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    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT27

    Story written on April 25, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=60594
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    Love on a bed of rose petals…


    I thought we could spend the evening together… PT27


    Previously…


    Tina’s head rested back on Bette’s shoulder as her body shook, the unexpected intensity of her orgasm surprising her, thankful for the arm anchoring her in safety as her body floated through its oblivion, to slowly and gently subside.

    Bette kissed the side of Tina’s face, grateful that her own body had managed to remain stable during the intense union; she whispered endearments closely into her lover’s ear, she tenderly removed her finger from under Tina’s dress, she took the finger between her lips, tasting the unique bouquet of her very own precious oyster.

    Bette reached forward to the misted glass and wrote, within the condensation, ‘TK 4 BP’.

    Tina opened her eyes, watching as Bette wrote the familiar idiom; she smiled as she brought her own finger to the phrase and completed it by writing underneath, ‘FOREVER’.

    ………………………………………………………………………………………….

    As the grey haired woman stepped into the lift with her elderly balding husband her eyes laid upon the two women standing in the corner, completely engrossed in a very deep, slow passionate kiss, their arms encircling one another, hands traveling up and down, their lips seeming in complete synchronization, both completely oblivious to the fact they were no longer alone in the lift.

    The woman’s elbow nudged her husband, her head nodding toward the passionate embrace, "I remember when you used to kiss me like that Bert!" she gave a slight chuckle, a roll and shake of her head as she remembered days gone by.

    "But Ethel, that’s two women kissing!" he replied, wanting to sound offended but not able to break his gaze away all the same.

    "Doesn’t matter, when you’re in love, that…" she nodded again toward the embracing women, "… that is how you kiss, look at them Bert, they don’t even know we’re here, they are so engrossed in each other, they have absolutely no concept of what’s around them."

    The door of the lift slid open, the elderly couple stepped out, Ethel glanced back, sighing and smiling at the kissing couple, as they slowly retreated down the corridor the sound low as she turned to her aging husband and said, "you don’t kiss me like that anymore Bert, I think you should…"

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    1. Congratulation on your award. These are trying times and we need all the good stories we can get, . I believe we all need cold showers thanks so much and enjoy your vacation. thanks

    5. Hot!?! that was on f***ing fire! ..or was that just my underwear after reading that chapter! Congrats on your award, after reading this I think you better dust off your trophy shelf cos I’ve a feeling this wont be your last one! Thanks for posting!

    8. Jo, are you trying to give Mother a heart attack with these continuous amazingly descriptive detailed lovemaking scenes? Well you haven’t succeeded yet. So that means you have to keep trying and trying, which entails writing more and more HOT love scenes. If you are up to the challenge of writing them, then I will read them hoping not to die from sheer pleasure. You so deserve this award and I couldn’t be happier for you or prouder of you, my good friend. You and JT have a well deserved holiday together in Egypt.

    9. Well Jo, you did indeed set the bar high and cleared it with room to spare. So the Olympics don’t give out medals for hot lesabian sex scenes, but this site does and you surely deserve the gold. Congratulations on a well deserved win. P.S. Have a great time in Egypt, rest assured that the security will be at its highest. That should leave you free to concentrate on your research. Can’t wait for you to publish your results.

    14. After reading this the first time I was left totally speechless let alone weak. I then read the chapter agian the next day and had the same reaction. I figured that I better go ahead and leave a comment before attempting to read it again. I thought that I may not be able to respond because I had died of after shocks to the brain. I felt like I was in the same room with Bette and Tina. I could feel the heat and arousal of these two. My senses were overwhelmed from this chapter. Jo, you hit all five senses and possibly a few other senses that scientist have not discovered yet. I need a break and a beer.

    17. Wow! You blow me away! I am in awe and oh so envious. That’s the first time I had to stop reading a chapter to go and have a cold shower before I’d even finished it. After numerous showers today I am feeling physically clean although my mind is beautifully dirty! Thanks!

    19. OMG! That was so hot! I should not have read this at work. Congratulations on your award. It is so deserved. Thanks for sharing your talent. Enjoy your vacation. I’ll be waiting patiently waiting for your next chapter.

    20. Hey….That was amazeing…..it was Sensual,and Erotic..it was damn sexy…and its the reason that you, and only you deserved that award………You constantly raise the bar with each chapter you write….and you consistantly meet the challenge of the next one….What can i say hun!…Its awesome!

    22. HOLY COW, is right! geez! HHHOOOTTTT. sexy hot. romantic sexy hot. tender romantic sexy hot. loving tender romantic sexy hot. wow. Have fun in Egypt! If you haven’t been to Egypt before, make sure to try Fool (it is a fava bean dish with pita) VERY GOOD!!

    24. FU£K Jo! Cold shower – Hah! So do you get sent a golden shower head for your trophy? You surpassed yourself – & Tell your woman I think she must be VERY happy! Hope Egypt is inspiring.

    25. christ almighty, that was I don’t have words that have not already been said. DAAAAYYYUUUMMM, PHEW!!! It’s hott in here! Congrats on the award, so well deserved, At the moment you are in my top three best sex scene writers in fanfic and will probably be always. Have fun in Egypt I so want to go there!

    26. well that was so fucking hot that i forgot you sent me half of it on sunday and i nearly passed out then. your writing is so amazing because it is the only one that makes me feel like a voyeur – simply brilliant .and yes i told you weeks ago you would win the best sex award ha ha !!i think what is truly amazing is that yuou write these amazing scenes despite being off work sick and never once complaining about it — unlike me who whinges if i have an aching thumb nail.i hope you and JT have a great time in Egypt – enjoy the research. and i will make you a promise — i will have written half of Three is not a crowd by the time you return. You have become a dear, true and trusted friend. xx

    28. Breathe, breathe, I have to breathe now…girl this was really intense. Well JT is one hell of a lucky girl, congratulations again on your award and I wish both of you a very pleasant vacation in Egypt. Thanks for sharing this with us.

    29. JoBage, A well deserved slap on the back for your wonderful story and your award. You have captured the real romance and love affair between these women. The depth and breadth of their passionate intanglements and lust and longing and loving they lavish on each other are paramount in your descriptive storytelling. And this latest chapter only proves how brilliant and unique your voice is. Firstly the slow and torturous strip tease, secondly the silk stocking seduction and finally the tantalizing restraints and mirror images. I do need a very cold shower now. Please continue this fabulous fan fiction, Your Loyal and lusty Fan. Sheer pleasure and enjoyment.

    32. You leave me with no choice…..OMG, OMG, OMG and OMG!!!!!! Are you trying to kill me Jo?? and their night is still young, so I’m reeeeally looking forward to the next post. Once again congrats on the award mate – you’re the best to these NC-17 we all love so much :o))

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