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Masked Feelings CH 93 Thanksgiving
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Roxy’s scores on her exams reflected that of the average median, but that wasn’t what she was aiming for. She wanted to make her mentor feel proud of her, after all she was the one that pulled strings to get her here. Roxy was most times her own worst enemy. She couldn’t be satisfied with her own accomplishments without comparing herself to someone else. And as we know, you most always come out on the short end when you do that.
Roxy wasn’t one to really compare herself to a man. She thought men were the inferior sex. They used their physical strength to show their power. Women had to rely on using brains over brawn. This is how Roxy saw all men and this wasn’t a fair assessment of all of them. No man in her life had ever changed the way she saw them and she was never even interested in dating one. She always figured that she’d spend her life alone. Roxy thought that she didn’t need anyone to make her feel complete, but she was about to be blown out of the water by her own theory. There was an ideal mate for everyone, if you were the lucky enough to be at the right place at the right time.
As mentioned before, Roxy hated the classroom setting. She felt intimitated by her peers as well as the instructors. This was like reliving the police academy but this was so much more intense. This was probably the most important thing she’d do in her life. Roxy hadn’t ever felt that drive about excelling in anything, until now. The idea of being the best in the class was most likely a pipe dream in her eyes but it was there. With a whole lot of studying, she might be able to edge out the three that we’re vying for the top spot.
While Erika excelled in the classroom studies, Roxy was inching ahead of her in the field. She took an instant disliking to Erika since the first time the instructor asked her what was wrong with the answer she gave for one of the questions. It was so damn humiliating to be taken down a notch in front of the whole class. She made sure that she didn’t show any reaction to what she did, inside however, Roxy was fuming. When she held in her feeling this way, it only meant that someone should be watching their back. Erika, at this point had a bullseye on her.
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YES YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!! DONT U DARE STOP LOL!!! Im reli intrigued to continue with Roxy and Erika’s past, cant wait to read more on tht, i wud like to see wat actually brings them together! U reli worry me with the Alice and her grim future if David gets his way … make sure he dusnt lol. Plus as much as i wud like Diana to stay to keep Al and Dana safe … why do i feel Dana and Diana are gettin a little to close .. is it just me? Im reli pleased Alice accepted Dana’s proposal they need something good to look forward to without some sort of impending doom, known or unknown lol. You wont get rid me lady, im here right till the very end this story is to damn good to give up on!! Dont worry about tht lol. Plus ThePineappleHead sure is imaginative then if it down to her for ur sex scenes lol u make a great duo wen it comes to writing :) Anyways another fantastic chapter tht always leaves me wanting more as usual so look forward to ur next post oh and agen PLEASE CONTINUE!! Too good not too :D xxx
It may be a shorter chapter, but, still up to your excellent standards, brteyes! Love the flashbacks on Roxy and Erika. It was nice that Roxy found the capacity for love after everything in her youth and that she found such a match. Looks like fate – and the FBI – made sure they got together. I can’t wait to hear more about it. The reaction to Alice’s proposal went about how I expected – and how it should have gone. I am so glad that they had a conversation about what was going on with Dana. They do seem to be making some steps in their relationship. I am not sure what to think about Dana seeing Diana again and inviting her to Thanksgiving. The turkey thing was pretty funny. I’m glad Dana didn’t let it ruin the day. Gotta say… Dana had a much better proposal. On a personal note: I have my fingers crossed that you will be able to keep your job. It certainly sounds like you have your priorities in order. Thanks so much, once again, for this amazing story!! I hope we get to see much more.
OK, do I need to stepin and knock some sense into Dana? What the hell is the deal with her and Diana? Wh is Dana so dran to her when she has Alice to come home to? Glad Alice accepted the proposal. Lord knows they could use a little bit of happiness know matter how short lived. But anyway, please please please continue with this story because I love it so. Even though I was MIA for a few months. But now I’m back to stay. Please post soon.
