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    Just The Girl – Chapter Twenty One (a HYD-inspired fic)

     

    "Just nice?" Bette glanced sideways at Tina as she raised an eyebrow. She needed an ego boost.. and a compliment from Tina Kennard would more than outweigh the disappointment she was feeling with her current appearance.

     

    Tina shook her head and laughed at the brunette’s attempt to fish for compliments. Fine, she thought, just because I feel responsible for you being drenched in the rain. I’ll humor you for the meantime, she smiled. "Hot. Sexy. Gorgeous. Beautiful." Tina raised a finger with each description, stroking her chin with her other hand. "Did I miss anything..?" She said in mock concentration. Seeing the amused look on Bette’s face, she continued. "Oh, and the wet shirt look suits you." She added with a wink and a laugh.

     

    "Thank you for telling the truth." Bette grinned, she really needed that. "Say.. about the wet look.." She bit her lip as she met the blonde’s eyes.

     

    "What about it?" Tina asked, tilting her head to the side and raising an eyebrow.

     

    "Does it turn you on?" Bette smirked, raising her eyebrows suggestively.

     

    "Don’t push your luck Porter." Tina narrowed her eyes and playfully swatted Bette on the arm.

     

    Bette shrugged her shoulders. "Sorry.. couldn’t resist." She grinned as she stepped out of the waiting shed.

     

    Tina shook her head to the side and rolled her eyes. "Anyway, what should we do now?" She asked as she followed the brunette.

     

    "I want to ride the Ferris wheel!" Bette gleefully exclaimed as she spun around to face Tina. The rain didn’t wash away her desire to ride on the rotating wheel in the distance, it only served to increase her want more.

     

    "I don’t think they’ll open it again just yet.." Tina said as she looked at the ride, it appeared to have ceased in its operation due to the rain. They’ll probably open it again after an hour or so, she thought. She looked back at the brunette in front of her and furrowed her brows when she saw the disappointment clearly etched on Bette’s face. "Why?" She asked when she heard Bette cursing under her breath. What’s so special about a Ferris wheel? She had been on one a couple of times before as a child and in her opinion, there was nothing to be excited about.

    Comments

    1. I haven’t read a fic this long in along time & I still can’t wait to read every new update. U are doing an amazing job-I am totally hooked.The elevator scene was nice-they are getting so close.

    2. Fantastic update! Love the use of the elevator scene and how they were found cuddling by the demolition crew. There is some meaningful irony in that…

    3. just caught up on all the chapters you just posted :) What a date!!!! WOW,after reading that chapter i can’t help but think that Bette must be really hungry LOL.anyway please post more of this brilliant story soon.Thanks

    4. pplllleeeaaaaassssssseeeeeeeee post another 20 chapters sometime soon…really soon…maybe now?!! i think i might just be addicted to this story!!

    5. Hey, wat a date but at least the date happened:)I meant to leave u a comment last nite but there was sum prob wit da site. Anyway as u know love da story n looking forward to next chapter.

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