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    Lucky in Love (Chapter 11)

    Story written on September 13, 2006 by SammysGirl.
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    Number of Comments: 17
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=62431
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    Alice gets Dana back on the tennis court, with a little help from Shane, Bette and Tina forgive each other, and Helena and Lara do a little cooking. (Oh, and some “guy” falls for Dana.)

    “Aha, it is a conspiracy!” Helena gamely lifted her dark glasses and inspected the herbs. “They could cut it at a more civil hour. They just choose not to.”

    Tina sat in the rocker in Angelica’s room practicing what she wanted to say to Bette. She expected her to react cautiously. After all, from Tina’s perspective this had been coming for six months, but for Bette it could be another life altering decision on Tina’s part. She smiled as she thought about the little joke she wanted to make about bringing Bette into the process at the earliest possible opportunity.

    A couple of miles away, Bette sat in the rocker in Angelica’s room rehearsing what she wanted to say to Tina. Figuring that she should actually practice what she had so recently preached, she’d decided to tell Tina about the artist. She expected Tina to react strongly, but for the life of her, had no idea from which side of the fence it would be.

    Dana was ready to go. Her racket bag sat by the table as it had so often, but this time it made her nervous to even look at it. Finally she heard Shane and opened the front door before she could knock. She picked up her gear and bounded past a startled Shane.

    “What gives?’

    “Don’t ask,” Alice said, locking the door behind her. “I’m driving your car,” Alice called, forcing Dana to backtrack from Shane’s jeep toward the garage.

    “What about this?” Shane asked, shaking the plastic bag she was holding.

    "First we’ll tell her where we’re going, then we’ll do that.” Alice answered.

    “THE Beth Kenyon?” She didn’t believe it.

    “She’s a friend,” Shane said.

    “Since when,” challenged Dana.

    “Since before she was famous,” Shane said. “She has a court.”

    “And if there’s anybody in this town who appreciates the value of discretion, it’s her,” Alice added.

    “But when did you talk to her?” Dana wasn’t convinced.

    “I asked her about the possibility a week ago and called her last night to confirm.” Pleased with her answer, Shane smiled into the rearview mirror. Dana stared back before turning to Alice.

    “I was there when the doctor told you that the all clear for us to be together was also the all clear for you to try other things,” Alice explained. “So I asked him if you could try this and he said yes, as long as you take it easy.” She nodded slightly at Shane, who produced the bag and handed it to Dana.

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    2. Hmmm, Tina’s response to Bette’s statement/accusations seems glossed over, like you wrote just to get it over with. I expected more dialog and a more pensive reply, but you’ve moved them along so we’ll see where else you take them. I have to admit I only read the Bette Tina parts of this story.

    3. Lara and Helena was hot (hope they got all the onion off though…might not smell too hot later…lol) I am glad Bette and Tina forgave each other…I was hoping that NC-17 rating was for them…but it would be too soon I guess…at least let them get home first…lol.

    4. Just back from a couple of weeks away and catching up on your story and it is still amazingly wonderful. I still quite like Helara as a description for Helena and Lara mix, but you are the master and you of course know best, as always. X

    6. I’m floating in happy place called Danish Land.:) Great update. Even though Dana pushed herself too far, I’m still very proud of her. She’s a fighter. I’m glad to see Danish happy together. Awesome job. Sharapova! I just watched her win the U.S. Open. My two favorite players were against each other. Sharapova and Justine Henin-Hardenne. It was an exciting match for me. I love this fic. I’m enjoying it very much. I can’t wait to read more.

    7. I think you found the good mix between love, soulmates and best friends between Alice and Dana. They know eachother so well and it’s so nice to read some really happy Danish. Through some tennis in there and it fits. Keep it up, your story makes me smile…thanks for that!

    10. that was so sweet between alice and dana; and i usually only read for bette and tina…so more b and t please…but i’ll keep reading anywayz now i’ve discovered your story…PPS

    12. awwww this is sooo fucking cute!!! can’t wait to see what happens next. I LOVE DAnisH! and bring bette and tina back together, good for them for working it out.

    13. “Listen, Al, if Charlie follows me home, can I keep him?” -how cute is dana?? this was such an all around sweet chapter for all the couples. although i’m sure it’ll get complicated again when bette finds what she thinks is the right time to tell tina about the artist. poor tibette. i thought u wrote dana’s return to tennis perfectly. she would have of course pushed herself too hard. i liked how alice knew the moment when dana began to hurt. very well written. loved it all! looking forward to another post

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