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Masked Feelings CH 93 Thanksgiving
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Diana opened the bottles, while Bette took it upon herself to help her fill everyone’s glasses.
Tina – Everything looks great. You both did such a great job.
Dana – Well it’s your turn next year….
Bette – You sound a little irritated.
Dana – She’s fine. Dana has been doing most all the work and she barely had time to get ready.
Tina – We offered to help.
Alice – We had it handled.
Shane – Let’s dig in already.
Alice – You want to carve, Dane?
Dana – I’ll start carving if someone wants to say the blessing first.
While everyone stared blankly at Dana, Tina said a few words… maybe not the blessing she had in mind but it worked.
Dana – Before we get started I’d like to say a few words. Shane… I know it’s been especially hard for you lately, but I hope you realize how much we care about you. Jenny will definitely be missed and we’ll never forget her.
Shane – Thanks….
Dana – Bette and Tina… You are by far the most supportive women that I’ve had the experience of knowing. You’ve done so much for me and I don’t know what I’d do without you both. Diana… I’m happy that you could celebrate Thanksgiving with us. I’m even more thankful that you’re going to help me with my training. I look forward to knowing you better. I hope you can stay around for awhile.
Diana – I’d like to make a toast to you and Alice… and all your guests.
Dana – That will have to wait a minute. I have one more thing to say.
Diana – You’re the captain of this ship…
Dana – Alice…. I can’t always tell you how much you mean to me and I hope you can forgive me for that. You are by far the most important person in my life. Not everyone can have it all like I do. You are my bestfriend and my love. I know I’ve been driving you absolutely crazy since the moment our relationship became so much more.
Alice – I know you love me. That’s all that matters to me.
Dana – You are my everything, Alice.
Dana took her hand and held the ring in the other.
Dana – What do you say, baby… will you marry me?
Alice – You’re really asking me now?
Dana – Yes… and I wanted all our friends to be here to share in this.
Alice – But I thought…..
Dana – I’ve always known that I wanted you.
Alice – Then why didn’t you say yes when I asked you?
Dana – Bad timing on your part… and I wanted to be the one to ask you again.
Alice – Does it really matter to you when you’re the one whose asking?
Dana – Yes, especially when you’re wondering where I stand.
Alice – You’re not going to change your mind, are you?
Shane – Alice… answer the damn question already. The food is getting cold.
Dana – Well?
Diana – Go for it, Alice… or you’ll regret it.
Alice – Yes… yes… of course I’ll marry you.
Dana – I’m so happy. I love you so fucking much.
Tina – Watch the language… try to keep it rated G for our girl.
Dana slipped the engagement ring on her finger.
Dana – It’s official… we’re engaged.
Diana – I think this is my cue for the toast.
Everyone remained seated as Diana raised her glass.
Diana – Congratuations to my two newest friends, Dana and Alice. I wish you a life filled with love, friendship, longevity… and most of all craziness that brings the magic to your relationship. Oh and don’t forget all the sex. You both have that wonderful spark.. and I should know, I’ve seen it.
Diana winks at them, making the other’s wonder what the words meant.
TBC? WELL? SHOULD I CONTINUE?
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YES YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!! DONT U DARE STOP LOL!!! Im reli intrigued to continue with Roxy and Erika’s past, cant wait to read more on tht, i wud like to see wat actually brings them together! U reli worry me with the Alice and her grim future if David gets his way … make sure he dusnt lol. Plus as much as i wud like Diana to stay to keep Al and Dana safe … why do i feel Dana and Diana are gettin a little to close .. is it just me? Im reli pleased Alice accepted Dana’s proposal they need something good to look forward to without some sort of impending doom, known or unknown lol. You wont get rid me lady, im here right till the very end this story is to damn good to give up on!! Dont worry about tht lol. Plus ThePineappleHead sure is imaginative then if it down to her for ur sex scenes lol u make a great duo wen it comes to writing :) Anyways another fantastic chapter tht always leaves me wanting more as usual so look forward to ur next post oh and agen PLEASE CONTINUE!! Too good not too :D xxx
It may be a shorter chapter, but, still up to your excellent standards, brteyes! Love the flashbacks on Roxy and Erika. It was nice that Roxy found the capacity for love after everything in her youth and that she found such a match. Looks like fate – and the FBI – made sure they got together. I can’t wait to hear more about it. The reaction to Alice’s proposal went about how I expected – and how it should have gone. I am so glad that they had a conversation about what was going on with Dana. They do seem to be making some steps in their relationship. I am not sure what to think about Dana seeing Diana again and inviting her to Thanksgiving. The turkey thing was pretty funny. I’m glad Dana didn’t let it ruin the day. Gotta say… Dana had a much better proposal. On a personal note: I have my fingers crossed that you will be able to keep your job. It certainly sounds like you have your priorities in order. Thanks so much, once again, for this amazing story!! I hope we get to see much more.