Hey! Here I am again. Did you miss me? I’m sure you did. I hoped to get to read something from you on Christmas. Guess, you have been busy with someone this time, huh? Well, I am going to forgive you…..two wrongs make an equal and I am still hoping to get your number anytime soon. You can’t say no all the time, can you? Or do you want me to be more convincing here? You seemed to be a little harsh to me in your last comment. That’s a sign of liking me-)))) I figured that maybe you won’t give me your number just because you can’t afford a (cell) phone, LOL. Maybe you also don’t have a girlfriend. Do you just pretend to have one so I’m showing more interest in you? You speak of commitment? We should talk about it when we spend some time together if you know what I mean. Somehow I think you might be a shy lady. What does your girlfriend like about you? There are a lot of women out there. You shouldn’t waste your time with just one single girl. Does your girl even like you? Is she faithful? I want you to continue with your story just so I can get to know you better. Someday you’ll give in…..no doubt about it-))) See ya the next time around.
Hi brteyes! Belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!! Like always, I’m late to your party. This chapter wasn’t that much to read as the last two of your’s but it’s never about the quantity….just quality and you have plenty of it. I am really enjoying the Erika/Roxy parts. This is definitely going to be a great storyline. Wanted to write this comment earlier, just never had the time to do so. I’m glad, you didn’t post another chapter before I got the chance to comment here. Like your other fans I don’t want you to stop writing. Your writing is by far the best I ever had the luck to read. Not that I want to command you here but….don’t you dare ending it here, lol. I knew that there would be another devil after Tony”s death. Why not a woman this time? It would be more fun this way around. Especially if she were a lesbian, too. Maybe you can overthink it again? I love that Kristen’s so confident at the moment. I hope she didn’t make a mistake by crossing Bobbie’s way. It’ll be pretty exciting to see where this is going. Will she change the sides? Or kill some of the mobsters? I think she might have some killer instinct here. Her family’s gonna suffer a lot. She’ll probably lose what she has. The mob will absolutely find out about her life and that she’s an agent. There’s a lot she’s risking and I really really hope that she won’t get in trouble. What’s going to happen to Roxy? Now that David has her in his hands she won’t even think about getting close to Alice. In the end he’ll demand from her to kill Dana and Al. This might be very confusing and I suppose she would do it since she promised this to David. He can end her life at anytime now. Hope this won’t happen though. Did I mention that I like this Erika/Roxy storyline? There’s something magical about it, but only because you descibe it so beautifully.It’s quite funny that in this particular relationship agony is turning into love eventually. Please write more about it. A couple days ago I’ve rewatched an episode from seasonn 2 and Sharon was in there. I wanted to know when you’re going to continue that part. Hope, it’s gonna be soon. I could see that Dana would say no to Al’s proposal. It was all the surprising to see Dana proposing to Al when all her friends and Diana were around. She probably swallowed pretty hard upon hearing it. Still am a little confused about her part in this story. Will she be a troublemaker and destroy what Al and Dana have? Certainly, she seems to be having the hots for Dana and vice versa….just don’t make it happen, please. This already reminds me of Roxy’s and Al’s sneaking around. Please, don’t let Dana cheat on Al. It would be sooooo wrong. I’m sure, that this isn’t my opinion only. Who’s with me, huh? You have nice questions again. Not sure if I like dominant women….but I sure would like it if you were one, lol. Are you bossy, brteyes? I still would like to have a little adventure with Kristen. She’s absolutely hot, don’t you think? My partner probably wouldn’t mind since she’s flirting with others, too. Oh, and yes…..you’re a cutie. I can tell-))) So, what did you do on New Year’s? Any fun stories to tell? When will we get to read your next chapter? It’s about damn time, right? Or are you getting lazy again? LOL Thanks for entertaining me with your story. I couldn’t ask for more….or maybe I could, lol. See you the next time around and I hope it’s soon. Btw, I have no time to write you that rabbit story, lol. Fabulous update as always. POST SOON, BRTEYES!!!! LOVE YA!!!!!!
