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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(8)
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Bette just dismissed her last class for the day and was sitting on her desk gathering the test papers when her friend Alice stepped inside the room
“Hey Bette haven’t seen you all day, what’s up?”
“Hi Al! I’ve been hiding from Tina”
Alice furrowed her brows “You’re hiding from that hot piece of ass?”
Bette rolled her eyes “can you please not call her that”
“Why what’s wrong with that? I mean I have eyes, 20/20 vision just to let you know and I sure appreciate beauty if I see one and Tina Kennard is obviously a very attractive woman!”
“I don’t argue with you on that but the way you say ‘hot piece of ass’ as if you’re objectifying her, she’s a person and most definitely more than just a beauty”
Alice smiled at the brunette’s remark “Whoa Bette I’ve never seen you talk about someone with so much passion! What about Sarah I thought you like her?”
“I still like Sarah and I must say that I’m beginning to feel at ease with her it’s just that… Tina’s presence is really distracting…” Bette told her friend the coffee scene in the school cafeteria
“HOLY FUCKING SHIT!” Alice said loudly
“That’s exactly what I said when I was sitting opposite them while they both gave me this intense look”
Alice patted the brunette on the back “YOUR ONE LUCKY VIRGIN BETTE!”
Bette looked around and gave her friend a killer look “Ssshh shut the fuck up, somebody might hear you!”
“Oops sorry my friend!” Alice said covering her mouth then made a peace sign then changed the subject to avoid her friend’s wrath
“By the way what’s your plan on your 30th birthday, it’s like a few days from now right?”
Bette sighed “about that… honestly I don’t want to think about it anymore”
“Any why not? Is not that you’re turning 100 years old for goodness’ sakes! 30 is still part of the calendar”
“Yeah I know but…”
“Oh I know what’s bothering you! You’re disappointed because in just a matter of days you’ll be turning 30 and you’re still a …” Alice paused her voice way lower than the usual “you’re still… you know a…” Alice mouthed the word virgin but with no sound. Bette sadly nodded.
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Your story, your pace. I love it.
I’m sooooo waiting next chap… Drama or nc17, don’t care, just post it soon!!!:)))
you know i am kinda glad Tina was honest about reading her journal and Bette took it so well too lol or maybe she’s too distracted by the offer of sex
Well I don’t know if it’s a fuck me kind of thing I mean Bette said herself she doesn’t wanna be a virgin and Tina asked for the HONOR to be her first, plus she was completely and absolutely honest with her and that counts for something.
your story your pace i love it the way you write it,,,more soon please…x
Awww my gosh. I don’t quite know how to feel about Tina’s declaration to Bette. I really wished she had asked for a date first then acted on whatever else she wanted to do with Bette. Hopefully they will just go on a date first before anything else happens. Because they are both intrigued about each other but the date should be first, I think. Actually I think I’m a bit disappointed in Tina but hope she will save the day by just dating Bette first. Thanks.
I guess it all depends if Bette feels like she can trust Tina. She’s at a disadvantage… Tina knows a lot about her now, having read her journal, but she knows very little about Tina. There’s also the question of what Bette wants out of her first time. She’s waited a quite a while, she might as well make it worth it. At least she’s got options. Thanks for the post :)
And my jaw drop..and here I’m thinking that Bette would go Ballistic, if she found out that Tina’s been reading her journal… But no, give it to Tina what the best thing to say to put out the fire…in a very profound word.
before bette says a word… tina should say… but i would really love to date you first and become the friends i know we will be and what ever happens after that… happens… and then wait for bette’s answer… i agree with some of the others… so glad tina came clean on reading… great story… can’t wait to see what road you lead us down… but remember its YOUR story, write is YOUR way… pps
Am I the only one who thinks this is not the way it is supposed to be? I think T & B should date before having sex… This is just like “Wanna fuck?”, that’s not romantic. please, don’t do this… I liked it though. PPS
You said the story was going to move along quickly but really, that fast? Do love it though.
The romantic in me hopes that Bette will realize that her first time is less about ‘popping her cherry’ and more about giving that special part of herself to someone that will cherish the honor of being her first and making it an experience for Bette that she too will cherish all her life. I don’t think Tina is offering that, and once again she’s using information that she overheard in Bette and Alice’s conversation. Sounds to me like she’s just willing to use anything to get into Bette’s panties and regardless of cultural differences the way she’s going about it is just wrong.
Haha. I really love this story. The last sentence is so hot. If they have sex on Bette’s birithday?
I don’t have any problems with them having sex before dating, maybe it’s a cultural thing? Anyways I think you should move this story along in whatever direction you want, whatever you choose to do I’m sure I’ll love it!
I am having mixed feelings about Tina. She obviously has the upper hand having read the journal and being that she had Bette had the previous encounter with ‘beautiful’ Bette but Bette’s reason for going to the club and wanting to have sex with Tina was because she wanted to have the experience so she would feel more confident pursuing Sarah. She has feelings for Sarah and it’s obvious Sarah has feelings for her so the attraction is not a surface attraction just based on looks. Sarah is attracted to the person. Tina was first attracted to ‘beautiful’ Bette and now that she knows ‘ugly’ Bette is the same person she is in competition with Sarah instead of getting to know Bette as a person and not just an object she wants to f**k. In my opinion if Bette wants to have experience with sex then yes she should take Tina up on her offer and then pursue her relationship with Sarah. Tina is playing dirty. I think Bette would be better off taking Alice up on her offer.
Love your story.PPS.
Awesome update. thank you.
i wouldve done exactly the same tina did ….but the sex proposal. i mean i never liked little games. if u have something to say u better do it fast cause playing just messes things up. honest is always the way but tina went to far this time; it almost sounded like a business transaction. ok that was my personal opinion… now the facts; lets remember that bette wanted to get rid of her virginity just like that before so… losing it with tina is not a bad idea. great chap more soon please! next nc-17 XD
Damn that was good and Tina got a best card there with Bette ahhaha but Tina need to slow down there, need to get to know Bette first and date and then you know what lol. Please post more, thanks!