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Masked Feelings CH 92 3rd Anniversary Halloween edition
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David slept peacefully, knowing that Alice and Dana were being watched. Diana was more than capable of taking care of business and doing as instructed. He loved her focus and that twisted imagination. Tony was no longer a thorn in his side and she had humilated him to the very end. He was wondering if he needed to be concerned with the fact that she was interested in women. So many women had been attracted to one or the other. He’d need to keep a close eye on this one for so many reasons other than possibly getting in the way of the two being together.
Diana could very well be a huge threat to him. David knew that she could turn on him if she knew his true motives. He hadn’t seen her since that night at the massage parlor. She was supposed to check in with him and did once when there was trouble at the club they went to. He assumed that Alice and Dana went home, but found out that they had never gotten there. Diana wasn’t answering the cell phone that he had provided her with. She had better get back to him soon or he was going to assume the worst about her.
In the meantime, he had Roxy to play with. She had to be hurting plenty bad by now. He had backed off that last dose. It had been hours since and she was surely down by now. It was time to see just how she was fairing and it was better to find out in person. Sometimes you could see more than a camera ever could portray.
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Kristen had been in many morgues before but none had bothered her like this one. Maybe it’s because of the fact that her stillborn child was in one of these steel cabinets, a temporary tomb. It was so cold and clinical. Her heart ached. She held her stomach, feeling the emptiness where her baby used to be, only hours ago. Bitterness filled the hollow space and it was going to be the source of her focus. Someone was going to be on the receiving end of her pain and at this point it really didn’t matter who.
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First and foremost, Happy 3rd Anniversary!!!!! It’s positively bananas that you have managed to keep up with this story for 3 years and kept all of us extremely engaged over that time period. Thank you so much for your dedication and commitment to the quality of this story. You’re awesome. Now that I got being nice out of the way, let me get straight to my comments. Do not think for a minute that I don’t realize you’re completely sucking up to me because you want me to do more writing. I know you’re game and sadly, you are winning this battle. I have caved twice already and I’m sure you have those wheels spinning in overdrive trying to figure out how to get more out of me. I should thank you for letting me be an extremely small piece of your storytelling, because it has been a lot of fun. A little frustrating and stressful, but a lot of fun. So thank you. As for me being more twisted than you are, I’m sure that you don’t mean that, because I personally think you are one of, if not these most twisted person that I know. Which is pretty damn impressive to say the least. You really threw quite a few curves into this latest chapter that I wasn’t expecting. I only knew the part I was writing, so I was pleasantly surprised as I read this ridiculously long anniversary chapter. I don’t know if we have ever had this conversation before, but I’m with Dana, wax museums are just freakin’ creepy and I want no part of them. I’ve thought about going to one and then thought better of it. The idea of having sex in a wax museum with all those “fake” people watching in particular is a bit much to handle. Although it sounds as if Alice & Dana have more on their plates to worry about at the moment. I’m curious to see how you’re going to further implement this new character of yours. She seems to be causing trouble for Dana and stress for Alice, yet both of them are drawn to her. Better watch the fire you start when you invite a third party into your bed. Speaking of watching the fires you start, it certainly sounds as if Kristen is in for a world of trouble. I hope she is up for the challenge of dealing with the mob on a day to day grind, plus dealing with the grief of losing a child and the rest of her family. She could be a Roxy in the making. I do love how you are showing Kristen’s entry into this world, as you are also showing how Roxy came into being the Roxy that we knew. I’m enjoying these little snippets of flashbacks. You’re right, I probably will never be a Roxy fan and you won’t be able to sway me, but she might be the lesser of two, possible three or four evils … so who’s to say where I might land in that debate. Marco I’m sure is going to add another interesting wrinkle into this story. Is he supposed to be worse than Tony? I’m extremely intrigued to find out. And of course there is always David and his ever so lovely mind games. Plus add in the possibility you threw in that he is not entirely calling the shots and I’m anxiously awaiting another chapter. I also wanted to take this opportunity to thank everyone who wished me a happy birthday and to everyone that thanked me for the outline for chapter 91. I had an awesome birthday and really enjoyed my present from brteyes. She allowed me to play in her world and it was a hell of a lot of fun to say the least. Writing Tony’s death scene was more fun than I’ve had writing in a really long time and thankfully it fit in line with what brteyes wanted to do. As for Jenny’s death scene, I merely requested her death and gave a few suggestions, but that was entirely brteyes and her twisted imagination. And the threesome, well I certainly had more to do with the threesome in this chapter than the last. Again I wanted to thank everyone for their kind words. And not to spoil too much of this story for anyone else reading but Diana is not another Roxy … she is something entirely different, so you don’t want to miss it. I can’t wait for the next chapter, so keep it coming. Back to the bubble ….
