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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 20A
“Oh, God. Oh, my God. Your mouth is scrumptious. Your mou. . .Oh, God, Dylan. Yes. Yes.” Her hand pulled on Dylan’s short hair, then massaged her head without being aware of what she was doing. Dylan was moving her closer and closer. One more lick, one more and Helena knew it would be the end. Closer. One word and Dylan would have her where she wanted. Closer. One sigh, one groan, one more hum against her labia and Dylan would feel Helena’s twitching and feel her fingers being held inside of Helena’s heat. Closer. Closer. So close. “Dylan,” she said with a moan.
“Ummm,” Dylan hummed.
“I’m. . .”
“Come for me, Helena.”
“. . .coming.” She struggled but turned the two words into one rapturous and euphoric phrase.
Dylan swirled her tongue around Helena’s hard clit as she reached up to caress Helena’s hard nipple. It was a toss up to say which was larger, her nipples or her clit. All Dylan really knew was that anywhere Helena could be greatly aroused, she was.
“Coming. C-c-coming.” Helena’s body bounced and she flew forward, sat up, pulled Dylan away from her vulva, and into her arms.
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8:45pm
Just before night fell, Bette had packed up the impromptu picnic while Tina had taken control of Angelica. Tina had removed the baby from the travel seat and placed her in the stroller. They had returned to Tina’s room leaving Theresa and Henry talking and Mikey playing games of cops and robbers with imaginary friends. Once inside, Bette had secured the baby sling around Tina and placed Angelica in it.
They were seated at the round table in Tina’s room, enjoying each other’s company and not saying much at all. Tina rubbed Angelica’s head and looked down at her baby, marveling at the miracle of her. Bette pulled out the camera and took several shots of them.
“You two are-are. . . “ Bette shook her head and shrugged in amazement. “. . .Beautiful. You’re a natural mom.”
“You auh too, Beh-ette.”
Bette waved Tina off with some embarrassment. She felt it, but wasn’t sure how others perceived her parenting. In her heart, she felt like she had taken to it and it did feel natural and Angelica was her daughter in every sense of the word. Even though she minimized it, she was thrilled that Tina could see it, too.
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Early Merry Christmas to us for getting an update! *doing a happy dance* Be back at some point for a real comment. lol
I’m really pleased to see a new chapter so soon. Excellent plan by Shane and Carmen to get Al and Dana back together. I have a good feeling that it’ll work. Dylan and Hels, what can I say? They’re hot. I dunno how they’re going to get rid of Danny completely, but I’d think besting him would be easy, because he’s a complete idiot. Can’t the Peabody billions just hire a couple of thugs to muscle his sorry behind out of LA? Bette and Tina: Eureka! I think Porter’s got it! I cannot *wait* for Nicastro, Colley, Marcos and any other hatahs to get put in their place. And last but not least, you actually made me like Henry. Maybe it’s Christmas cheer, maybe it’s that you gave him a heart. Either way, I’m very glad you posted, great chapter, and dare I ask that you post again soon? Why yes. Yes, I do. (She who dares, wins!) Post soon, please!
omg omg, I can’t believe you’ve posted again, so soon….Wow, how lucky are we, and regardless is you give us 30+ pages or 60+…it’s great all thru…No, I don’t wan’t this to end, we need to continue it to your version of S4 then S5….pls pls…Tks for your dedication portia
Thank you so much for posting so soon…I loved how you reversed the pov of the infamous photo. Good plan by Shane&Carmen,last chance for Dana & Alice and they better make good use of it. Great news all around for Bette & Tina. I hope Tina’s dream will be a beautiful one this time around. Thank you!
OMG you’re genius for getting danish back together, throw in some hot steamy danish making up and I’ll worship you forever lol :P
wow… i love this story… and i even like your henry now… i love how you are tying everything together… and i can’t wait till your next post…
i so hope that bette’s plan will work, tina will have dreams about bette and angie, and also for al and dana will work things out…thanks for this chapter, i hope that they all can have happy endings
You made me happy Portia and my monday a little less dreary! Merry X-mas to me!
Thank you for posting this chapter. Happy Holidays!
Shane covered her mouth with her hand to keep from laughing. When she was six or seven, she thought that the words lavatory and laboratory were the same words. Her father had caught her with a glass Pyrex dish and a steak knife in the bathroom on her knees, pulling her poop out of the toilet to begin some experiments in her laboratory. She recalled that her dad threw away the baking dish. – LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Nicastro has got to GO! At least Bette got the ok from Henry to see Tina and that Bette is working on a plan. Helena and Dylan was freakin’ HOT!!!!!!!
Ahem…”I only know what I know…the passing chapters will show…you’ve kept TiBette love so alive and so new…cause time after time you’ll hear me say that I’m so lucky to be reading you…Thank you!
Here’s my vote [X] for best reconceptualization of Season 3. I raise my glass in toast to your excellent series. Thanks Portia!
Brilliant. I like the ending of this chapter soooo much better than the last. Lots of good scenes in this chapter from funny to sexy. Thank you so much for this top notch story.
The day seemed to end too perfect for B&T what drama do you have planned next? I just want Tina to get better and get up out of that hospital real soon. Stephanie is going to get the help she needs in jail if she keep taking that man’s money. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
What a brilliant chapter. I’m glad that Bette didn’t end up in the slammer! I can’t believe that Whit wouldn’t have thought of the new Power of Attorney if that was plausable…I’m not seeing that as a viable option,,,get to the retreat, Bette!
Beautiful story! Helena & Dylan are hot!pps. thank you!