brteyes, I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE, PLEAASSSEEEE!!! I look forward to each and every post of “MF” ever since I started reading it. I must apologize for missing to comment on your last giant chapter. It was partly due to the fact that I was away for a few weeks and could not get my act together sooner. The shear massiveness of your last post both in terms of content and length totally blew me away. Both you and The Pineapple Head are incredible writers. Unbelievable, hats off to you!! And thank you again to TPH for your contribution to the last 2 posts. Also I would like to congratulate you, brteyes, on your 3rd year milestone. I truly enjoyed reading the previous particularly overwhelming chapter. Both of your imagination are out of this world. Roxy’s journey to the trailer was so well written. I actually felt really sorry that she was in such a predicament. The threesome was incredible powerful. Yes, I also found the wax museum an odd place for A to propose to D or to have a serious talk and even creepier to make out there. I can’t help but worry about Marco. He might not play mind games like Tony did but he was all business and that only means he would not hesitate to harm A & D if he thought they had anything to do with Gena’s and Tony’s death. Back to this post. Very interesting start of Roxy and Erika’s friendship. I love how the instructor purposely put the 2 of them together. Fascinating strategy. I suppose in order to stay in the program, Roxy had to set her difference aside to cooperate with Erika. I too am looking forward to finding out how they would eventually get together.I am so happy to see A & D finally have a decent conversation which was long overdue. I understood A’s concern in which was legitimate that D shut her out. I hope D would realize that her tennis standing was just a small part of her problem. She never really properly addressed her feelings on the “death of Lara” nor A’s involvement with Roxy. Her nature was to run away from the problem and hopefully it would not return. I sincerely hope that she would give it a try to discuss with A what really bothered her from then on.The engagement proposal made more sense to me and that D did it in front of everyone. At least she had shown A that she was committed in their relationship. However, I worry about D having some sort of magnetic attraction to Diana. I am not sure it was a good idea that she hired her as a trainer. I hope Diana would not go all psycho on them. Having Diana at the Thanksgiving dinner did not sit well with me at all. I scares me that she brutally killed Jenny and was all smile to the gang. I was perplexed by her last comment, “don’t forget all the sex…and I should know, I’ve seen it”? What was her purpose? I can only hope that she was genuine to A & D. So when David decided to move in on them, Diana would lend a hand. I can only wish. As for the lack of comments issue, I can only say from a reader’s point of view that your thriller is often times incredibly mind blowing and I was left speechless many times. For someone like me who does not write much and to actually write down how I feel is not so simple. Also, in the past, all the comments you had received at the end of each post were often rather lengthy which can be intimidating, like what I am doing right now. In the beginning, I found myself being overwhelmed and wonder if I could even come up with something sensible and constructive to say. Overtime, it got easier. So I hope others too will show their support even with just a short sentence. And to you brteyes, please do not be discouraged. Lastly, I wish to thank you for incorporating the unemployment issue in this story. I sincerely hope that the new administration in January will bring our economy back to a more solid ground and that everyone will be gainfully employed. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!!
hell yes!!!!
So I had a little extra time on my hands, so I figured I would finally read this damn chapter. Sorry it’s taken so long, but I’ve had a lot going on and a lot on my mind. Since there was a lot of food in these chapter, pardon the pun, but you certainly do like to stir the pot. You’re playing it as if Diana is going to be the next super villain, but I’m just not convinced. I think she could be a big help to this story, even if she gets off a little on being mischievous. I think we all like to see just how much we can get away with, how far we can push people. Establish the boundaries and fuck with them a bit. I suppose it’s all about how far you want to push things and where you want this to go. Alice & Dana are still on unsteady footing, but more communication is going to make them stronger. Every time they opt not to trust the other, it takes away from what makes them great. You gave us a bit of a break from the mob life, although I’m sure you have something truly evil up your sleeves. While I am a bit interested in the Roxy/Erika storyline, I still don’t think it’s going to change my opinion of Roxy. SUMMERBREEZE & HAIL_DANALICE – I just wanted to thank both of you for your kind words. It really does mean a lot to me. It took a lot of convincing for brteyes to get me to write again, but I had a lot of fun doing it. Glad you both enjoyed it. brteyes, thank you again for letting me have a bit of fun and play in your world. Your faith in me means more than you realize, even if it’s coming from a sick twisted bitch ;-)