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    Life: Altered 03.71 ~*~ One More Chance ~*~ Finale pt 2 ~*~ The End

    Story written on December 11, 2005 by Janet Marie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=58235
    Author Notes:

    The End – Romantic as it is….

     

                “You know, I wonder where Rosita got
    the money for that car?”      Tina     asked, looking over at Quin who’s
    eyebrows shot up passed her blonde bangs, she bit her lip.

     

                “I haven’t a clue.”  Quin said innocently and Alice shook her head.

     

                “Money cannot buy love
    Harlequin.”      Alice     chided her, sounding very much like Peggy and Quin snorted,

     

                “I know that, but someone promised
    my niece a car, and I thought we should deliver on the promise.”  Quin said, standing up straight and brushing
    the pine needles from her jeans.      Alice     rolled her eyes again and Tina laughed a bit, getting up too.  The knees of her jeans wet with the snow.

     

                “You’re a romantic.”  Cassandra accused Quin, swinging an easy arm
    around     Tina    , who laughed again.

     

                “Don’t tell anyone.  Especially not my wife.”  Quin said dramatically, taking Alice‘s hand as they walked down the street,
    Quin twirling     Alice     around and pulling her into her for a
    quick kiss. 

     

                “Life is good.”  Tina said, and Cassandra nodded, thinking that it indeed
    was.

     

                “All’s well that ends well.”  She quipped and Quin snorted, picking up some
    snow and throwing it at Cassandra playfully.

     

                “Who said it has to end?”  She asked and Tina felt the spray of the cold snow and
    Cassandra let out a yell.

     

                “Oh it’s not over til the fat lady
    sings!”  She said, grabbing some snow and
    going after Quin, who was running away from the charging Cassandra.

     

                “I’m not fat, but we can sing?”  Tina asked Alice, putting an easy arm around her friend
    as they walked down the sidewalk.

     

                “La. La.. La!” 
    Alice     sang, as they watched their partners
    frolicking in the snow.  Cassandra
    pelting Quin with snowballs as Quin laughed and ducked behind trees and other
    pedestrians. 

     

                The sun was fading, and the day was
    growing to a close, just in time for them to begin a new day, a new adventure
    and they all had just one chance to make it perfect the next time around.

     

    ~*~*~*~*~*~

    One
    More Chance

    3.14.05

    Janet Marie

     

    Do
    you think we can sit

    Talk
    for a while

    I
    miss that lovely smile

    I
    keep telling you I need you

    You
    seem to not believe it today

    I’m
    not the same as the day before

    I
    know we’ll never be

    The
    way it was

    If
    I knew now

    I’d
    never have let you go

     

    All
    I’m asking for

    Is
    one more chance

    To
    show you I was wrong

    Don’t
    give up on us so easily

    Can’t
    you see this separation is killing me

     

    I
    ask for  just one more chance

    To
    be with you like you want me to be

    I
    swear I’ll never let you down

    Just
    one more chance

     

    I
    understand the pain

    I
    put you through

    All
    the suffering you’ve dealt with

    All
    at the hands of your lover

    I
    can’t ignore the pain

    In
    my soul at the pain I’ve caused you

    Let
    me make it all up to you

    One
    baby step at a time

     

    All
    I’m asking for

    Is
    one more chance

    To
    show you I was wrong

    Don’t
    give up on us so easily

    Can’t
    you see this separation is killing me

     

    I
    ask for just one more chance

    To
    be with you like you want me to be

    I
    swear I’ll never let you down

    Just
    one more chance

     

    I
    know I was wrong

    The
    word doesn’t even come close

    To
    all the things I’ve done

    To
    break your fragile soul

     

    All
    I’m asking for

    Is
    one more chance

    To
    show you I was wrong

    Don’t
    give up on us so easily

    Can’t
    you see this separation is killing me

     

    I
    ask for just one more chance

    To
    be with you like you want me to be

    I
    swear I’ll never let you down

    Just
    one more chance

     

    This
    was never the plan

    Or
    the way it was meant to be

    Someone
    messed with our reality

    Give
    me half of a chance

    To
    fix all the wrongs I’ve done

    I
    can make you believe in our love again

    I
    see the pain reflected back in your eyes

    If
    you let me

    I’ll
    show you that nothing on earth

    Can
    tear us apart again

     

    All
    I’m asking for

    Is
    one more chance

    To
    show you I was wrong

    Don’t
    give up on us so easily

    Can’t
    you see this separation is killing me

    I
    ask for just one more chance

    To
    be with you like you want me to be

    I
    swear I’ll never let you down

    Just
    one more chance

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    Comments

    1. Thank you very much for the story. although there’s no TiBette, it didn’t prevent this from being a great story. And I like the speed of your update. Thanks.

    4. Ok, that was great! Hats off to you!! I never guessed that Cherie was the culprit and Tonya as Dana’s manager is somehow fitting here. As was stated before, we so appreciate the frequency of the updates and hope you will be able to continue with the Gathering. Now for the carrot that you dangled in front of all Tibetters: The song was good for the scene, but even more fitting for B&T. Yeah, B&C and T&C are matched “OK” (rolling my eyes), but where is the drama and excitement in that…I am not exactly sure where you are going next, but I am here for the ride. JKDWYD

    5. Oh where do I begin? Words cannot describe how I feel right now. I’m sad and happy at the same time. Happy because everybody is happy…and sad because the story has ended. I absolutely loved it, from beginning till the very end. I’ve read good fan fiction before, but never before have I read anything as brilliant as this fic. It’s destinctive, cause it’s not all about our L word girls. You’ve introduced so many new characters that I’ve grown to love. You’ve created relationships that at first sight seemed weird but turned them into relationships that we all dream off. Thank you for giving us the honor of reading your work. I will be reading more of your work and I’m very excited about your new story. J, you are so talented, it’s amazing!!! Thanks again ;)

    6. Excellent!!!!! I have to say that I was away for a few days and when I came back I had alot of catching up to do. I wanted to comment a few times, but there were already like 5 or 6 more chapters posted. Anyway, I was cracking up and found it very interesting when you wrote about Jenny’s new job @ HBO for a lesbian show, because the other show on another network was floundering in its 3rd season. I guess I just found it funny because there is so much hype for season 3. Anyway, loved your story and I really fell in love with all the new characters and the new relationships. Thanks Again!! Hope you have Happy Holiday!!!

    7. Ditto to everyting that was said above!….I am so going to miss the characters that you created in this amazingly written story. What would be so awesome, is if you continued this story!! I am so looking forward to The Gathering.

    9. WOW! I’m speechless. So Happy w/ the way you ended your story, but sad to know these particular characters story will not con’t. Early morning, late evenings always checking for your fic reading it through tired eyes after & before work I was definitely hooked. Looking forward to your future fics & the Jaded Wind series. EXCELLENT wrap to all the storylines. Bravo JM.

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