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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Twenty Four, Part Two (based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on February 27, 2014 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=75164
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    Part Two: White Flag of Surrender..

     

    “Cause every time we play this game, one of you always chooses to kill me!” Alice huffed bitterly. “Can someone tell me the fuck why?! What’s wrong with me?”

     

    Her three friends shared a look of pure constipation from biting their inner cheeks in restraint.

     

    “On second thought, don’t answer that.” Alice sighed.

     

    “Um.. Al?”

     

    “What?” The blonde snapped, annoyed still.

     

    “Behind you.” Sam muttered quietly, pointing at something or someone behind the blonde. As soon as she twisted her neck to gaze at whatever it was that had Sam and her friends dumbstruck, the incensed scowl on Alice’s face quickly melted away.

     

    A shy-looking Dana was standing there, looking mighty remorseful for the fight they had this morning over Lara. It had bothered her all day, so she flew all the way from New York to surprise her girlfriend with a piece of flower and a simple apology. “Are you still angry at me?” Dana asked meekly, crouching beside the quiet blonde and placing her flower offering on Alice’s lap. “I’m so sorry baby..”

     

    Watching the scene unfold, the three other members of F4 fought back giggles and kicked each other under the table in barely suppressed amusement.

     

    “The only thing missing now is a fog machine, campy background music and some falling rose petals.” Bette commented snidely beneath her breath, ribbing at the cheesiness of it all. Shane and Sam snickered in response.

     

    Ignoring her friends, a gooey-eyed Alice launched herself into Dana’s arms for a tight hug, falling for the touching gesture without an ounce of hesitation. Much to the disgust of the three, the couple then proceeded to share a sweet, lingering kiss which quickly escalated into a porn-y exchange of saliva and a show of dueling tongues.

     

    “Jeez, get a room!” Bette grumbled begrudgingly, the one-eyed monster rearing its ugly head. Their PDA was like a slap to her Tina-deprived self this evening. In rush of jealousy, Bette sighed. At least clumsy little Dana managed to show up and surprise her friend; she hadn’t even heard a single peep from her girlfriend – and they didn’t even have a fight before she left!

     

    “Miss Bette?”

     

    “What?!” Bette snapped, turning her head to face the person who tapped her shoulder.

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    1. “I see you” very Avatarisque Alch ;) Enjoyed so much where Tina drew the line with Jill. But she didn’t do anything evil with our beloved Tina up in the mountains right? Urgh

    3. Aclh….You really didn’t do that did you? Keep refreshing the page….still the same. You are so very bad. Bad, bad fanfic writer! LOL. I enjoyed the whole Tina / Jill exchange. Good stuff…PPS

    4. Aclh….You really didn’t do that did you? Keep refreshing the page….still the same. You are so very bad. Bad, bad fanfic writer! LOL. I enjoyed the whole Tina / Jill exchange. Good stuff…PPS

    5. Wow, finally Tina is going after her woman. It took a lot of courage for her to face Jill. But now Tina is missing, and Bette is falling apart. Hope Tina is safe.

    6. love this story but for some reason sometimes the pages won’t open then my piece of crap comp freezes and then shuts down. glad you still have it going tho

    7. I love your story and your long chapters. I’m up way pass my bedtime :) I just had to finish reading. Looking forward to losing more sleep reading your story. Thanks

    10. Wonderful update.. Loved the ‘snow fight’ and the fuck, kill, marry game.. they cracked me up.. I hope Tina’s okay.. Thanks for posting. PPS

    12. Awesome! Love the “fuck, kill, marry” game. I recognize the ski trip episode there, will you follow along the lines or gives us an alchy version? Either way it will be loved. Thanks for the update.

    15. I’m so glad to see you posting! Do you need any helping creating books to add chapters to the book? If so, just email me, and I’ll be happy to walk you through it. admin@ lesfanf.com (remove the space).

    16. Alchemy im so pleased you are back posting iv so missed your writing please tell me if you are going to post the wedding chapter soon it seems like years since we read chapter 2 please post soon and im not shy in begging pretty please with a cherry on top pps.

    19. Did this story not get transferred from the old site? That would have been a sad loss. Although, I still have the copy that you sent me Alchy. In a flash drive sitting a fish bowl without fish or water. You are the bomb diggity!

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