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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT14
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She reached around and released the clasp of her bra, the straps dropping from her shoulders; she pulled the lacy article from her breasts, held it out and dropped it to the floor.
She heard a moan from behind the curtain, smiled to herself; reveling in the effect that her own part was playing in this seduction. She slipped her fingers under the thin straps at the front of her thong, pulling the material out slightly, she then slowly slid her fingers around to the sides, she again gently swayed her hips as she unhurriedly brought the material down over the thighs, she once again bent forward to ease the flimsy garment down her long slim legs. The pounding heart turning into a resounding thudding traveling from her chest throughout her body, making her legs weak, her hands clammy, her head spin and her centre ache with the most erotic pleasure pain she could ever remember.
Bette watched through the curtain as Tina gracefully ascended the platform and laid face down, she watched as Tina bent her arms in front of her and leaned her face on top of her arms. Bette took a deep breath as she gazed the full length of Tina, lying naked upon the floating platform, her breath caught in her throat as the vision before her became forever engrained in the memory bank of her mind.
Bette edged her throbbing body forward, her hand gently parting the curtains to reveal her lover in the flesh. She could see that Tina’s eyes were closed, her breath held in her chest at the marvel before, her heart surged with so much love at that very moment. She quietly walked completely around the platform, taking in every single angle, her eyes roaming every inch of the creamy skin.
When Bette reached Tina’s feet, she leant forward and placed a tender kiss upon each sole, relishing each toe and running her tongue the length of her foot, along the outer edge toward her ankle, gently teasing the soft area beside her Achilles, she kept her hands behind her back, almost afraid that if she touched Tina she would come completely undone, she wanted to taste, to savor, to devour, to orally caress, to kiss and love every inch.
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Excellent!
sexy f***ing HOT!!! loving this story! great!! pls post soon
damn I had to pick up my jaw from the floor!!!!! that was FRIGGIN HOTT!!!!!!!!!!! LORD HA MERCY!!!!! At one point I was so hoping for some ruff, animalistic sex, then I remembered they’re reconnecting….maybe over there long weekend together. AGAIN DAMN THAT WAS FRIGGIN, FUCKIN HOTT!!!!!!!!!!
Jobadge, I read that very slowly as I wanted the imagery to fully realize in my mind and it was well worth it even if I don’t win any speed reading prizes. Just one thing, is Bette the only one with access to the tape from the security cameras? If not, James may not mind working Saturday.
I can see it now: “Curators Gone Wild!”
Van you can say that again,Just kidding that was so Tender and very very sexy. That could blow your mind. thanks
OMG, Jo what are you trying to do to us woman–that was so SENSUAL and HOT!! I think I might need to borrow Ally’s oxygen supply after that chapter. The way you described the art work was brilliant. You are one fantastic writer. Thank you for this beautiful story.
Oh my God…I am most definitely going to go look for a girlfriend who works in an art gallery!! That was absolutely gorgeous to read…thank you.
sexy and very hot
Massive sensory overload. Not even an ice cold shower is going to help. Keep them coming.
f***ing amazing!!!!
w…o…w… WOW!! I totally agree with funnyone… your words totally slow me down in reading and transpiring the image into my mind a slowly… love the way you write :D
Jo == staggeringly hot sex and research …wow . that was one of the most sensual things i have read in a very long time. Thank you SO much for that and how sensitively you portray bette and tina
ok….now you definitely have our attention!!! That was amazing…truely amazing…bravo!!
***GULP*** my throat dried up from my jaw being on the floor!!! i’m lucky to still be breathing. i really don’t know what to say except um…. WOW! SHIT! GODDAMN! MUTHFUKA!! that chap was so incredibly sweet, loving, erotic, sensual, and most of all beautiful. thank you once again for making my day. good night kiddies. please post soon. PEACE.
“Intense,Sensual,and Erotic”…Your own words…and i cant think of any better to describe what ive just read…It litterally takes me my breath away! Thanks for putting yet another Smile on my face,
Oh my God, the intensity and the sensual eroticism was quite mind-blowing. I read it slowly and it magnified the intoxication of the experience. I agree with funnyone, I hope Bette is the only one with access to the security camera tapes, otherwise, James is going to enjoy working Saturday.
What a fine way to depict the intricate relationship between voyeurism and exhibitionism; add a little light SM to this and you get HOT DAMN that was sexy!!!
Wonderful Jo. What am i saying – it was the hotest thing i’ve read in ages!(and its not because i have a museum fetish – though maybe i wasted my time when i did work in one!)
Umm, yes Jobadge. I need to sign up for that gallery tour immediately! Also, I want to take that tour as many times as it’s being offered…uh, because I love art! It’s one of the coldest nights in Canada and I am actually sweating. Kuddos to you. Damn!
Damn that was fucking hot and sexy, love it!
Uhhh….wow! Love this story.
What an awesome job. Yes that plateform works nicely now we need to put it on the road. I want it in my backyard as well as yours. I love how intense the feelings come through the way you have them communicating with all five of their senses. Awesome. Thanks Jo
This was indeed very intense and very erotic – one off the best chapters ever!!!! The way you can create a scene between these two are amazing, I get totally spellbound (does is make sence in english?)…..They are gonna rock the dancefloor at Milk, better call the firedep. already LOL….Please post soon and take care
Read it four times now, still can’t come up with words it was that moving.