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More Than Satisfies (1/2)
“You have no faith in me. Did you really think I wouldn’t bring the chips?”
Dana pulled out the bag of blue chips. “You’re not very patient, are you?”
“Patient? Dane, you’ve met me right?” Alice grabbed the bag of chips and opened them, “So what else do you have in that bag o’ wonders? Can you pass me the dip?”
Dana smiled, handing the container over to Alice. “We have salad, but not just any salad, I chopped it, just the way you like it. And for dinner, we have salmon and risotto with asparagus.”
“That sounds great, Dane. So what’s in the other bag?” Alice asked, taking a bite of the chip. “Wow, this is great, where did you pick up the dip?”
“I didn’t pick it up, I made it. I made everything for tonight. Well, except for the chips. And as for the other bag, that’s for after dinner.”
“You really made this? It’s really good. I didn’t know you had hidden talents. I thought you only knew how to make healthy stuff. I can taste the cheese, is that provolone?”
“Yup and I do eat some things that aren’t healthy. Just in moderation.”
After an hour of prep and munching on chips, they sat down at the table for dinner. Dana put on music and even brought the candles.
Alice went to pour the wine, but Dana stopped her. “No, let me. Tonight is about spoiling you.”
“Dana, you’ve done enough, I can at least pour the wine.”
“Alice, no. I wanted to do something special tonight. I just wanted you to a bit of all of your favorite things. I know it’s cheesy, but I just want to spoil you tonight. I’m not good with words. But I can do stuff. And I wanted to do something that made you see how happy I am about this. OK?”
“I don’t know what to say. Thank you. You’re really sweet, you know that?” They sat staring at each other for a few seconds, “So are you going to pour the wine or what?”
“Yeah, there’s that famous patience.” Dana quipped as she poured the wine.
“So can I at least make the toast?” Alice asked.
“Go ahead. The floor is yours, Ms. Pieszecki.”
“Why thank you.” She lifted her glass and nodded to Dana to do the same, which she did.
“So, Dana. I didn’t plan on this, so this is off the cuff. I’m not so good at words either. But I have hope. For the first time I can remember, I look forward to tomorrow to see what might happen, to see the possibilities. Sitting here at home, with you at my table, I am absolutely more than satisfied.” She smiled at Dana and lifted her glass, “To the start of something amazing.”
As their glasses made their way to each other, so did they, kissing in time with the toast.
tbc
Mary Chapin Carpenter – Not Too Much to Ask
To hear you say my name,
to see you search my eyes
To feel you touch my hand, it more than satisfies.
If I was not the first,
just say I’ll be the last
It’s too much to expect,
but it’s not too much to ask.
Now I can only dream of being all you need
And I can only try to be the reason why
You think about today and forget about the past It’s too much to expect, but it’s not too much to ask.
Now I can only dream of being all you need And I can only try to be the reason why You think about today ’cause the past is just the past
It’s too much to expect, but it doesn’t hurt to ask
It’s too much to expect, but it’s not too much to ask.
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(66 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
what Layla gray and lenore said– yeah, your angst makes my toes curl…. your fluff moves them too. whatever the hell THAT means– I love this. i, like most of the danish fandom, needed it.
I love this story, you write fluff so so well. Pls post soon:)
Danish fluff…I could read this stuff ALL day, EVERY day!!! Thanks so much.
The chapter was tender and charming. I like your fluffer qualities best. You’ve short changed yourself…you write the slice of life wonderfully. Best of the season to you, happy holidays.
This is a warm & fuzzy feelng story.
I’m really enjoying it!
Thanks danish fans need this time to time.
Though you are the queen of the angst, it seems to me you also write the fluff pretty well! I’m even more impatient than Alice, and want part 2 of the story now please.
Cid, so happy you posted! Now why would you say that your fluff in not as good as your angst? Because that just left feeling all aglow with warm fuzzy feelings and wide assed grin on my face.
this is great I love it please post soon so that I can see what will happen
great story.. fluff, angst, both are good… post soon