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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Six
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“Whu…” Alice huffed as she dropped onto her back.
“I want you first.” Dana slid her fingers between Alice’s folds and her eyes closed at what she found there. “Oh, Al.” Dana flicked her thumb over Alice’s clit and she listened for the familiar catch in Alice’s breathing that told her that Alice was fighting to slow herself and not winning that fight.
Alice grabbed Dana’s hand and tried to get her to push a couple of fingers inside her, but Dana held back. Instead, she reached across the bed to the nightstand drawer, opened it, and pulled out eight inches of purple, silicone, Nirvana. “God, yes. Dana. Dane.”
It was a strap-on, but Dana didn’t bother with getting out the leather harness. She lay beside Alice, who had spread her legs wider. Dana snuck her arm under Alice’s raised leg and with her fingers gently parted her labia. She pushed the thick dildo inside her. Alice grunted out her pleasure. The toy slid in and out easily and Dana repositioned herself so that she was kneeling, but bent beside Alice. She bent enough to take Alice’s breast in her mouth and suck deeply.
“Oh, God. Dana.”
Alice’s hand reached between her own legs and she fingered her clit while Dana kept up her rhythm with the dildo.
“A little more, Dane. Push it all the way in.”
Dana did.
“Oh, yeah.”
Alice’s hand was furiously working her clit and she was panting and sighing her way to a serious orgasm. Dana bit down on Alice’s breast causing Alice to scream in pleasure. “Fuck!” her muscles clamped around the toy, her index finger that had become a blur on her clitoris stilled, and the climax washed over her. “I love you, Dana. I love you. I love you so much. God. Oh, God.” Alice pulled Dana down so that she was lying on top of her, breast to breast and it felt so good to have her there. Alice was so totally in love with her. Dana smiled at her, gently extricating the dildo from inside her and tossing it on the other side of the bed.
“Oh, Al.”
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Thankyou Portia….I absolutely love this story. That was so touching to read about Angelica and nursing…very touching made me cry. You obviously have invested a lot of time into this story and I for one am grateful….thankyou
Well, I hope Tina could wake now. Poor Bette, she has suffered enough. Give her some happiness.
So well done. I love the detail about the nursing and the thinking of each character. Not at all superficial. Well-crafted and thoughtful. I’ll await your next chapter.
Your story is one of the few amazing ones on this site. It’s one of those rare stories that elicit intense emotion from me. The sadness I feel when I read this is so palpable it hurts…but it’s a good thing. I would’ve much rather watched this than the season we got. Thank God you write so well, giving me a vivid picture of each scene. Please continue, I can’t wait until you update again. Your fan, Manda L.
Please oh please do not let Tina get any worse. Watching someone in a coma is heartwrenching. You keep waiting for any sign of life inside of them. Sometimes you think that you see something and then you are not sure because you want it to happen so badly. Bette is fighting to hold everything together. She is slowly loosing her own sanity. This is so sad.
You are so methodically filling all the holes in their stories. Your details are rich and full of color. You give us what we need for the picture to be complete. And you are making the Tina-coma sl so real! And we have a process of Dana and Alice coming apart and Lara coming back into the picture. And we see that Helena is a creature of many sides, not just a one-dimensional character, either haughty or humble. Do you think the series producers were afraid that if they delved into the stories with this much detail that they might not be far enough along through Season 3? I was intrigued about the nursing technique and wasn’t aware that it could be done. Thanks for enlightening and entertaining me with your compelling work!
tina has to wake up… i have a bad feeling as to why her mom and sister are coming… i hope its not to take angie back with them… love this story… please continue… soon
It’s about time, sleeping beauty. Can’t wait, please post soon.
This story is great. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Please let Tina wake up soon. I hate seeing her like this. Post soon!
Great chapter, thank you. Love your story. You are doing a wonderful job with it showing the various things that happens wiht a patient that is comatose and what one has to do to stimulate them.Thanks for the post.
Another fine chapter, Portia! I can’t wait to see what happens!
WOW!!! More please soon.