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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT26
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Tina watched as every action could be seen within the reflection of the glass, she watched as Bette brought the slick fingertip to her nose, the perfume of her lovers essence permeating her nostrils, she watched as Bette took the fingertip between her lips, tasting close to Tinas ear, the low moans being intensified in the small private room ensconcing the erotic dance between Aphrodites offspring.
“Mmmm, my own goddess of love, you feel so good T, you taste exquisite, your smell makes my head swim, I love to taste you and feel you, feel how wet you are”
Tinas mouth dropped open, her breathing continuing to mist the glass immediately in front of her, as the words registered in her mind, “tell me Bette, tell me how its tastes”
Bette smiled at the question, “you taste of the rarest oyster in the ocean, and within this oyster, is the most precious and flawless pearl anyone could wish to find”
As the words escaped Bettes lips, her fingers sought out the precious oyster, the fine shelled lips, gently parting to seek the rare treasure within, the gentle touches filtering straight through to Tinas aching centre, the intensity making her body writhe beneath the fingertips.
Bettes throat gave a deep guttural moan as her mind registered the level of Tinas arousal, her own body jerked slightly as she watched over Tinas shoulder at the reflection in the glass before her, the intense look of desire as her fingertips made contact with the hyper sensitive pearl and slowly slid past it only to repeat the action slowly back and forth.
Her fingers continued to sashay between the lustrous folds, the intensity between them building with every stroke, as Tinas arousal neared its peak she quickened her fingers, small moans coming from both mouths, only to become a united sound between them as they rippled through their open lips, the hot breaths mingling and clinging to the cool glass wall.
As the stroking intensified, intuition took over and they both knew that within the next few seconds the blissful union would reach its pinnacle, the crest of the wave within reach, Tinas short breaths a knowing sign, her hands pressed hard against the glass, the tautness of the skin showing in the whiteness of her knuckles.
Her breath continued to quicken, small sounds emitting, her head dropped forward as the familiar waves began to course through body, her mouth became dry, her throat constricted, her head shot back as Bettes arm tightened around her waist, holding her tight against her as the wave jerked her body into oblivion, continuing its white ride, floating along the crest as silent screams escaped Tinas parted lips.
Tinas head rested back on Bettes shoulder as her body shook, the unexpected intensity of her orgasm surprising her, thankful for the arm anchoring her in safety as her body floated through its oblivion, to slowly and gently subside.
Bette kissed the side of Tinas face, grateful that her own body had managed to remain stable during the intense union; she whispered endearments closely into her lovers ear, she tenderly removed her finger from under Tinas dress, she took the finger between her lips, tasting the unique bouquet of her very own precious oyster.
Bette reached forward to the misted glass and wrote, within the condensation, TK 4 BP.
Tina opened her eyes, watching as Bette wrote the familiar idiom; she smiled as she brought her own finger to the phrase and completed it by writing underneath, FOREVER.
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OMFG, That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG SO HHHOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Good lord why did I read this at work? Totally hot!
I have nothing to say, what can you say…after all those words, mine seem inadequate…but tks, pls don’t end this run of chapters, we need this feeling…
Should not read at work…god lord…my throat is parched…blue….lawd have mercy!!!!! Too hot, must post soon!!!!
Mmmm what to say that i havnt already…Your writting seriously blows me away,…At times leaves me a little speechless….not to mention breathless…..It would be a privilage for ANY fan fiction site to have you as a writter……as it is to have you as a friend…Thankyou.
Excellent, as always. Thank you.
Absolutely flawless!!!
One word: exquisite.
Jo, although real-life crusctaceans make me nervous (I wasn’t even allowed to swim in Lake Erie even though we were on its shores when I was a kid-too filthy). But your fictional versions were delightful. There was a time when pearls were more precious than diamonds, more beautiful and more rare, and considered a gift from the gods. Thanks for the reminder.
OK, how do you keep outdoing yourself againa and again?
Jo, that was a deeply profound chapter. Your descriptive words leave me tongue tied. I just can’t tell you enough what a brilliant writer I think you are. I am very proud to be able to call you my friend.
OMFG, that was too HOT for words. I can not believe that I didn’t fall over while reading. You have surpassed anything I’ve read in a while. Thank you.
wow……….
there is no such thing as ‘too long’ when it comes to this story!! great chapter!!
OMG! You Brits are something else. I have to remember to breathe.
holy hell…
Love this story. WOW!!!!
Well, if this chapter doesn’t make you want to eat your vegetables I don’t know what will. Damn! Please post soon, Jobadge.
I think I almost passed out!!!That intensity,….my knees are weak.Have mercy, where did u learn to describe like that…thank goodness for adjectives! That chapter blew my mind,I;m still reeling…is there a doctor in the house?!?!
You’re the best Jobadge! Everything about your writing, the story, your attention to, and description of, every detail is breathtaking. More Please!
WHERE DO I START….HOTT IS SOOOO INADEQUATE!!!!!!! DAMN GET THEM BACK TO THE HOTEL…PRONTO!!!!!!!! I’m baffled, speechless (almost).
Oh dear god, I will never view food the same way again. And lord forbid me if I ever go to a restaurant because my brain will be working overtime to keep from visualizing Bette and Tina. This is tooooo hot. Hey Jo you should send in your name to write for the show. It seems that they are looking for writers. You and a couple others could do wonders to the show and my heart. Bette and Tina with your writing can turn anything they do into an erotic adventure. Great story and chapter.
Holy freaking cow so fucking hot, love it!
Wow! Seriously wow! That was intense. Just overwhelming. I managed to get rather sidetracked at one point imagining eating all sorts of different foods from between gorgeous breasts. Thanks!
oh my fucking god — what the hell effect did that just have on me — and at 7am ! your talent is just bloody awesome. though i do believe an earlier draft of yours had cornish pasties and clotted cream as the foods of choice. a rare talent jo thank you !
for the love of god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hotttttttttttttttttt
does anyone have a new mind..? cause mine is blown!!!
Wow, that was HOT and BEAUTIFUL!!
Hey mate do you think I mind the chapter being a bit longer than expected???? LOL…..so mindblowing and amazing this one and you are both a writer and a cook – do you’ve more up your sleeves, I bet you do and I can’t wait :o))
All I can say is “J” is a lucky woman. Anybody who can conjure up this stuff must possess many talents. Cheers to you…you’ve knocked me senseless.
WOW!!!!THAT WAS A TRUELY AWESOME CHAPTER….GREAT JOB,YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so hot I passed out there….for 100 minutes or so
Mmmmmnnnnn Asparagus – can’t tell you how many good shirts i’ve ruined eating asparagus. & Tina Parmesan Asparagus & Silk don’t go with out leading to permenant ruination of silk ….but i’m guessing you knoe that you naughy girl