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My Immortal – 4
Chapter Four:
I am feeling things I’ve never felt before. Seriously! Her hands on are my hips, rubbing them, raking her nails up and down them, but I feel like her hands are running through my hair and lifting my shirt over my head. I keep my eyes closed shut, but when I feel my shirt pulled free from my body I watch it fly across the room and be strategically placed in the chair by the door. For a second I think my eyes are betraying me, but then I feel my heels slip off onto the floor. Yep, it’s definitely for real. She’s good at this.
“Mmmm.” I moan as I feel her tongue in that special place again. I’ve had one-nighters before, but nothing like this. This wasn’t fucking. She wasn’t fucking me. She was doing something far more to me. She knows me. She knows things about my body I didn’t even know. Suddenly, a panic freezes my body. I stiffen and when I do, she does.
“What? What’s the matter? Did I hurt you?” Her breathing is deep and ragged. She has a panic in her eyes. She genuinely cares.
I shake my head and muster a smile, the best I could through all of my confusion. “Tina why do I get the feeling that your not telling me everything?”
She just dropped her head. She rested her forehead on my chest and inhaled deeply, she stays like this for a few moments and finally picks her head up and looks deep into my eyes- penetrating my soul. “Because I’m not. But I can’t tell you.” She flexes the muscles in her jaw, something I would be turned on by had I not felt like my life was in some sort of danger.
I suddenly feel like I can’t breathe, I push her off of me and get up. I feel her pulling down on me, but she only sit on the couch wiping the tears from her eyes. “Stop it, let me go!” I yell. I want nothing more for her to let me go and to get out of here. “Stop using your magic on me Tina. It’s not fair.”
Suddenly, I feel her magical grip come off of me and I’m only free long enough to stand up, but quickly be pulled down by her hand. “Tina I said-”
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(19 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
this is intensly ineresting. I can’t wait for more.
Very nice chapter I hope Bette is able to take Tina’s memories with freaking out too much. PPS
Wow, one night (without sex) and Tina wants Bette to meet her mom. A little scary.
Just read both your updates. This is so freakin interesting. Thank you.
This is very definitely the most mysterious and interesting story I’ve read. AND, I love it, totally hooked. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Always look to see if you’ve posted. Thanks for posting and keeping us riveted.
Interesting night and this is an interesting story. More please.
Yes this is definitely interesting night for you Bette lol. Please post more, thanks!
And this definitely is one of the most interesting story at the moment on the site:)
So very good!!! Now what Bette get to see?
Definitely interesting