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I WANT YOU BACK Pt 13
Part 13
“Hallelujah!- We have located the suspect Cagney! Shane said
“Where is she then Lacey?”
“According to my source (Ms P)-she’s in Tabboo, and pretty wrecked!..and Tee apparently Nadia is all over her” Shane said uncomfortably
“Nadia?…Oh that blonde thing from her class?”
“That’s’ the one”
“Mmm…lets get over there quick Shane” Tina said quietly, Shane noticed her eyes were blazing an inferno.
Shane and Tina got to the bar in record time…they broke a few speed limits on the way. The pair had a quick look around but couldn’t see head nor hair of the brunette or Alice.
Shane walked over to the gantry, the barmaid came over, Shane knew her intimately…
“Hey sexy,..are you back for second helpings at last” the barmaid said playfully
“Sorry babe..I’m kinda involved with someone just now” Shane said shyly
“YOU!!?..Oh my god!…Did the player get played? – What’s this incredible chick called? I have to meet the girl who could make you toe the line? The barmaid laughed
“Its Carmen…em..the DJ in here” for some reason the young jedi was blushing
“Woah..Well I’ll say something for you Shane..she’s hot!!, and gorgeous- Good luck to you”
“Thanks Cindy!..Anyway did you notice Bette coming in? I can’t see her anywhere?”
“What a stupid question!..of course I noticed her-who wouldn’t?” she laughed then said “ She right at that table at the back” she pointed in the direction and then realised the table was empty “Oh she must be on the dancefloor somewhere” Cindy said
“Oh if it isn’t Little Miss Tina!…or are you Carol tonight? Jodie said sarcastically to the blonde who was standing at the right side of Shane”
“Oh go play tag with the buses Jodie, I’m not in the mood for you tonight” Tina said disinterested
“Oh..don’t be nasty to me Tina!.. I’m sorry being with me blew your chance of getting back with Bette..but you and me..we could have some fun..I’ll give you a good time? What do you think?
“Jodie I wouldn’t sleep with you if my life depended on it..You know the only thing I would have wanted off you had I known who you were that night…would have been Bette”
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(39 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
For once I read the new chapter over here. Man, I am excited that Bette finally knows about Angie. It saddened me that Tina went through all of what she did, but she now back in Tibette land.
Wow Bette handled that well…now on to meeting her! PPS
pls con’ im daying to know next
ok ok, i know I made a comment someone else first but this is a great story. Whats next? and who’s bailing them out.
Glad Bette knows about Angie. Hope they get out of jail soon. Thanks PPS
Glad Nadia didn’t get her hands on Bette. Tina coming clean with Bette and Bette’s positive reactions was amazing. Can’t wait to read more.
so happy Tina smacked Jodi down!!! Great that T and B got to share even if it was in a cell. pps
Are you bringing Peggy in to bail everyone out?? Glad that Tina has finally told Bette…but as in all fanfic I await more drama
tes tina popped jodie one!! alice is funny calling jodie names,lol… tina needs to make her phone call to kit.. :)PPS
That was awesome, Tina kick jodis ass. Glad B&T are ok now!
Yes im happy Tina finally got a chance to tell Bette. She really has been through alot poor baby