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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(8)
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“Not actually… uhmm I need to talk to you Bette. It’s important can we go some where else?”
Bette began to feel nervous about what the blonde had wanted to talk about “okay sure.”
“I didn’t bring my car so I’m hoping that I can hop in your car, that’s if it’s not too much to ask…” Tina said while trying to catch the brunette’s brown eyes.
“Of course not c’mon let’s go” Bette said to the blonde
Tina smiled secretly to herself then joined Bette in her car.
Tina despite being away from her home town for almost 6 years still remembered the best places in town. The blonde had suggested going to Isabella’s; a popular restaurant in town because of its food and the place was near the lake giving a romantic vibe to the customers. They just ordered drinks because they didn’t know if they would stay there long enough to order for dinner.
Bette ordered for a glass of red wine and Tina ordered vodka because she was beginning to feel nervous of the next thing that she was about to do so she needed something to calm her nerves.
Bette on the other hand who was sitting crazy nervous was thinking what on earth the blonde would tell her “So Tina what is it that you want to tell me?”
The blonde took a big sip on her drink then looked at the brunette intently “Bette you know I like you…” Bette who was in the process of drinking her wine almost spit the liquid out; she wiped her mouth with a napkin and smiled at the blonde
“I don’t know what to say but uhmm… thank you?”
Tina laughed at Bette’s answer, she really found the brunette adorable. Bette asked herself why Tina was acting kinda weird
“Alright you must be thinking now that I’m crazy…” she smiled at the puzzled brunette
Tina took a deep breath she knew that she needed to do this “I just ended a relationship when I moved here to start a new life, me and my cousin decided to go to this new club called Milk to have fun. My goal then was to just have some few drinks and dance and then the most amazing thing happened when I saw this beautiful and sexy brunette that was seated from across the room. She was the most beautiful creature that I have ever laid my eyes on and when I saw her smile I was so mesmerized that my heart suddenly forgot to beat. I was so glad when we danced and when we kissed it was so amazing I thought I had gone to heaven.”
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Your story, your pace. I love it.
I’m sooooo waiting next chap… Drama or nc17, don’t care, just post it soon!!!:)))
you know i am kinda glad Tina was honest about reading her journal and Bette took it so well too lol or maybe she’s too distracted by the offer of sex
Well I don’t know if it’s a fuck me kind of thing I mean Bette said herself she doesn’t wanna be a virgin and Tina asked for the HONOR to be her first, plus she was completely and absolutely honest with her and that counts for something.
your story your pace i love it the way you write it,,,more soon please…x
Awww my gosh. I don’t quite know how to feel about Tina’s declaration to Bette. I really wished she had asked for a date first then acted on whatever else she wanted to do with Bette. Hopefully they will just go on a date first before anything else happens. Because they are both intrigued about each other but the date should be first, I think. Actually I think I’m a bit disappointed in Tina but hope she will save the day by just dating Bette first. Thanks.
I guess it all depends if Bette feels like she can trust Tina. She’s at a disadvantage… Tina knows a lot about her now, having read her journal, but she knows very little about Tina. There’s also the question of what Bette wants out of her first time. She’s waited a quite a while, she might as well make it worth it. At least she’s got options. Thanks for the post :)
And my jaw drop..and here I’m thinking that Bette would go Ballistic, if she found out that Tina’s been reading her journal… But no, give it to Tina what the best thing to say to put out the fire…in a very profound word.
before bette says a word… tina should say… but i would really love to date you first and become the friends i know we will be and what ever happens after that… happens… and then wait for bette’s answer… i agree with some of the others… so glad tina came clean on reading… great story… can’t wait to see what road you lead us down… but remember its YOUR story, write is YOUR way… pps
Am I the only one who thinks this is not the way it is supposed to be? I think T & B should date before having sex… This is just like “Wanna fuck?”, that’s not romantic. please, don’t do this… I liked it though. PPS
You said the story was going to move along quickly but really, that fast? Do love it though.
The romantic in me hopes that Bette will realize that her first time is less about ‘popping her cherry’ and more about giving that special part of herself to someone that will cherish the honor of being her first and making it an experience for Bette that she too will cherish all her life. I don’t think Tina is offering that, and once again she’s using information that she overheard in Bette and Alice’s conversation. Sounds to me like she’s just willing to use anything to get into Bette’s panties and regardless of cultural differences the way she’s going about it is just wrong.
Haha. I really love this story. The last sentence is so hot. If they have sex on Bette’s birithday?
I don’t have any problems with them having sex before dating, maybe it’s a cultural thing? Anyways I think you should move this story along in whatever direction you want, whatever you choose to do I’m sure I’ll love it!
I am having mixed feelings about Tina. She obviously has the upper hand having read the journal and being that she had Bette had the previous encounter with ‘beautiful’ Bette but Bette’s reason for going to the club and wanting to have sex with Tina was because she wanted to have the experience so she would feel more confident pursuing Sarah. She has feelings for Sarah and it’s obvious Sarah has feelings for her so the attraction is not a surface attraction just based on looks. Sarah is attracted to the person. Tina was first attracted to ‘beautiful’ Bette and now that she knows ‘ugly’ Bette is the same person she is in competition with Sarah instead of getting to know Bette as a person and not just an object she wants to f**k. In my opinion if Bette wants to have experience with sex then yes she should take Tina up on her offer and then pursue her relationship with Sarah. Tina is playing dirty. I think Bette would be better off taking Alice up on her offer.
Love your story.PPS.
Awesome update. thank you.
i wouldve done exactly the same tina did ….but the sex proposal. i mean i never liked little games. if u have something to say u better do it fast cause playing just messes things up. honest is always the way but tina went to far this time; it almost sounded like a business transaction. ok that was my personal opinion… now the facts; lets remember that bette wanted to get rid of her virginity just like that before so… losing it with tina is not a bad idea. great chap more soon please! next nc-17 XD
Damn that was good and Tina got a best card there with Bette ahhaha but Tina need to slow down there, need to get to know Bette first and date and then you know what lol. Please post more, thanks!