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    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT20

    Story written on March 21, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60065
    Author Notes:

    Which was your favourite lap of the marathon?

    Tina dropped her hands to Bette’s leather clad hips, pulling them closer, knowing the pressure would intensify her current state, their heads still close, mouths to ears, their breathing fiendish, ragged and heavy.

    The bodies surrounding them on the dancefloor completely oblivious to their rising fire, they continued with their dances, their fleeting gaze casting across the crowded room, past the couple whose bodies were about to explode.

    Tina moved her hips gently as Bette’s breathing began to become mingled with animalist moans, her hands digging into Tina’s bottom, urging her on, urging them both on, Tina felt and heard the familiar change in Bette’s breathing a sure sign that her body would begin to shudder at any moment, Tina ground her own centre onto Bette’s thigh, the knowledge of Bette verging automatically bringing her own peak within reach, she moved their hips in synchronization, the words of the aptly titled Naughty Song currently pounding through the speakers was a mere fleeting reference as Bette’s head flung backward, her eyes closed, her mouth open, heavy breaths surging into the hot, sweaty atmosphere of the dancefloor.

    Tina held tightly onto Bette’s quaking body, her reactions being mirrored as Tina’s own body gently let go, her breath landing on Bette’s shoulder, their arms tightly encircling one another, silent declaration that their reciprocal summit had been reached.

    Their bodies continued to sway, slowly retreating, their silence continued, their arms wrapped around each other tightly, kisses being placed on hair, cheeks and ears, intermittently grazing lips as their eyes gazed, searched and found.

    Couples looked on at the loving couple seemingly united in their exotic sway, unaware of the quiet intensity they had just shared and continued to share, the persona of this couple being such that Bette was viewed as the strong, dominant figure while Tina was quietly at her side, happy to move with the flow, however, once their front door had shut their roles altered slightly, Tina becoming the homemaker, the support, the guide to the course of their life together, while Bette stepped back to allow Tina this role, happy and content to be fussed over, told when and where they were going and happy for Tina to lead.

    Just like last night when Tina was telling Bette how she absolutely loved the way that no one else saw the Bette that she saw, the vulnerable, the playful, the one whose demons show, the one that needed a hug at the end of a bad day, the tender and loving Bette who bought small gifts and hid them in silly places for Tina to find, who chased after her to pull her socks off so she could kiss her toes, who phoned her in between meetings just to tell her how much she loved her, those precious sides to her saved for when they were alone.

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    10. Absolutely awe inspiring. That was beautiful. It sent chills up and down my spine and brought tears to my eyes more than once. The pure emotion grabbed me and left me breathless. Thanks for giving us the B & T we see so little of on the show.

    11. So many different laps to choose from. I would have to choose the gallery and then my next choice would be Tina sitting on Bette’s lap and slipping her fingers into her in front of their friends. I sure wish you were the creator (along with ally) of the show instead of what’s her name. There is so much darkness in this world along with the darkness that has now become the L word. Thanks to you guys there is some light in the darkness. By Keeping these two together brings joy to my heart. Thanks for taking the time to write these wonderful stories.

    13. Jo, this chapter is just so amazing. I am in awe of your writing ability. You have Bette and Tina display their love for each other in a very sensual way. I also liked the talk that Bette and Alice had about finding your soul mate.

    23. Wow! That was amazing. You have a talent for creating the perfect fusion of beautiful, loving and intensely emotional moments with an almost embarassingly powerful sexuality. Just breathtaking.

    25. Why can’t we get this on the show, for fuck sake! .. but thank god for fanfiction, and talented writers like yourself!, you keep me sane from all this tibette madness.

    26. ee by gum — not bad for a yokel Jo. I know how brilliant you are with working with you but even so you leave me speechless when i read your work. No words are adaquate to describe how good your writing is. right — flattery over — get on with that other thing — you know the hottest part of our story so far….. the one you are writing on a flame proof computer. oh — have i mentioned that this was bloody brilliant ?/

    27. Hey mate I’m back, sort of :o)) This was…..just brilliant, absolutely amazing and beautiful. I truly agree with your breast-mate ” No words are adaquate to describe how good your writing is”….WOW this chapter was so intense, erotic and very powerful. Fuck Ilene when we have writers like you and AE…..By the way I doesn’t hope this is meant to be The End because I got that feeling when I read the last of the chapter….You’ve to continue, you’ve promised me more with THE JEANS!!! :o)) Take care

    30. Now I have to remember to breathe. I am listening to Bird York singing “In The Deep” from “Crash” and I feel that I am out there with Bette and Tina , just spinning. I would love for your story to be one entire episode in TLW with the same dialogue and narration. Another epi could be your collaborative story w/Ally. Then I don’t care what would happen.

    32. If only IC and Co. had you on their writing team. Life would be so much more the fictional reality TLW should be. I can’t wait for more of Jobadge!!

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