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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT20
Tina tightened her arms around Bette’s shoulders, her hand on the back of Bette’s head, holding her close to her ear, enjoying the feel and sensation of her being close, enjoying the feeling of her hot breath permeating into her ear, causing the familiar shivers to run down her spine, enjoying listening to the words and the reminiscing of their days love.
“Tell me about the rest baby” Tina whispered back, she could tell that Bette was having difficulty controlling, not only her voice, but her bodily reactions to their closeness and their gyrating hips, the dizzy combination pulling them both into an erotic bubble, which could burst at anytime .
“Oh god T, my body is on fire, I was trying to Oh fuck T, you feel good” Bette brought both of her hands to Tina’s hips, pulling her in, moving her hands to cover her cheeks, squeezing, drawing her closer still, allowing them to roam over the curves as their bodies moved to the seductive music, her thoughts jumbled as she felt Tina’s centre moving against the front of her thigh, slowly moving up and down, her own centre also pressed against Tina’s hip, Tina’s movements causing pressure on her own centre.
Tina decided to take the reigns, “were you going to tell me, that you then decided that you would jump onto that podium and pick out my favorite song, and do the most seductive, erotic, bewitching, sensual and s t i m u l a t i n g pole dance that I have ever seen, or were you going to tell me about how you carried me, with my legs wrapped tightly around your waist, to a quiet corner of this very club and fucked me, how you knew exactly what I needed and you gave it to me baby, you give me everything I could ever need” Tina’s tongue gently edged Bette’s ear, taking the lobe into her mouth, the soft warm air from her nostrils seeping through Bette’s ear into consciousness, the hair on the back of her neck standing to attention, warmth voyaging throughout her body, docking at her central port, a pounding in her chest to match the thudding in her southern regions.
Tina felt Bette’s body movements alter slightly, the acute awareness that she had of every nuance of Bette Porter, she knew that she was verging on the extreme edge, did she need to be guided over, did she want to go over, she definitely wanted to go over and so did Tina, she knew she was also close, the words that Bette had said to her still warm in her ears, the thigh grinding into her centre, the music their hips were currently still gyrating too, she was eternally grateful to whoever gave Bette Porter the ability to seductively dance, seductively murmur in her ear, seductively caress her body and reduce them both to erotic quivering bodies, all at the same time. The woman was a master, but this master needed navigating.
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(26 votes, average: 4.23 out of 5)
this is the bette and tina we want and hope to have them in s4
THANKYOU, THANKYOU, THANKYOU!!!
Wow!
Breathtakingly beautiful. Sensuous. Thanks.
After all these chapters (each one exceptional on its own..)you continue to give us some of the best writting on this site…I loved it.
Absolutely PERFECT!
Well Jo, that shook me up so much I couldn’t even spell my own name to log on the first time.
Fantastic!!!!!!
hotttttttttttttttt
Absolutely awe inspiring. That was beautiful. It sent chills up and down my spine and brought tears to my eyes more than once. The pure emotion grabbed me and left me breathless. Thanks for giving us the B & T we see so little of on the show.
So many different laps to choose from. I would have to choose the gallery and then my next choice would be Tina sitting on Bette’s lap and slipping her fingers into her in front of their friends. I sure wish you were the creator (along with ally) of the show instead of what’s her name. There is so much darkness in this world along with the darkness that has now become the L word. Thanks to you guys there is some light in the darkness. By Keeping these two together brings joy to my heart. Thanks for taking the time to write these wonderful stories.
Wow that was beautiufl and perfect, love the love they have. OK post soon please, thanks!
Jo, this chapter is just so amazing. I am in awe of your writing ability. You have Bette and Tina display their love for each other in a very sensual way. I also liked the talk that Bette and Alice had about finding your soul mate.
i’m all caught up now! ( so you can write some more!) Mate – that was great!
breathless
Nice, very Nice!
In one word incredible.
amazing story!! I wonder if we can get that kind of love, lust, desire, want, need…. into season 4… great story! it was one of my favorites!
you need to get a job with ileane and show her how to write……great job!!!
Amazing!
Amazing!
INTENSELY HOTT, EMOTIONAL AND WONDERFULLY LOVING!!!!!!!!
Wow! That was amazing. You have a talent for creating the perfect fusion of beautiful, loving and intensely emotional moments with an almost embarassingly powerful sexuality. Just breathtaking.
perfect…this is B&T that i love and miss
Why can’t we get this on the show, for fuck sake! .. but thank god for fanfiction, and talented writers like yourself!, you keep me sane from all this tibette madness.
ee by gum — not bad for a yokel Jo. I know how brilliant you are with working with you but even so you leave me speechless when i read your work. No words are adaquate to describe how good your writing is. right — flattery over — get on with that other thing — you know the hottest part of our story so far….. the one you are writing on a flame proof computer. oh — have i mentioned that this was bloody brilliant ?/
Hey mate I’m back, sort of :o)) This was…..just brilliant, absolutely amazing and beautiful. I truly agree with your breast-mate ” No words are adaquate to describe how good your writing is”….WOW this chapter was so intense, erotic and very powerful. Fuck Ilene when we have writers like you and AE…..By the way I doesn’t hope this is meant to be The End because I got that feeling when I read the last of the chapter….You’ve to continue, you’ve promised me more with THE JEANS!!! :o)) Take care
I wish this is what we could see onS3, but my hopes are set on S4. Till then i read your story, to keep me happy.
You have got to keep us happy for 10 months now, I do believe you all can do it. This was very vwry amazing. thanks
Now I have to remember to breathe. I am listening to Bird York singing “In The Deep” from “Crash” and I feel that I am out there with Bette and Tina , just spinning. I would love for your story to be one entire episode in TLW with the same dialogue and narration. Another epi could be your collaborative story w/Ally. Then I don’t care what would happen.
Thank you for this rare glimpse of a once in a lifetime love. Something we all hope we are lucky enough to find.
If only IC and Co. had you on their writing team. Life would be so much more the fictional reality TLW should be. I can’t wait for more of Jobadge!!