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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 80 Read 79 above first!!

    Story written on October 24, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57266
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    Susan the Savior? Does everyone think so including Bette & Tina? Does HellBitch get Tina? Run to her, Bette, as fast as you can!!

    Alice was still mumbling when she got back to the table.

     

    “Al, what the ***** are you doing talking to yourself?” Shane asked.

     

    “Nothin’, Nothin’, just thinking to myself.”  Everybody was so high on Susan right now after helping kick Candyass out of town, there was no sense in even bringing up what was on her mind.

     

    Alice‘s mind was whirling and she found herself repeating in her head the same question she heard from Susan, “Damn it, who the ***** is she? Who is Susan LaFay?”

     

     

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    It was the end of her day at The Planet and Susan traipsed down to the pay phone.  She grabbed a napkin off the counter as usual and wiped the phone.   “Filthy public phones,” she muttered. “I won’t miss this.”

     

     

    “Yes, what?”

     

    “Look, we’ve known each other for awhile nowI need to know.  Is there somebody else coming to this party?”

     

    “The somebody else, meaning the hammer and nails person, is leaving town.  Seems you took care of that.”

     

    “And there’s no surprise guest you’ve arranged?”

     

    “What the ***** are you talking about?”

     

    “Nothing. See ya.”

     

     

    Susan hung up, turned to leave but stopped and turned back to the phone and picked it up.   Punched in the number.  She didn’t wait for the hello on the other end.

     

    “Yeah, I know, it’s being moved up. “

     

    Again, she hung up.  This time she turned, headed for the door and threw the

    Napkin into a trash can.

     

    On the walk back to the house Susan did a lot of mumbling – mostly, I want to go home.  It’s time.  I am so freaking glad it’s being moved up.

     

     

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    Now, Helena was doing a little pacing back and forth. 

     

    Who the ***** was Susan talking about?  She’s not a stupid person.  She must have seen somebody, but where and why would she think they were involved in this?  And why would they be involved in this?  What interest would anyone else have in Tina and Bette’s relationship?   Damn, Helena thought, I do not like not being in control of the entire situation.

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    1. RC,

      An absolute shocker.

      All this drama is leaping off the screen and making a little movie in my head. As for the cliff hanger, thank you for torturing me a little longer. These events have kept me right on the edge of my seat. The deception is only now starting to make some sense however I am fascinated as to where you will lead next.

      This mystery is captivating and mesmerizing. I am completely enthralled by your wonderful writing. The pace has just ramped up several notches and like the runaway train is only just managing to stay on the rails

      Please continue real soon as I’m not sure my heart can take the waiting to long.

      Thank you for sharing your talent.

      Your Loyal Fan.

      PS – What happened to chapter 79?

    2. Ahh what’s going on?! I’m soo confused! I hope that Bette doesn’t fall for their trap. Is it a trap? *Scratches head* I have no idea. Post ASAP please!!!!

    5. you soo rock girl. the drama is fast and thick.

      “it was the bette porter take no prisoners stride.” wooo yaaaa. what a sight, for sure.

      rc this is rolling quite nicely. im on the edge of my seat, with my popcorn and my drink. i dont but do want you to hurry up. know what i mean. thanks.

    6. RC…damn what the hell is happening? I’m with Barrie…Is Susan a schizo? Is the other woman really Susan’s own reflection? Why did Tina say she was going to visit with Kit and just leave the baby instead? All questions and many more. Damn so much DRAMA..love it! Thanks for the chapter RC.

    9. Who is the mystery woman, who has Tina, will Bette be in time. will she kill both of them. Alice is on the ball. she knows to much.about Helene thanks

    14. Who is the woman outside The Planet? Is Susan a schizo? If Tina went to spend time with Kit, why wasn’t she there when Bette called? Why did she leave the baby with Kit? Good Lord, all ‘Hell’ has broken lose and all I have are questions! I hope your next chapter clears it all up and I also hope that the woman in the window is an ally to BnT…or Peggy!

    16. Oh come on arceextl, you not only leave us hanging as to the identity of our mistery woman, but now Bette and Shane are headed into the teeth of danger with no way of contacting anyone! Please post soon and reveal. Great suspensive chapter.

    19. i’m on the edge of my seat, all work is forgotten…who’s another woman, is she good or bed? i know hellno can’t win but she can give a scare, i don’t want anythign happening to the girls, great suspense, can’t wait for more

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