OK, do I need to stepin and knock some sense into Dana? What the hell is the deal with her and Diana? Wh is Dana so dran to her when she has Alice to come home to? Glad Alice accepted the proposal. Lord knows they could use a little bit of happiness know matter how short lived. But anyway, please please please continue with this story because I love it so. Even though I was MIA for a few months. But now I’m back to stay. Please post soon.
Hey! Here I am again. Did you miss me? I’m sure you did. I hoped to get to read something from you on Christmas. Guess, you have been busy with someone this time, huh? Well, I am going to forgive you…..two wrongs make an equal and I am still hoping to get your number anytime soon. You can’t say no all the time, can you? Or do you want me to be more convincing here? You seemed to be a little harsh to me in your last comment. That’s a sign of liking me-)))) I figured that maybe you won’t give me your number just because you can’t afford a (cell) phone, LOL. Maybe you also don’t have a girlfriend. Do you just pretend to have one so I’m showing more interest in you? You speak of commitment? We should talk about it when we spend some time together if you know what I mean. Somehow I think you might be a shy lady. What does your girlfriend like about you? There are a lot of women out there. You shouldn’t waste your time with just one single girl. Does your girl even like you? Is she faithful? I want you to continue with your story just so I can get to know you better. Someday you’ll give in…..no doubt about it-))) See ya the next time around.
Hi brteyes! Belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!! Like always, I’m late to your party. This chapter wasn’t that much to read as the last two of your’s but it’s never about the quantity….just quality and you have plenty of it. I am really enjoying the Erika/Roxy parts. This is definitely going to be a great storyline. Wanted to write this comment earlier, just never had the time to do so. I’m glad, you didn’t post another chapter before I got the chance to comment here. Like your other fans I don’t want you to stop writing. Your writing is by far the best I ever had the luck to read. Not that I want to command you here but….don’t you dare ending it here, lol. I knew that there would be another devil after Tony”s death. Why not a woman this time? It would be more fun this way around. Especially if she were a lesbian, too. Maybe you can overthink it again? I love that Kristen’s so confident at the moment. I hope she didn’t make a mistake by crossing Bobbie’s way. It’ll be pretty exciting to see where this is going. Will she change the sides? Or kill some of the mobsters? I think she might have some killer instinct here. Her family’s gonna suffer a lot. She’ll probably lose what she has. The mob will absolutely find out about her life and that she’s an agent. There’s a lot she’s risking and I really really hope that she won’t get in trouble. What’s going to happen to Roxy? Now that David has her in his hands she won’t even think about getting close to Alice. In the end he’ll demand from her to kill Dana and Al. This might be very confusing and I suppose she would do it since she promised this to David. He can end her life at anytime now. Hope this won’t happen though. Did I mention that I like this Erika/Roxy storyline? There’s something magical about it, but only because you descibe it so beautifully.It’s quite funny that in this particular relationship agony is turning into love eventually. Please write more about it. A couple days ago I’ve rewatched an episode from seasonn 2 and Sharon was in there. I wanted to know when you’re going to continue that part. Hope, it’s gonna be soon. I could see that Dana would say no to Al’s proposal. It was all the surprising to see Dana proposing to Al when all her friends and Diana were around. She probably swallowed pretty hard upon hearing it. Still am a little confused about her part in this story. Will she be a troublemaker and destroy what Al and Dana have? Certainly, she seems to be having the hots for Dana and vice versa….just don’t make it happen, please. This already reminds me of Roxy’s and Al’s sneaking around. Please, don’t let Dana cheat on Al. It would be sooooo wrong. I’m sure, that this isn’t my opinion only. Who’s with me, huh? You have nice questions again. Not sure if I like dominant women….but I sure would like it if you were one, lol. Are you bossy, brteyes? I still would like to have a little adventure with Kristen. She’s absolutely hot, don’t you think? My partner probably wouldn’t mind since she’s flirting with others, too. Oh, and yes…..you’re a cutie. I can tell-))) So, what did you do on New Year’s? Any fun stories to tell? When will we get to read your next chapter? It’s about damn time, right? Or are you getting lazy again? LOL Thanks for entertaining me with your story. I couldn’t ask for more….or maybe I could, lol. See you the next time around and I hope it’s soon. Btw, I have no time to write you that rabbit story, lol. Fabulous update as always. POST SOON, BRTEYES!!!! LOVE YA!!!!!!
