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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(8)
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‘HOLY FUCKING SHIT!’
Chapter Eight
Bette suddenly didn’t know what to say as if the cat got her tongue, being in front of not just one but two beautiful women was kind of overwhelming. It seemed to her that the heaven’s gate had finally opened for her, that thinking made her secretly smiled to herself
“So I guess I’m not the only one who’s crazy over Mrs. Flores’ coffee huh?” Tina said trying to start the conversation but her eyes were still fixed on the brunette.
“It was actually Bette who’s in love with this coffee. I see her everyday here in the cafeteria so I figured why not try it and the best way to taste it is with someone like Bette” Sarah said slightly laughing but her gaze was also on the brunette.
Bette was feeling flattered by the attention that Sarah was giving to her now, for almost two years she’d been madly crushing on her and never did she have the courage to talk to Sarah because she would always feel nervous whenever she’s around. But now she had to toughen up a little if she really wanted to go out with Sarah.
The brunette gave Sarah a shy smile and softly said “Nice of you to say that…”
‘Oh shoot 1 point for Sarah, c’mon Tina you have to do something now and fast’ Tina muttered to herself as she saw the two brunettes locked eyes.
“Really? When I attended my high school here before, everyday I would come here first to buy this before going to my class, so that makes the two of us crazy over this coffee Bette” Bette and Sarah turned to the blonde and the brunette gave her a small smile
“Oh yeah? That’s great!” Bette was beginning to loosen up as she now enjoys the attention that both women were giving to her. The brunette again shifted her gaze back to Sarah.
‘Is that all you got Tina? Fuck you can do better than that’ Tina quietly berated herself
“Absolutely and you know what? I’m planning of studying French and I just saw on the dictionary the word for coffee but I just couldn’t remember what it was… uhmm what’s ‘I love coffee’ again in French, Bette?” Tina asked then gave Bette a sweet smile. She had read on the brunette’s journal that she was fluent in French and she thought that by asking Bette if she knew how to translate it in the foreign language would definitely get her attention.
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Your story, your pace. I love it.
I’m sooooo waiting next chap… Drama or nc17, don’t care, just post it soon!!!:)))
you know i am kinda glad Tina was honest about reading her journal and Bette took it so well too lol or maybe she’s too distracted by the offer of sex
Well I don’t know if it’s a fuck me kind of thing I mean Bette said herself she doesn’t wanna be a virgin and Tina asked for the HONOR to be her first, plus she was completely and absolutely honest with her and that counts for something.
your story your pace i love it the way you write it,,,more soon please…x
Awww my gosh. I don’t quite know how to feel about Tina’s declaration to Bette. I really wished she had asked for a date first then acted on whatever else she wanted to do with Bette. Hopefully they will just go on a date first before anything else happens. Because they are both intrigued about each other but the date should be first, I think. Actually I think I’m a bit disappointed in Tina but hope she will save the day by just dating Bette first. Thanks.
I guess it all depends if Bette feels like she can trust Tina. She’s at a disadvantage… Tina knows a lot about her now, having read her journal, but she knows very little about Tina. There’s also the question of what Bette wants out of her first time. She’s waited a quite a while, she might as well make it worth it. At least she’s got options. Thanks for the post :)
And my jaw drop..and here I’m thinking that Bette would go Ballistic, if she found out that Tina’s been reading her journal… But no, give it to Tina what the best thing to say to put out the fire…in a very profound word.
before bette says a word… tina should say… but i would really love to date you first and become the friends i know we will be and what ever happens after that… happens… and then wait for bette’s answer… i agree with some of the others… so glad tina came clean on reading… great story… can’t wait to see what road you lead us down… but remember its YOUR story, write is YOUR way… pps
Am I the only one who thinks this is not the way it is supposed to be? I think T & B should date before having sex… This is just like “Wanna fuck?”, that’s not romantic. please, don’t do this… I liked it though. PPS
You said the story was going to move along quickly but really, that fast? Do love it though.
The romantic in me hopes that Bette will realize that her first time is less about ‘popping her cherry’ and more about giving that special part of herself to someone that will cherish the honor of being her first and making it an experience for Bette that she too will cherish all her life. I don’t think Tina is offering that, and once again she’s using information that she overheard in Bette and Alice’s conversation. Sounds to me like she’s just willing to use anything to get into Bette’s panties and regardless of cultural differences the way she’s going about it is just wrong.
Haha. I really love this story. The last sentence is so hot. If they have sex on Bette’s birithday?
I don’t have any problems with them having sex before dating, maybe it’s a cultural thing? Anyways I think you should move this story along in whatever direction you want, whatever you choose to do I’m sure I’ll love it!
I am having mixed feelings about Tina. She obviously has the upper hand having read the journal and being that she had Bette had the previous encounter with ‘beautiful’ Bette but Bette’s reason for going to the club and wanting to have sex with Tina was because she wanted to have the experience so she would feel more confident pursuing Sarah. She has feelings for Sarah and it’s obvious Sarah has feelings for her so the attraction is not a surface attraction just based on looks. Sarah is attracted to the person. Tina was first attracted to ‘beautiful’ Bette and now that she knows ‘ugly’ Bette is the same person she is in competition with Sarah instead of getting to know Bette as a person and not just an object she wants to f**k. In my opinion if Bette wants to have experience with sex then yes she should take Tina up on her offer and then pursue her relationship with Sarah. Tina is playing dirty. I think Bette would be better off taking Alice up on her offer.
Love your story.PPS.
Awesome update. thank you.
i wouldve done exactly the same tina did ….but the sex proposal. i mean i never liked little games. if u have something to say u better do it fast cause playing just messes things up. honest is always the way but tina went to far this time; it almost sounded like a business transaction. ok that was my personal opinion… now the facts; lets remember that bette wanted to get rid of her virginity just like that before so… losing it with tina is not a bad idea. great chap more soon please! next nc-17 XD
Damn that was good and Tina got a best card there with Bette ahhaha but Tina need to slow down there, need to get to know Bette first and date and then you know what lol. Please post more, thanks!