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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT26
“Could you arrange that for me?” Bette asked her new best friend, the concierge, giving him a wink, “well do the photo thing now, OK?”
“Of course, Miss Porter, of course, no problem at all.”
Bette made her way back to Tina, smiling, “T, he wants to take our photo because he said how beautiful we look, something about adding it to his collection of beautiful hotel guests”
“What?”
“He wants to take our photo, come on T, humour him, hes uh managed to arrange things for me”
Tina rolled her eyes, “ok”
Bette winked at her and smiled, “thanks T, hes sweet really, he did help me out with the petals” she said, reiterating how much she owed him.
They walked over by the white marble obelisk, the floral arrangement atop flowing with white lilys, the aroma strong but gentle on the senses, as they stood, Bette allowed her arm to encircle Tinas waist pulling her in closer as she looked into her lovers eyes, Tina glanced up at the adoring face, their eyes transmitting so many emotions, plain for anyone who passed to see.
For Bette and Tina the foyer became silent, the hustle and bustle of new arrivals and guests, porters and staff dimming into the background as they stood looking at one another, oblivious to onlookers who had already noticed the two beautiful women exit the lift, who walked hand in hand through the foyer, to now stand momentarily together, awaiting the concierge to capture them in print, totally absorbed in the sight before them, little did they realize that their image had already been imprinted into the cameras memory card several times over already, the worshipping look between them the envy of all who looked on.
“Miss Porter, please look this way” the concierge called to them, rousing them from the intense silent look they shared. With a knowing smile that conveyed the fact they were mesmerized by each other they grudgingly pulled their glances away from their partners eyes and looked toward the camera, the effects of their closeness apparent on each face as their smiles lit the foyer.
The short cab ride to the restaurant had been in relative silence, the looks and knowing smiles all that was needed for them to share their eager anticipation of the forthcoming evening. Bette had held Tinas hand from the moment they stood having their photograph taken, to standing outside awaiting the cab, the contact only momentarily broken when they both entered the vehicle, the connection once again made on their journey.
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(23 votes, average: 4.39 out of 5)
OMFG, That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG SO HHHOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Good lord why did I read this at work? Totally hot!
I have nothing to say, what can you say…after all those words, mine seem inadequate…but tks, pls don’t end this run of chapters, we need this feeling…
Should not read at work…god lord…my throat is parched…blue….lawd have mercy!!!!! Too hot, must post soon!!!!
Mmmm what to say that i havnt already…Your writting seriously blows me away,…At times leaves me a little speechless….not to mention breathless…..It would be a privilage for ANY fan fiction site to have you as a writter……as it is to have you as a friend…Thankyou.
Excellent, as always. Thank you.
Absolutely flawless!!!
One word: exquisite.
Jo, although real-life crusctaceans make me nervous (I wasn’t even allowed to swim in Lake Erie even though we were on its shores when I was a kid-too filthy). But your fictional versions were delightful. There was a time when pearls were more precious than diamonds, more beautiful and more rare, and considered a gift from the gods. Thanks for the reminder.
OK, how do you keep outdoing yourself againa and again?
Jo, that was a deeply profound chapter. Your descriptive words leave me tongue tied. I just can’t tell you enough what a brilliant writer I think you are. I am very proud to be able to call you my friend.
OMFG, that was too HOT for words. I can not believe that I didn’t fall over while reading. You have surpassed anything I’ve read in a while. Thank you.
wow……….
there is no such thing as ‘too long’ when it comes to this story!! great chapter!!
OMG! You Brits are something else. I have to remember to breathe.
holy hell…
Love this story. WOW!!!!
Well, if this chapter doesn’t make you want to eat your vegetables I don’t know what will. Damn! Please post soon, Jobadge.
I think I almost passed out!!!That intensity,….my knees are weak.Have mercy, where did u learn to describe like that…thank goodness for adjectives! That chapter blew my mind,I;m still reeling…is there a doctor in the house?!?!
You’re the best Jobadge! Everything about your writing, the story, your attention to, and description of, every detail is breathtaking. More Please!
WHERE DO I START….HOTT IS SOOOO INADEQUATE!!!!!!! DAMN GET THEM BACK TO THE HOTEL…PRONTO!!!!!!!! I’m baffled, speechless (almost).
Oh dear god, I will never view food the same way again. And lord forbid me if I ever go to a restaurant because my brain will be working overtime to keep from visualizing Bette and Tina. This is tooooo hot. Hey Jo you should send in your name to write for the show. It seems that they are looking for writers. You and a couple others could do wonders to the show and my heart. Bette and Tina with your writing can turn anything they do into an erotic adventure. Great story and chapter.
Holy freaking cow so fucking hot, love it!
Wow! Seriously wow! That was intense. Just overwhelming. I managed to get rather sidetracked at one point imagining eating all sorts of different foods from between gorgeous breasts. Thanks!
oh my fucking god — what the hell effect did that just have on me — and at 7am ! your talent is just bloody awesome. though i do believe an earlier draft of yours had cornish pasties and clotted cream as the foods of choice. a rare talent jo thank you !
for the love of god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hotttttttttttttttttt
does anyone have a new mind..? cause mine is blown!!!
Wow, that was HOT and BEAUTIFUL!!
Hey mate do you think I mind the chapter being a bit longer than expected???? LOL…..so mindblowing and amazing this one and you are both a writer and a cook – do you’ve more up your sleeves, I bet you do and I can’t wait :o))
All I can say is “J” is a lucky woman. Anybody who can conjure up this stuff must possess many talents. Cheers to you…you’ve knocked me senseless.
WOW!!!!THAT WAS A TRUELY AWESOME CHAPTER….GREAT JOB,YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so hot I passed out there….for 100 minutes or so
Mmmmmnnnnn Asparagus – can’t tell you how many good shirts i’ve ruined eating asparagus. & Tina Parmesan Asparagus & Silk don’t go with out leading to permenant ruination of silk ….but i’m guessing you knoe that you naughy girl