry up and post. That was so great!! I love your take on Bette; her resignation is so out of character it actually works. This is very intriguing…indeed, “What happens now?” Please keep going, your dialogue and tempo are excellent. :)
I am really liking where this story is going! You go girl! Please continue….i can’t wait for more…
I’m waiting for the answer to “What happens now?” Good job, asalways!
WOW WOW very good my heart bled a bit after I read this stories I try not to cry but I can feel that I hope bette hurt and Tina but you did the good job to write Thank you ASALWAYS I can feel the LOVE for B&T.
It was good to see your name up again.
Excellent!!! Now are you going to continue??? Hope so.
WooHoo Excellent story plz continue!
I’m so glad you wrote this. I need my best friend was one of my favorite stories. Please continue with this one.
gotta love the freedom of fiction,excellant more,more,i say more!!!!!!!!!!
Wow great chapter. I glad that Tina give Bette or give both of them a chance to have a family together and have a good life together again. Hope they will good life together with their little daughter in the future. Please post soon the next one, thank you!
excellent – keep going, please
Great story, please continue
what happens now…i wanna know too, please keep going!!!
Wow, this makes so much more sense! Even though I love the drama of the show..the writers here can take things in so many different directions. Keep this going please
Ah, if only the episode had played out like this. Well since it didn’t you need to continue your story and give us all a bit of hope.
Yes, that would have been perfect for the episode.
What a treat to see your name again!!! I had a smile on my face before I even read the chapter, because I knew it was going to be excellent…God I love it when I’m right!!! Thanks for coming back to us, and of course we want to to keep playing with this, silly!
Well I wish you were writing the show I would have like to see that much more than what they wrote… Please continue with this
great story! I hope you continue. Thank you for writing this.
This is great. Please continue, soon.
Beautiful work!!