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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 57
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“Life is choices, Bette. She made hers.” Shane, in her Yoda way, said.
“Well, personally, Porter, I’m still getting used to the fact that there’s two of you in this world – *****, I’m just about able to handle one of your skinny, uptight asses.” Exclaimed
“And I love you, too, Al.” Bette reached over and tussled
“Listen, we’ll call everyone tomorrow as soon as I hear from
Everyone made their way to their cars.
“T, would you mind driving?”
Another sign that Bette was still shaken up.
“Sure, babe, come on. You deserve to sit back and relax.”
Bette got in and put her head back on the seat. She turned to Tina and the tears just started to flow. “I don’t know what I would have done if you weren’t here with me to get through this, T. I feel so overwhelmed right now.”
“Baby, I don’t know what I would have done if Faye Buckley had succeeded in killing her past through you. The thought of my life without you – well, I just can’t bear to think about it.”
“Let’s get Angelica and go home, okay, T?”
“Yeah, baby, let’s go home.”
* * *
Faye Buckley sat in her living room once more. This time there were no members of the CCC to comfort her with words of support. Those she had given her misplaced feelings of love turned to hate had abandoned her in light of the testimony revealed in court today.
She thought back to that time all those years ago. She had been so happy, so in love. Kelly is as beautiful today as she was back then. I could tell the kindness and love that I shared in was still there, too. She had a dream and followed it. If I had possessed an ounce of sense, I could have been a part of that dream instead of turning into her worst nightmare.
Faye smirked as she looked around the empty room. Perhaps if I had had the courage to be true to myself and my feelings, this room wouldn’t be empty now – maybe someone like Kelly or even Kelly herself would be sitting across from me and none of this horrid part of my life would have taken place.
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WOW that was amazing. Thank you and please keep it up.
RC, there arent enough words to describe the magnitude of the intensity presented here. You captured FB’s soul wrenching destruction of herself; and in the end, I feel she took her fate like a coward – suicide.
RC, Thank you!
Thank so much for this wonderful and sad chapter. To bad that in this world today there are still the Faye Buckleys. Thanks
That was great I am a little sad for faye but also pissed that she won’t go jail
Oh man alive, this was some chapter. So much sadness and hypocrisy abounds in FB and she took the coward’s way out of it all. Too bad that she thought that suicide was the only way out of the situation. If only she could have been honest with herself and taken the punishment that the jury was to mete out to her. She could have gotten over that with counseling and asked Kelley’s forgiveness and probably would have received it. Yes she made a mess out of her life and brought others into it as well and she has paid for it dearly. This was some story. Now where do we go from here and how does Nancy become involved in Bette’s life again. With Helena perhaps, Nancy will get to show Helena’s duplicity with Faye and the hatred that Helena harbours for Bette. I do not believe that Helena will leave Bette and Tina alone, she will continue until she hurts one or both of them including the child. The woman is SERIOUSLY EMOTIONALLY DISTURBED. I don’t know how I will be able to read the story because I just can not read anything hurtful about B & T. I understand that this is irrational but I only want to see them happy and in love. You did a wonderful job in telling this story.
A dignified end for Faye, at least she acknowledged herself at the end
shit..there you go leaving us like that. Thanks for such a wondeful chapter and maybe I don’t hate Faye as much as I did in the beginning. post soon
BRAVO!! A 10 star ending to a 10 star courtroom drama. You captured Faye’s anquish and tortured mind perfectly – and taking her life was fitting since it is the coward’s way out…it is a sad ending to a wasted life, but fitting to those whose hypocrisy and self-hatred bring nothing but harm and hurt to others. You accomplished what every fine writer does in bringing all the pieces of the puzzle together. You also have an extreme talent of getting into the minds of the characters and letting us know exactly what’s going on inside their heads.
…but I see there’s still some pieces of the puzzle out there and it can only be with HellNO, right? Bring it on, rc. Let Nancy slam the crap out of her!
it was a fitiing ending for one bitter woman… i didn’t think she would had lasted long in jail… great chapter… great story…please continue
Kelly may not feel so guilt free once she learns of Faye’s suicide. And now what of Bette? Faye did not own up to hurting Bette.
That was awesome!
Hmmm, cross paths again? It will either be because of HeLL-ena or maybe an encounter with Alice?
That was both sad and beautiful. Sad that some many lives were tainted by a hatred, that was initially a love shared by two people. It was sad that Faye took that way out…and believed that was the “only” way out. Freedom from the prison she herself created years ago. RC..thanks for this amazing chapter. Please continue…Nancy will probably help Bette & Tina out with Helena.
Wow what a wonderful chapter. I’ve enjoyed every chapter you’ve written. Glad to hear know we haven’t heard the last of Nancy. Bring on a new story, you are a great storyteller and we’ll read and enjoy whatever you write. thank you.
Indeed there was no other way out for Faye other than to die by her own hands rather to suffer in jail even further. Now next one to get the long arm of justice would b Hell-ana. Tks for posting
I like very much the way you depicted Faye Buckey’s final tragic realization of the endless emptiness of the life she choiced to build, denying everything true and good to become the worst type of human being possible. It was a very sensible way to do that, far beyond what would have been so easy to do : to only show her as an incurable blind hateful bigot, even after Kelly’s painful statement.
And what a cruel irony to see this Christian fanatic committing the worst “sin” ever : suicide !
If only all these hopeless hateful bigots could know such a realization’s day long before it would be too late for us – and too late to avoid the evil.
Now whatever the way we all choice to consider Faye’s case, her last note was truly a heartbreaking one and it deeply touched me. Because it must be so awful to realize how much you wasted your own life, hurting everybody around you, making yourself a total failure and a monster. This note, in a way, is the hardest punishment this woman could ever have received.
Finally… My goodness, what a cliffhanger here !!! I hate you right now, because you just put a huge dilemma in my reader’s heart : to feel happy to know we’ll find this so engaging Nancy sooon – and at the same time feeling guilt to feel that way, because no doubt this welcomed come back should also let us know that our Bette will be in trouble again ! God, what are you doing to us, here ! (lol)
Congratulations for your amazing work ! This entire trial was such an unforgettable moment in our fanfictions’ world. 1000 thanks for that !!
that was intense and very deep. wonderfully written. thanks for this great story. again soon please.
Wow, rc. Well Faye is gone, but I can’t help feeling sorry for her. I wouldn’t wish suicide on anyone. Her life was so full of sadness and lies. Thank you for this most poignant chapter. I hope that everyone was affected by this trial recovers and learns from Faye’s example. “Fate had already written for her future.…and in that script she and Bette Porter will once again cross paths.” Dun dun dun!!! I hope this doesn’t mean more trouble for Bette…well, at least not for a long while. ;)
That was FABULOUS..THANKS
THAT WAS EXCELLENT!!!!!