First of all, let me say “happy anniversary” to you on this milestone. You have been such a constant presence on the site with your amazing storytelling and beautifully written chapters. They are not always easy to read, but, I am glad that I have. Thank you. I have to tell you… I was exhausted when I finished reading this. I can only imagine how wiped out you must have been after writing it. I may be crazy, but, I felt that this chapter was actually pretty positive for most characters. I hope David continues to use Diana for surveillance on the girls. Making Roxy shoot herself up? Evil. I wonder if he was lying when he said he was just following orders. Hmmmmm… Kristen is scaring me a bit. She has suffered a terrible blow and it seems to have caused her to lose her connection to her kids. They are true innocents in this and I hope she is able to get back to them soon. Alice was not the cause of losing the baby, but, I can see how she might think that way. I hope she doesn’t try to kill two birds with one stone by hurting Alice by getting together with Dana. Finding the key was a stroke of luck – it’ll be interesting to see what it opens. She is certainly stepping into the fire with going up against the mob. I can’t believe how she just killed that guy. I guess she did find out that Bobby wasn’t behind Roxy being gone. She better be careful. It seems she is already a step behind. Marco, eh? Another new character? ;-D I’m curious to see what he is like. It almost sounds like he will be an improvement over Tony in that he won’t think with his pecker or his ego, but, he does sound ruthless. I guess we will see. Interesting that Bobby pegged the start of the problems to Roxy’s disappearance. Good, too, that he wasn’t tying it to Alice. Roxy… So, wait, wasn’t she taken by David *last* Halloween? Holy crap. It also just hit me that Roxy knows what David looks like. That could prove to be very interesting. I liked to hear about how she got started in her career. I look forward to more flashbacks. I kind of agree with Roxy: For all the bad she has done in her life, she didn’t deserve what David has done to her. I’m amazed that she still has some strength left in her – like trying the thing with the syringe. I guess it comes from having always had to be in survival mode. She is able to keep going when others would have given up. David better watch it with his threats. Roxy has been through hell – more than the FBI or mob could do to her. She did an amazing job in making it as far as she has in the desert. I am guessing that David is not actively watching her, but, left the syringe in the RV just in case. I like that Roxy is already thinking about going through detox. I wonder if David will allow that. I am glad she has that mystery voice. Maybe some day she will be able to hear it without aid of drugs. I like that Diana seems to be taking steps to help the girls that have nothing to do with just keeping them safe. I really hope she is not headed down the Roxy route, though. I hope she keeps just wanting to help them and keep them safe. They really need someone in their corner. Then again… I am not sure why Diana felt the need to talk to Alice on the phone. Is she trying to drive a wedge? The NC-17? That had to be some of the hottest I have ever read. Man… Not only hot, but, I like that Dana had to relinquish control and that this odd situation seemed to draw Danish closer together – at least for that time. Power drill? I did not see that one coming. Wow. Well done. I am glad you touched on Dana’s tennis career. I was wondering about what all this insanity was doing to it – about what I expected. Tennis is a big part of her identity and I hope she can rebound quickly. I hope you delve more into what is going on with Dana. I guess she could just be numb from everything that is going on, but, I don’t like her pulling away from Alice. OK. The ending creeped me out. I am not a fan of wax museums and even less of the “chamber of horrors”. The fact that David knew about it and had set up his own display is beyond disturbing. And, of course, the fact that he plans to use some of those items on the girls. Gah. Marriage proposal? I understand where Alice is coming from, but, it is the wrong time and definitely the wrong place. I hope Dana can find the right words to respond to it. Amazing chapter, once again. You rock. And don’t worry: I’ll be nearby if you ever need any help. Thanks so much, brteyes!!
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Ok HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!! :D So let me just say WOW another long chapter lol a big thank you. I agree with Magoose wen i say compared to some of ur chapter this one has been quite positive for them all. I must say thou when Alice and Dana were in the wax museum and the mannequin looked and smelt like Lara reli creeped me out. I also get more and more worried everytime the fact tht Alice is in for some hell of a torturing form David im reli scared for her, however i trust u to look after the girls :) Kristen was brave to stand up to Bobby like that and clever to end up leaving with tht money lol however i know she is going thru a lot but she needs to remember althou she lost a child she still has 2 at home that need there mom but again she is worrying me slightly. . . is she losing it a little? I dont know lol. Also part of me thinks tht Dana is going to cheat with Diana, Diana clearly is gettin involved quite deeply with these two which im pleased of bcus she cud turn out to be a great asset to Al and Dana but tell me Dana wnt cheat … please?? lol. Again i say it a lot but poor Roxy having tht hope of freedom to only have to make her way thru a scorching hot desert, i reli hope she makes it i think she deserves to we need to see more of Roxy and find out more about Erika etc. Now to the sex scene, WOW you reli took me by suprise with tht one i mean the power drill lol didnt see tht coming however i like how u had Dana lose some of or all of her control during tht time it opened up alot for Al and Dana and certainly made Alice realise things need to change between them. Im blabbin on now so all i will say is WOW again to the ending asking Dana to marry her, Im curious to see how Dana will react I hope it positive :D. Thank for another fantastic chapter and can not wait for more u always write so brilliantly Thank you again PPS :) xxx
Did I really miss two chapters of your’s??? how could that happen? I am so sorry for not leaving you a comment on your last chapter. Must have been busy with someone. lol If you’re going to post on Thanksgiving then I am on time. Hope you still get to read my comment. I still love your story and appreciate that you waste your free time on writing. You’re priceless. I’m having a few questions again. You wrote about a threesome the last time (this time around it wasn’t you) but did you ever have a threesome? If not, would you consider it? (with me e.g., lol) Also, I didn’t get your phone number. That made me sleep pretty bad I must say. Is there a chnace I’ll hear from you? I know you have a lot of admirers but trust me that no one’s like me lol. Are you single already or do I have to wait? Just tell me lol. See you on Thanksgiving…..hopefully. Your secret admirer!
