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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(11)
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“Come I want to show you something…”
The moment they reached the upper level Bette’s attention was caught by a big painting on a dark wooden easel that was near the big open window. The brunette was so captivated by it that she didn’t notice the interior of the room like it was a magnet that she suddenly found herself walking towards it leaving the blonde behind.
Tina just let the brunette indulge herself in staring at the painting; she quickly lit up the scented candles that were placed on the side of the bed that the brunette didn’t see when she came up. The blonde had noticed that there was a great amount of moonlight coming through the big window so she decided to turn some the lights off to give the room subdued lighting. She turned to the direction where the brunette was and gasped, Bette standing against the big open window while the moon casting a celestial light on her was simply breath taking. She placed her hand on her left breast as she felt how her heart fluttered and as if her legs had a mind of its own she started walking towards the brunette.
Bette’s eyes were twinkling as she carefully looked at the work of art; it was a painting that showed a woman standing on the edge of the lake under the full moon and stars on the dark sky covered only with a crisp white blanket showing off her glorious caramel colored back. Bette touched its rough edges and said “it’s beautiful…”
Tina who had been standing near the brunette just quietly looking at her as the wind slowly blew her soft curls that were brushing her shoulders “yes definitely beautiful…” Tina said her voice low.
Bette’s heartbeat accelerated when she felt the blonde’s presence. “After that night in the club I thought I would never see you again, my mind was going crazy because you were all that I was thinking about…” the room was cold and the air was now filled with the scents of lavender and jasmine but both women could feel the heat beginning to penetrate their body
“this is you in my dream after we’ve made love…”unfamiliar feelings were now playing in Bette’s chest, no one had said such beautiful words to her before as if she’s someone special and important, she felt the fire in her ablazed. She turned to the blonde and Tina met her with a kiss, a scorching kiss that was. The softness of their lips and the warmness of their tongues were sending electricity to their body.
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amazing as always,loved every bit of it,and i really hope this is just the beginning for them both together….x
Wow! That was just beautiful and fantastic! The pain doesn’t last too long but did Bette bleed I wonder?
That was lovely for Bette’s first time and I hope she realizes that Tina is in love with her. Truly hope no one gets hurt in this because the potential looms large for a major hurt if Bette does not fall in love or return the love that Tina feels for her. Thanks.
OMG that was beautiful really beautiful ;D
awe that was sweet – Great update!
that was sweet thanks for the update amazing mmmmmmooooorrrrreeee please……
That was very good, Phacey…. This will be a memorable first time for Bette…and for all the right reasons! Kx
I loved it don’t get me wrong but OOOOHHH they should have been A COUPLE and IN LVOE… That would have been 10000 times more beautiful and special… :(:(:(:(:(:(
that was lovely, thank you
that was lovely, thank you
That was wonderful!
That was just absolutely beautiful. You did such a great hob writing this. Love this story. Just so wonderful.
WOW…so sweet and tender. The moment was just full of love. Cant’ wait to see what happens next.
Sweet, Tina is head over heels in love with Bette, hope Bette realizes this.
No dissappointment here, simply lovely
Great.Love it.PPS
phacey – this story really has me intrigued so I’ll warn you up front that this comment will likely be very long. First I generally don’t read the sex act in NC17 chapters but I had to read this one because what would be the point of reading a story about Bette losing her virginity and then skipping the actual act? I think you did a great job in portraying the sweetness and tenderness with which Tina made it happen. Now for my commentary … please just take it as my blabbing and not any critism of your work. It’s just that some stories really draw me in and this is one of them. You know from my previous comments that I have very mixed feelings about Tina’s actions in this story. After reading the two part date I’m really feeling sorry for her character because I think she’s opened herself up to be heartbroken. I know it won’t happen in TiBette world because once Bette has sex with Tina she’ll fall in love and Tina will be her ‘first last and forever’ and they will live happily ever after. But in reality this could really backfire on Tina if she’s in fact as ‘in love’ with Bette as you portray her to be. This date, this special place, all the things she shared about her brother, and her passions is something that you want to share with that special someone that feels the same love and passion for you that you feel for them. Unless Tina brings all her sex partners to this place then I think she should have waited to share it with Bette until they actually were a couple had something special between them. Bette was there to get laid and Tina was there to make love to the woman she in love with. I think this might be a ‘first time’ for Tina too and once again how wonderful would it have been beyond the physical gratification if Tina was with someone that was in love with her too. Bette isn’t emotionally invested in this coupling and could very well walk away with a ‘thank you’ and there would be nothing wrong with that because they had a deal; or maybe now that they’ve had sex she might want Tina to become her F*buddy so she can teach her more pleasures. No doubt Bette will be in lust after this night. What will it do to Tina’s heart if Bette doesn’t fall in love? What if after using Tina to hone her sex skills she moves on to someone else or worse becomes a ‘player’ now that she knows the joys of sex and wants to experiment with other women. Let’s say they do have feelings for each other and decide to ‘date’ for real. Is Tina going to be OK with being on the arm of ‘ugly Bette’ or does Bette now transform into ‘beautiful Bette’ on the outside to complement ‘beautiful Tina’. If Bette makes the transformation permanent then she will attract more women just because of her physical beauty and that could change her ‘beautiful inside’. Tina has been deceptive from the start of this story and I really don’t know her motivations or where you plan to take this so I suppose I will just need to be patient and read the story as you post it. I just feel like because Tina read Bette’s journal and overheard the conversation between Bette and Alice then used that information to seduce Bette into having sex with her takes away from my feeling that she’s genuine in her emotions. If Bette falls in love … is it really love or is she just grateful to the woman that made her feel beautiful, special and desired? Are Tina’s actions ones she would have taken had she not read Bette’s journal to know exactly what buttons to push to draw Bette into her web? Does Bette’s feelings for the teacher she’s been in love with for two years just go away now that Tina’s in the picture? I’m really curious and anxiously awaiting the morning after and the days and months after this ‘date’ to see where you take them. Thank you for an interesting story and thanks for indulging me.
Wow. What a beautiful first time.
PS. I am with BatnAA_2009 on her take of the story. Great story but lots of questions when it comes to motives of both Bette and Tina. In the real world this would be a scary relationship to be apart of. Or a sticky situation.
Awww Poetry in motion…What is up with the writers in here..not only you gave us hot NC17?…It made our heart string tug in a certain way..I bow to you and to Kins40 ..
i dont know what else to say since batnAA seems to have covered all my questions and thoughts lol i guess as u just told me we’ll just have to wait and see. oh! and unlike batnAA i do enjoy very very much a well writen nc-17. i’ll be waiting for more… soon. thank u! =)
That’s how a first time should be. Guess things will get complicated from here. I’m hoping Tina will be her first last and forever. Thanks for the awesome update
Damn that was sweet and beautiful!