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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT26
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I thought we could spend the evening together PT26
Previously
“Well T, you have most definitely achieved that, you look absolutely stunning. You do realize that I may not be able to keep to my tight reign tonight dont you?”
Tina laughed, “Im counting on it baby, that bed of rose petals will not go to waste if I have anything to do with it”
Bette pulled Tina in close, breathing in her scent, she leaned back and smiled, “T, there is just one thing I really have to do!” she said seriously.
“Whats that?” Tina asked with a raised eyebrow.
Bette lowered her head, resting her nose in the centre of Tinas cleavage, the familiar aroma permeating her nostrils, teasing the senses, her body reacting to the seasoned bouquet of her lover as she caressed her nose up and down the deep line between her breasts.
Tina looked down at the top of the dark curls, her fingers caressing the back of Bettes neck; she smiled to herself, thinking, five senses to be aroused, three down, two to go
Tina leaned her head back as Bettes lips placed small gentle kisses on the rising flesh of her breasts, her heart beat gaining some pace, her breathing becoming deeper as she opened her mouth to allow the breaths to mingle with the evening air, “Fuck Bette, you really need to stop doing that”
“Mmmm, T” came a muffled reply, Bettes hands sloped around Tinas waist, pulling her in closer.
“Bette, please” Tina placed her hands on Bettes shoulders, attempting to nudge her backwards, to break contact with the breasts she was gently ravaging.
Bette looked up, her eyes having a glazed appearance, “T I was enjoying myself then, you have uh,” her eyes glanced into Tinas eyes then back down to the heavily rising and falling chest before her, smiling with a clearer mind, she quietly said, ” you look fucking amazing”
“Thank you Bette, youre looking pretty hot yourself, you know” Tinas arms once again encircled Bettes neck, as Bettes arms remained around Tinas waist, pulling her in closer, their bodies in a full length embrace, Bettes hands roaming up and down Tinas back as their eyes searched one anothers.
“I think we should get going, T” Bette leaned forward for a gentle kiss on the glossy lips before her.
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OMFG, That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG SO HHHOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Good lord why did I read this at work? Totally hot!
I have nothing to say, what can you say…after all those words, mine seem inadequate…but tks, pls don’t end this run of chapters, we need this feeling…
Should not read at work…god lord…my throat is parched…blue….lawd have mercy!!!!! Too hot, must post soon!!!!
Mmmm what to say that i havnt already…Your writting seriously blows me away,…At times leaves me a little speechless….not to mention breathless…..It would be a privilage for ANY fan fiction site to have you as a writter……as it is to have you as a friend…Thankyou.
Excellent, as always. Thank you.
Absolutely flawless!!!
One word: exquisite.
Jo, although real-life crusctaceans make me nervous (I wasn’t even allowed to swim in Lake Erie even though we were on its shores when I was a kid-too filthy). But your fictional versions were delightful. There was a time when pearls were more precious than diamonds, more beautiful and more rare, and considered a gift from the gods. Thanks for the reminder.
OK, how do you keep outdoing yourself againa and again?
Jo, that was a deeply profound chapter. Your descriptive words leave me tongue tied. I just can’t tell you enough what a brilliant writer I think you are. I am very proud to be able to call you my friend.
OMFG, that was too HOT for words. I can not believe that I didn’t fall over while reading. You have surpassed anything I’ve read in a while. Thank you.
wow……….
there is no such thing as ‘too long’ when it comes to this story!! great chapter!!
OMG! You Brits are something else. I have to remember to breathe.
holy hell…
Love this story. WOW!!!!
Well, if this chapter doesn’t make you want to eat your vegetables I don’t know what will. Damn! Please post soon, Jobadge.
I think I almost passed out!!!That intensity,….my knees are weak.Have mercy, where did u learn to describe like that…thank goodness for adjectives! That chapter blew my mind,I;m still reeling…is there a doctor in the house?!?!
You’re the best Jobadge! Everything about your writing, the story, your attention to, and description of, every detail is breathtaking. More Please!
WHERE DO I START….HOTT IS SOOOO INADEQUATE!!!!!!! DAMN GET THEM BACK TO THE HOTEL…PRONTO!!!!!!!! I’m baffled, speechless (almost).
Oh dear god, I will never view food the same way again. And lord forbid me if I ever go to a restaurant because my brain will be working overtime to keep from visualizing Bette and Tina. This is tooooo hot. Hey Jo you should send in your name to write for the show. It seems that they are looking for writers. You and a couple others could do wonders to the show and my heart. Bette and Tina with your writing can turn anything they do into an erotic adventure. Great story and chapter.
Holy freaking cow so fucking hot, love it!
Wow! Seriously wow! That was intense. Just overwhelming. I managed to get rather sidetracked at one point imagining eating all sorts of different foods from between gorgeous breasts. Thanks!
oh my fucking god — what the hell effect did that just have on me — and at 7am ! your talent is just bloody awesome. though i do believe an earlier draft of yours had cornish pasties and clotted cream as the foods of choice. a rare talent jo thank you !
for the love of god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hotttttttttttttttttt
does anyone have a new mind..? cause mine is blown!!!
Wow, that was HOT and BEAUTIFUL!!
Hey mate do you think I mind the chapter being a bit longer than expected???? LOL…..so mindblowing and amazing this one and you are both a writer and a cook – do you’ve more up your sleeves, I bet you do and I can’t wait :o))
All I can say is “J” is a lucky woman. Anybody who can conjure up this stuff must possess many talents. Cheers to you…you’ve knocked me senseless.
WOW!!!!THAT WAS A TRUELY AWESOME CHAPTER….GREAT JOB,YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so hot I passed out there….for 100 minutes or so
Mmmmmnnnnn Asparagus – can’t tell you how many good shirts i’ve ruined eating asparagus. & Tina Parmesan Asparagus & Silk don’t go with out leading to permenant ruination of silk ….but i’m guessing you knoe that you naughy girl