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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT26
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Bette shook her head, “sorry sweetheart, but that accolade belongs to you, I gave up that title when you walked out onto the balcony earlier”
Tina smiled at the unexpected response from her partner.
Bette continued her intent look into Tinas eyes, “do you realize how much I want to slip my fingers inside you right now?”
Tina lent her head back against the hard shell of the lift, her eyes closed as the words that Bette uttered sank in; she felt lips against her exposed neck, a tongue trailing up toward her ear.
The small ding of the lift signified the reaching of their destination, the sound seeming to reverberate in the silence of the small metal box as the doors of the lift opened. Bette begrudgingly moved her lips away from Tinas neck with a small groan, her body continuing to react to the mesmerizing sight that was her heavenly partner.
“Why couldnt we have been on a higher floor, so the journey down would have taken longer!” Bettes annoyance was evident in her voice as she took Tinas hand and exited the lift, walking into the cool foyer.
“Baby, we were on the top floor Hey, Bette, stop a second” Tina pulled back on the hand to stop Bette from walking any faster.
Bette stopped and turned to look at Tina, a look of apology in her eyes.
“Bette, whats up?” Tina asked noticing Bettes slight change of mood, she cupped her cheek, smoothing her thumb across the cheekbone. No one else in the foyer existed, two women standing in front of each other, gazing into one anothers eyes, lost and in love.
Bette looked up to the ceiling and laughed, feeling like a petulant child who is being grounded, “Im just being silly T, ignore me. Ill be fine in a minute.”
“Bette, talk to me, be honest with me, share what youre thinking, please?” Tina spoke quietly, wanting to know the thoughts that were going through Bettes mind, she had an idea but she wanted Bette to be open and voice them.
Bette looked back into Tinas pleading eyes, how could she refuse this woman, but what she was about to say was silly, childish and when she said it out loud it would sound like a child not getting their own way. “Its silly”
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OMFG, That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG SO HHHOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Good lord why did I read this at work? Totally hot!
I have nothing to say, what can you say…after all those words, mine seem inadequate…but tks, pls don’t end this run of chapters, we need this feeling…
Should not read at work…god lord…my throat is parched…blue….lawd have mercy!!!!! Too hot, must post soon!!!!
Mmmm what to say that i havnt already…Your writting seriously blows me away,…At times leaves me a little speechless….not to mention breathless…..It would be a privilage for ANY fan fiction site to have you as a writter……as it is to have you as a friend…Thankyou.
Excellent, as always. Thank you.
Absolutely flawless!!!
One word: exquisite.
Jo, although real-life crusctaceans make me nervous (I wasn’t even allowed to swim in Lake Erie even though we were on its shores when I was a kid-too filthy). But your fictional versions were delightful. There was a time when pearls were more precious than diamonds, more beautiful and more rare, and considered a gift from the gods. Thanks for the reminder.
OK, how do you keep outdoing yourself againa and again?
Jo, that was a deeply profound chapter. Your descriptive words leave me tongue tied. I just can’t tell you enough what a brilliant writer I think you are. I am very proud to be able to call you my friend.
OMFG, that was too HOT for words. I can not believe that I didn’t fall over while reading. You have surpassed anything I’ve read in a while. Thank you.
wow……….
there is no such thing as ‘too long’ when it comes to this story!! great chapter!!
OMG! You Brits are something else. I have to remember to breathe.
holy hell…
Love this story. WOW!!!!
Well, if this chapter doesn’t make you want to eat your vegetables I don’t know what will. Damn! Please post soon, Jobadge.
I think I almost passed out!!!That intensity,….my knees are weak.Have mercy, where did u learn to describe like that…thank goodness for adjectives! That chapter blew my mind,I;m still reeling…is there a doctor in the house?!?!
You’re the best Jobadge! Everything about your writing, the story, your attention to, and description of, every detail is breathtaking. More Please!
WHERE DO I START….HOTT IS SOOOO INADEQUATE!!!!!!! DAMN GET THEM BACK TO THE HOTEL…PRONTO!!!!!!!! I’m baffled, speechless (almost).
Oh dear god, I will never view food the same way again. And lord forbid me if I ever go to a restaurant because my brain will be working overtime to keep from visualizing Bette and Tina. This is tooooo hot. Hey Jo you should send in your name to write for the show. It seems that they are looking for writers. You and a couple others could do wonders to the show and my heart. Bette and Tina with your writing can turn anything they do into an erotic adventure. Great story and chapter.
Holy freaking cow so fucking hot, love it!
Wow! Seriously wow! That was intense. Just overwhelming. I managed to get rather sidetracked at one point imagining eating all sorts of different foods from between gorgeous breasts. Thanks!
oh my fucking god — what the hell effect did that just have on me — and at 7am ! your talent is just bloody awesome. though i do believe an earlier draft of yours had cornish pasties and clotted cream as the foods of choice. a rare talent jo thank you !
for the love of god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hotttttttttttttttttt
does anyone have a new mind..? cause mine is blown!!!
Wow, that was HOT and BEAUTIFUL!!
Hey mate do you think I mind the chapter being a bit longer than expected???? LOL…..so mindblowing and amazing this one and you are both a writer and a cook – do you’ve more up your sleeves, I bet you do and I can’t wait :o))
All I can say is “J” is a lucky woman. Anybody who can conjure up this stuff must possess many talents. Cheers to you…you’ve knocked me senseless.
WOW!!!!THAT WAS A TRUELY AWESOME CHAPTER….GREAT JOB,YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so hot I passed out there….for 100 minutes or so
Mmmmmnnnnn Asparagus – can’t tell you how many good shirts i’ve ruined eating asparagus. & Tina Parmesan Asparagus & Silk don’t go with out leading to permenant ruination of silk ….but i’m guessing you knoe that you naughy girl