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    Giving Up Or Giving In – Part 1

    Story written on March 9, 2005 by asalways.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=52514
    Author Notes:

    Episode – Loneliest Number
    Just one little touch could have changed so much.

     

    ‘And what Bette, we’ll see each other every other holiday and weekends when you pick up your daughter?’

     

    ‘Daughter?’

     

    Tina walked over to Bette and sat next to her.  She took her hand and placed it across her stomach.  ‘This is your daughter Bette and I won’t try to keep her from you.  All I ask of you is that if you are going to be a part of her life you be a part of her life.  Do you understand?’

     

    ‘Yes, thank you; I will do everything possible to be a good parent.  I’m just a little afraid.’

     

    ‘Why?’

     

    ‘I thought you would be there to make sure I didn’t mess up.’

     

    ‘You’ll be fine.’

     

    Tina saw the tears in Bette’s eyes and took her hand.

     

    ‘I’m sorry I didn’t tell you, it was wrong of me to think I could keep this from you.’

     

    ‘Why did you do it without me?’

     

    ‘I was afraid you couldn’t handle another miscarriage.  I wanted to wait until I felt everything was going to be all right.  That was wrong of me, I’m sorry.’

     

    ‘Could I see the papers now, I need to know that you and the baby are provided for.’

     

    ‘I just need a few more minutes.  I think you should know I used Marcus Allenwood again.’

     

    ‘You really wanted this to be our baby.’

     

    ‘Yes Bette, I didn’t plan on being alone.  It’s just the way things turned out.  I didn’t know you were having an affair, I didn’t know you would choose Candace.’

     

    ‘I’m sorry it took me so long to come to my senses.  I know you don’t want to hear it, but I always loved you, I never loved her.  I still love you.’

     

    ‘I needed to come here tonight because I didn’t like the way things happened today, I thought we should talk about the baby and I wondered why you relented so quickly.  I thought I could make this baby mine even though she started out as ours, I was wrong.  I knew that the moment you realized I’m pregnant.  Sitting there, after you left, listening to the attorneys turning our life together into nothing more than a list of assets I knew things were moving too fast.  I know you love me, but I need to know if you’re in love with me.’

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    2. Woohoo! I get to leave the first comment! I better hurry up and post. That was so great!! I love your take on Bette; her resignation is so out of character it actually works. This is very intriguing…indeed, “What happens now?” Please keep going, your dialogue and tempo are excellent. :)

    5. WOW WOW very good my heart bled a bit after I read this stories I try not to cry but I can feel that I hope bette hurt and Tina but you did the good job to write Thank you ASALWAYS I can feel the LOVE for B&T.

    10. Wow great chapter. I glad that Tina give Bette or give both of them a chance to have a family together and have a good life together again. Hope they will good life together with their little daughter in the future. Please post soon the next one, thank you!

    14. Wow, this makes so much more sense! Even though I love the drama of the show..the writers here can take things in so many different directions. Keep this going please

    17. What a treat to see your name again!!! I had a smile on my face before I even read the chapter, because I knew it was going to be excellent…God I love it when I’m right!!! Thanks for coming back to us, and of course we want to to keep playing with this, silly!

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