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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Six
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Alice stirred. Her eyes slowly opened and she turned onto her side to spoon against Dana’s sleeping body. Wrapping her arm around Dana, Alice smiled when she heard Dana’s contented sigh. Both women were nude from last night or rather this morning’s lovemaking. Alice thought about it. She had been right to drive over to Dana’s. She had known that Dana couldn’t stay angry with her forever. They had something special. Alice pressed into her lover’s back and her hand drifted up, cupping a breast. Dana moaned and Alice felt herself become aroused by it. Her tongue snaked out and licked the nape of Dana’s neck, then moved up to lick just below her hairline. It was a spot that drove Dana crazy and she groaned as she turned in Alice’s embrace. Alice’s tongue sank into Dana’s mouth finding a familiar heat. Their kisses became hotter and Alice half rolled on top of Dana spreading Dana’s legs and pushing her thigh against Dana’s warmth.
“Oh, God, Dane.”
Dana tilted her lower body up and rocked her hips, while her hands were working Alice’s breasts. She squeezed them hard the way Alice liked, then pulled on the very rigid nipples, making Alice whimper with excitement. Alice looked down at her lover, saw that Dana’s face was pink and flushed, her mouth only slightly open—but with only a few grinds against Dana’s center, Dana was moaning and panting. Dana pushed harder against Alice’s thigh. Not wanting to end their connection so quickly, Alice pushed back and moved down. She wanted Dana’s climax in her mouth, not against her leg. She wanted to swallow everything that Dana had to give. Alice was almost at her destination—her arm extended, a hand roughly massaging Dana’s breast while her mouth kissed and licked her abdomen, and moved lower still. Alice loved the feel of Dana’s pubic hair against her lips and nose. She rubbed her face against the hair and then lightly nipped there. Dana’s moaning filled the room as did the musky scent that conveyed Dana’s readiness. The flesh was ready, but Dana had other plans for Alice. Dana pushed Alice with her foot and then swung her leg against her, pushing Alice to the side.
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(61 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Thankyou Portia….I absolutely love this story. That was so touching to read about Angelica and nursing…very touching made me cry. You obviously have invested a lot of time into this story and I for one am grateful….thankyou
Well, I hope Tina could wake now. Poor Bette, she has suffered enough. Give her some happiness.
So well done. I love the detail about the nursing and the thinking of each character. Not at all superficial. Well-crafted and thoughtful. I’ll await your next chapter.
Your story is one of the few amazing ones on this site. It’s one of those rare stories that elicit intense emotion from me. The sadness I feel when I read this is so palpable it hurts…but it’s a good thing. I would’ve much rather watched this than the season we got. Thank God you write so well, giving me a vivid picture of each scene. Please continue, I can’t wait until you update again. Your fan, Manda L.
Please oh please do not let Tina get any worse. Watching someone in a coma is heartwrenching. You keep waiting for any sign of life inside of them. Sometimes you think that you see something and then you are not sure because you want it to happen so badly. Bette is fighting to hold everything together. She is slowly loosing her own sanity. This is so sad.
You are so methodically filling all the holes in their stories. Your details are rich and full of color. You give us what we need for the picture to be complete. And you are making the Tina-coma sl so real! And we have a process of Dana and Alice coming apart and Lara coming back into the picture. And we see that Helena is a creature of many sides, not just a one-dimensional character, either haughty or humble. Do you think the series producers were afraid that if they delved into the stories with this much detail that they might not be far enough along through Season 3? I was intrigued about the nursing technique and wasn’t aware that it could be done. Thanks for enlightening and entertaining me with your compelling work!
tina has to wake up… i have a bad feeling as to why her mom and sister are coming… i hope its not to take angie back with them… love this story… please continue… soon
It’s about time, sleeping beauty. Can’t wait, please post soon.
This story is great. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Please let Tina wake up soon. I hate seeing her like this. Post soon!
Great chapter, thank you. Love your story. You are doing a wonderful job with it showing the various things that happens wiht a patient that is comatose and what one has to do to stimulate them.Thanks for the post.
Another fine chapter, Portia! I can’t wait to see what happens!
WOW!!! More please soon.