Oh my gosh! 48 pages!!! This is your new record, isn’t it? You thought you wouldn’t break it anytime soon, huh? Now you proved yourself wrong, lol. This one was really amazing. It still surprises me that I can’t get enough of your story. It has a lot of information in this chapter so it took me more than a few days to compensate everything. David actually surprised me in this chapter. There’s definitely a good reason why he’s letting Roxy go. Of course, she doesn’t know that she’s having that chip in her skin….what kind of an FBI agent is she? LOL Well, at least I hope she’ll get through the desert safely. I’m kinda excited to read more about her and Erika. This should be a nice “past” story of them. I hope, there’s a future, too. I would love to see Roxy kick David’s ass at some point. In a way, I’m sure it was a mistake to let her escape. She’s gonna get his ass sooner or later. I guess, he buried his own gravel by freeing her. And I thought he’s clever, lol. The thing with the heroine might be a great challenge for her. It won’t be easy to get away from that. This drug could help her through these tough times though. Maybe I’ll sound stupid by saying that because drugs can’t solve any problems but in her situation it’s probably the only way out. I just hope that she’ll get stronger from it even though it really sounds sooo damn crazy. I believe that she’s a smart lady. She’s gonna get her life back….maybe on your next anniversary? LOL Btw, HAPPY ANNIVERSARY, DARLIN’!!!!! You’ve started writing it in 2005. Damn, you’ve really came a long way. This story is just getting better and better. Now you even have a co-writer which is just fantastic. I know that you’re happy to have someone who’s helping you out. Big thanks to you, Pineapple. You’re doing a great job. Al and Dana are having a complicated life at the moment. There’s something wrong about Dana. Could it be that she’s falling out of love with Alice? I think, Diana’s standing in the way somehow. After that threesome Dana’s having struggles about her relationship. She doesn’t seem to be excited when Alice’s around nor does she seem to care when Al tells her something about her everyday life. Is she bored with her? Or is Diana the reason why she’s behaving like she does? Dana even spies on Diana which is pretty weird considering that she’s already taken. The situation where Al’s calling Dana and Diana’s taking the phone from her reminds me of how Roxy took the phone from Al when Dana called. I fear, that Dana will be having an affair with Diana. It’s undeniable that they like each other…..a lot. There might be more to that. It could break Al. Diana’s absolutely having the hots for Dana. This is more than obvious. Someone’s falling for Dana….and it’s not Alice. I decided that I don’t want to sleep with Dana anymore, lol. There’s someone else I’m liking in this story. But I won’t tell you, lol. Or maybe later. And no, it’s not a guy, lol. Alice asking Dana if she wants to marry her should make me happy. Well, it was definitely sweet….but the timing wasn’t right….and the location was just horrible, lol. If I were asked in a wax museum I’d say no, lol. Probably, Dana’s gonna say the same….am I right?Yeah, I’m right, lol. It would creep me out. To me, Kristen is the star of this chapter. She finally shows us what she’s capable of. Really dominant and dangerous….and fearless. I’m liking that. I’d sleep with her right away, lol. I know that my woman wouldn’t mind…..would she? lol At least, now I know how to get to money in a short period of time. Just need to look after someone like Roxy, get to her place and wait for someone like Bobby, lol. So, you expect from me to comment? Why? You know I’m being curious so you’ll get a lot of whys. Oh, and you still owe to tell me how David got to his money. Did he steal it from someone? He probably did….but from whom? Speaking of bad memory, lol. You’re asking a lot of questions in your comment to me. I’m gonna throw some at you as well. For one, what makes you happy or what will make you happy? Oh God….how I do feel like about screaming? This can’t be a serious question. You know that I’m a prude but maybe I’m gonna answer that one in private. You just have to remind me again….you know, bad memory and such. Ehm, you still want that rabbit story? Is it something that would turn you on? LOL If so, I’ll write you one….and what do I owe you for the rest of my life if I don’t write it? You better not flirt with me. Just in case you forgot but your girlfriend might be reading it, too, lol. Aren’t you scared that she’s gonna give you a hard time? Or aren’t you committed to her? I guess, you tell me someday….maybe on New Year’s;-))) Alright, I think I’ve written too much again. This is your fault, lol. So yeah, I’ll make an exit but I’ll stay around for more of course. I’m certain, that you’re already writing on your next chapter. It makes me truly happy that you keep on writing. Aren’t you a gem? Hmmmm, just sometimes….oh, and before I forget it: you’re so cute, baby….you’re so cute!!!! LOL Hope you had a great day, honey. Talk to you soon. ♥♥♥Love you♥♥♥