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    Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(11)

    Story written on October 23, 2011 by phacey.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=78428
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    THE DATE PART TWO:”I want you Tina…”

    The erotic sound from the blonde somehow made her confident she then unbuttoned her baggy jeans and when it reached the floor the sexual tension in the air increased a thousand fold. Bette stepped out of the pants and shyly covered herself. Tina gave her an encouraging smile; she touched the brunette’s hand and said

    “You’ve got nothing to be ashamed of” she took Bette’s hand “come here…”

    They started kissing again it was slow and sensual both wanted to savor every single moment. Tina slowly led the brunette to the bed never breaking the kiss, she laid Bette on her back and the brunette couldn’t help but close her eyes and moan when she felt the blonde’s naked body on top of hers. The softness of her body and the hard nipples rubbing on her already hot skin was making Bette lust for the blonde even more.  While the brunette’s eyes were shut Tina gave lingering kisses on the back of her eyes

    “I love your eyes because when you look at me I felt like I’m being hypnotized…” Tina then kissed her cheeks and the tip of her nose, Bette opened her eyes and saw that the blonde was staring at her lips

    “I love your mouth because it sets my body on fire every time you kiss me…” the blonde said then ravished the brunette’s mouth then started touching Bette’s breast. The brunette automatically closed her eyes at the sensation; Tina placed her left elbow on the side of Bette’s head while she kneaded the left breast, she kissed her ear and licked the back of it which made the brunette moan

    “AAAH…”

    “I love the feel of your warm skin against mine…” Bette shivered when the blonde whispered it to her ear. Tina’s hand started to go down south and then scraped the side of the brunette’s thigh leaving red marks and when she felt Tina traced a finger on the waist band of her panties her breathing became a hard task. Bette’s head was spinning at Tina’s gentle touch as she felt herself soaking wet.

    Tina placed herself in between Bette’s legs then refocused her attention to the brunette’s well rounded breasts, she let her finger draw a circle around Bette’s hardened nipple then she followed it with her tongue

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    3. That was lovely for Bette’s first time and I hope she realizes that Tina is in love with her. Truly hope no one gets hurt in this because the potential looms large for a major hurt if Bette does not fall in love or return the love that Tina feels for her. Thanks.

    8. I loved it don’t get me wrong but OOOOHHH they should have been A COUPLE and IN LVOE… That would have been 10000 times more beautiful and special… :(:(:(:(:(:(

    17. phacey – this story really has me intrigued so I’ll warn you up front that this comment will likely be very long. First I generally don’t read the sex act in NC17 chapters but I had to read this one because what would be the point of reading a story about Bette losing her virginity and then skipping the actual act? I think you did a great job in portraying the sweetness and tenderness with which Tina made it happen. Now for my commentary … please just take it as my blabbing and not any critism of your work. It’s just that some stories really draw me in and this is one of them. You know from my previous comments that I have very mixed feelings about Tina’s actions in this story. After reading the two part date I’m really feeling sorry for her character because I think she’s opened herself up to be heartbroken. I know it won’t happen in TiBette world because once Bette has sex with Tina she’ll fall in love and Tina will be her ‘first last and forever’ and they will live happily ever after. But in reality this could really backfire on Tina if she’s in fact as ‘in love’ with Bette as you portray her to be. This date, this special place, all the things she shared about her brother, and her passions is something that you want to share with that special someone that feels the same love and passion for you that you feel for them. Unless Tina brings all her sex partners to this place then I think she should have waited to share it with Bette until they actually were a couple had something special between them. Bette was there to get laid and Tina was there to make love to the woman she in love with. I think this might be a ‘first time’ for Tina too and once again how wonderful would it have been beyond the physical gratification if Tina was with someone that was in love with her too. Bette isn’t emotionally invested in this coupling and could very well walk away with a ‘thank you’ and there would be nothing wrong with that because they had a deal; or maybe now that they’ve had sex she might want Tina to become her F*buddy so she can teach her more pleasures. No doubt Bette will be in lust after this night. What will it do to Tina’s heart if Bette doesn’t fall in love? What if after using Tina to hone her sex skills she moves on to someone else or worse becomes a ‘player’ now that she knows the joys of sex and wants to experiment with other women. Let’s say they do have feelings for each other and decide to ‘date’ for real. Is Tina going to be OK with being on the arm of ‘ugly Bette’ or does Bette now transform into ‘beautiful Bette’ on the outside to complement ‘beautiful Tina’. If Bette makes the transformation permanent then she will attract more women just because of her physical beauty and that could change her ‘beautiful inside’. Tina has been deceptive from the start of this story and I really don’t know her motivations or where you plan to take this so I suppose I will just need to be patient and read the story as you post it. I just feel like because Tina read Bette’s journal and overheard the conversation between Bette and Alice then used that information to seduce Bette into having sex with her takes away from my feeling that she’s genuine in her emotions. If Bette falls in love … is it really love or is she just grateful to the woman that made her feel beautiful, special and desired? Are Tina’s actions ones she would have taken had she not read Bette’s journal to know exactly what buttons to push to draw Bette into her web? Does Bette’s feelings for the teacher she’s been in love with for two years just go away now that Tina’s in the picture? I’m really curious and anxiously awaiting the morning after and the days and months after this ‘date’ to see where you take them. Thank you for an interesting story and thanks for indulging me.

    19. PS. I am with BatnAA_2009 on her take of the story. Great story but lots of questions when it comes to motives of both Bette and Tina. In the real world this would be a scary relationship to be apart of. Or a sticky situation.

    20. Awww Poetry in motion…What is up with the writers in here..not only you gave us hot NC17?…It made our heart string tug in a certain way..I bow to you and to Kins40 ..

    21. i dont know what else to say since batnAA seems to have covered all my questions and thoughts lol i guess as u just told me we’ll just have to wait and see. oh! and unlike batnAA i do enjoy very very much a well writen nc-17. i’ll be waiting for more… soon. thank u! =)

    22. That’s how a first time should be. Guess things will get complicated from here. I’m hoping Tina will be her first last and forever. Thanks for the awesome update 

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