brteyes, I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE, PLEAASSSEEEE!!! I look forward to each and every post of “MF” ever since I started reading it. I must apologize for missing to comment on your last giant chapter. It was partly due to the fact that I was away for a few weeks and could not get my act together sooner. The shear massiveness of your last post both in terms of content and length totally blew me away. Both you and The Pineapple Head are incredible writers. Unbelievable, hats off to you!! And thank you again to TPH for your contribution to the last 2 posts. Also I would like to congratulate you, brteyes, on your 3rd year milestone. I truly enjoyed reading the previous particularly overwhelming chapter. Both of your imagination are out of this world. Roxy’s journey to the trailer was so well written. I actually felt really sorry that she was in such a predicament. The threesome was incredible powerful. Yes, I also found the wax museum an odd place for A to propose to D or to have a serious talk and even creepier to make out there. I can’t help but worry about Marco. He might not play mind games like Tony did but he was all business and that only means he would not hesitate to harm A & D if he thought they had anything to do with Gena’s and Tony’s death. Back to this post. Very interesting start of Roxy and Erika’s friendship. I love how the instructor purposely put the 2 of them together. Fascinating strategy. I suppose in order to stay in the program, Roxy had to set her difference aside to cooperate with Erika. I too am looking forward to finding out how they would eventually get together.I am so happy to see A & D finally have a decent conversation which was long overdue. I understood A’s concern in which was legitimate that D shut her out. I hope D would realize that her tennis standing was just a small part of her problem. She never really properly addressed her feelings on the “death of Lara” nor A’s involvement with Roxy. Her nature was to run away from the problem and hopefully it would not return. I sincerely hope that she would give it a try to discuss with A what really bothered her from then on.The engagement proposal made more sense to me and that D did it in front of everyone. At least she had shown A that she was committed in their relationship. However, I worry about D having some sort of magnetic attraction to Diana. I am not sure it was a good idea that she hired her as a trainer. I hope Diana would not go all psycho on them. Having Diana at the Thanksgiving dinner did not sit well with me at all. I scares me that she brutally killed Jenny and was all smile to the gang. I was perplexed by her last comment, “don’t forget all the sex…and I should know, I’ve seen it”? What was her purpose? I can only hope that she was genuine to A & D. So when David decided to move in on them, Diana would lend a hand. I can only wish. As for the lack of comments issue, I can only say from a reader’s point of view that your thriller is often times incredibly mind blowing and I was left speechless many times. For someone like me who does not write much and to actually write down how I feel is not so simple. Also, in the past, all the comments you had received at the end of each post were often rather lengthy which can be intimidating, like what I am doing right now. In the beginning, I found myself being overwhelmed and wonder if I could even come up with something sensible and constructive to say. Overtime, it got easier. So I hope others too will show their support even with just a short sentence. And to you brteyes, please do not be discouraged. Lastly, I wish to thank you for incorporating the unemployment issue in this story. I sincerely hope that the new administration in January will bring our economy back to a more solid ground and that everyone will be gainfully employed. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH!!!
hell yes!!!!
So I had a little extra time on my hands, so I figured I would finally read this damn chapter. Sorry it’s taken so long, but I’ve had a lot going on and a lot on my mind. Since there was a lot of food in these chapter, pardon the pun, but you certainly do like to stir the pot. You’re playing it as if Diana is going to be the next super villain, but I’m just not convinced. I think she could be a big help to this story, even if she gets off a little on being mischievous. I think we all like to see just how much we can get away with, how far we can push people. Establish the boundaries and fuck with them a bit. I suppose it’s all about how far you want to push things and where you want this to go. Alice & Dana are still on unsteady footing, but more communication is going to make them stronger. Every time they opt not to trust the other, it takes away from what makes them great. You gave us a bit of a break from the mob life, although I’m sure you have something truly evil up your sleeves. While I am a bit interested in the Roxy/Erika storyline, I still don’t think it’s going to change my opinion of Roxy. SUMMERBREEZE & HAIL_DANALICE – I just wanted to thank both of you for your kind words. It really does mean a lot to me. It took a lot of convincing for brteyes to get me to write again, but I had a lot of fun doing it. Glad you both enjoyed it. brteyes, thank you again for letting me have a bit of fun and play in your world. Your faith in me means more than you realize, even if it’s coming from a sick twisted bitch ;-)