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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eight (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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“You’re staring..” Angus pointed out unapologetically. “And your pining too.”
“No I’m not..” The girl denied the obvious.
“Over Bette Porter’s girl of all people!” The guitarist whispered sharply beneath his breath, covering the mic in front of him just in case it was turned on. “If you want a thrill, I suggest sky jumping or freefalling over a cliff. It’s safer – and in case you die, at least you die quicker. If Bette Porter catches wind of your attraction to her girlfriend, she and F4 will break your bones into tiny pieces, feed them to the dogs, then barbeque your entrails and stuff it inside your ass!”
“Wow..” Kate breathed out in awe. “Gus, you’ve got a very vivid and morbid imagination tonight. Must be all the weed talking, huh?” She joked, brushing away the guy’s well meaning warning with a flippant wave of a hand.
“It’s not funny K.” Angus reprimanded the girl. “F4 will tear you apart, believe me. I’ve heard stories.”
“Oh c’mon!” Kate scoffed, chalking up her friend’s words as lies and rumors promulgated by F4 to scare hapless people like them into following their will. “People have the tendency to embellish tales to fit their own warped imaginations. I bet those four brats are not as bad as everyone thinks they are. Money has a way of distorting the truth.”
“Whatever.” Angus’ mouth formed into a tight line. He wasn’t the smartest cookie in the jar, but he knew when to stay away from danger when he caught wind of it. “You’re just asking for trouble.” He shook his head and sighed wearily before preoccupying himself once more with tuning his guitar. “Trouble.. trouble.. trouble..” He sang beneath his breath.
“I know.” Kate took a deep breath and smiled a small, sad smile. But usually, she thought, the ones that meant more trouble were the ones well worth all of it.
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“I need something to nibble on..” Dana grabbed the menu and perused through the selection. “I’m so hungry..”
“You’ve been eating non-stop since we came! Where do you keep it all?” Jenny poked Dana’s bottomless stomach. She had to admire her two friends from North Carolina. They could eat a whole cow and not gain a pound. She, on the other hand, has to spend thirty minutes on a treadmill after wolfing down a turkey sandwich due to her slow metabolism.
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Okay, I know she had it coming, but you had me feeling sorry for Kate. Suicidal, yes, but you have to admire someone who follows their heart, even if it gets their poor gibson smashed. You smashed a gibson! What is wrong with you? Thanks for the post, good luck on the foreign studies.
I love the way Bette loves Tina. I love a jealous Bette, and maybe a jealous Tina, But I love Bette and Tina the most. Please don’t let anyone come between them…
I love the fun and giggles. I love the loyal friends. I love the banter among the F4 and Tina. I love Bette with Melvin. I love Bette’s sense of dedication to the Porter companies. Most of all, I love besotted Bette. Well, maybe that isn’t quite right. Most of all I love your story. 40 pages? 400 pages next time!!!!!
Kate is very lucky, her instrument took the anger instead. we got rid of Kate Alch, Now its Jill ‘s turn. Tina will kill her for sure lol. This post was great, very funny as well. Can’t wait for the next
LOL at Bette calling Kate Frodo… That was hilarious. Great chapter!
So glad to see an update to my Fav Fic. Great job by the way…Kate has some nerve signing to Tina & I love dhow Bette took care of the situation…so sexy. So now Tina ha ssomeone afetr her & I believe Bette will to with this Grisham lady…I smell trouble. Loved it!!!!!
Had to hold my breath the entire time Bette was confrontating the hobbit. That was hot beyond words..aherm. And seems like there are third parties all over the place…reminds me of a text message a friend sent me…it said something like “Not all parties are fun – by Third Party”.LMFAOL
Uhhh Ohhh, I take it that Jillian and Bette have met in the past. Not a good sign on Bette’s behalf. Kate is so lucky that Bette promised Tina to not kill her. Now we get to see a jealous Tina.
“Something she can’t – and probably won’t ever give her.” this is such an open statement, seems like Tina is curious…then again who won’t be. And then at the end of the chappy we have Bette who is facing temptation now. Man will they won’t they??!! It would be fun to see the drama if they both did. PPS
Hmmm…that just had alittle bit of everything to it! I so totally love jealous Bette (I remember the jealous Bette cookie..hehe!) Too many good scenes to comment on but I think you know my faves by now (maybe in a PM) Thank you for the funny Bette & Sam,they are delightful together. But of course the pouting Bette and “…” were my favorite piece. And now another hmmm on the horizon with Jillian? A jealous Tina is even better than a jealous Bette..this will be so fun. Thank you..your devoted reader!! oh and about IC..well I’ll tell you later..
You’re the master of “…” I’m a total fan! It’s just so funny seeing them jealous. I’m so looking forward for the next one! ;)
well Kate got put in her place at last, i really don’t like her character,i also have a bad feeling about this Jillian person but im sure Tina will sort her out!! anyway cheers for the post,can’t wait til the next one
This story is the perfect antidote to rainy day blues. So funny… Kate’s been warned off, probably forever (I’ll admit to feeling sorry for her guitar though), now Tina’s maybe going to have to warn this Jill (*great* name, btw! ;) ) off her woman. Can’t wait for your next post, Alchemy. Thanks!
and bette doesn’t remember jill… i wonder if she does now… i trust you… i know bette would never do any thing to hurt tina… love this… pps
Your dialogue and style of writing is such a treat to read! So damn funny, as well as sexy and tender. The banter in the art gallery had me in tears and the giggles continues from there. I did feel bad for Kate though… especially with the guitar smashing. But how can anyone not love your Bette?? You seem to be brewing quite a bit of drama though… Kate…Jill…the nightmares… Can’t wait for your next post and here’s hoping for the 40+ pages!
Let me say this. I like a lot jealous Bette and I love jealous Tina! But I adore this couple together. And with Kate and Jill… well I smell trouble? I hope they will be together in the end. Anyway, about the chapter I laughed a lot with “…” and the conversation between F4. For another chapter you rivet our attention and thank you for that. You are incredible.
…you’re tiny…like a hobbit – genius Alch, what a put down!! well that’s kate taken care of then it’s enter jill…don’t think we’ve seen much of “jealous” tina have we?…interesting to see how she handles this! pps! oh and loving the length of the chappy!!
Kate is lucky if Tina didn’t say a word Bette would’ve kick her ass lol. But now is trouble coming and hope nothing happen between Bette and Jill. Please post more, thanks!
Looks like Tina’s gonna get her chance to be jealous too! I totally am in love with this story! PPS:)
This is story is my all time fave, especially this chapter. Go bette!