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Numbers
Story written on April 29, 2012 by kins40.
25
Alright then! The question now is, to turn or not to turn?
There really isn’t that much time left.
All joking apart, Mother Nature truthfully does things very well.
So, while there is a little bit of room and some time left – too much according to her and maybe not enough for me because let’s face it, I am soooo comfortable here – I should really start to scootch around and prepare for my grand arrival.
Now folks, don’t get excited, it’s going to take a couple of weeks at least but I will get there I’m sure…I might only be 25 weeks in but before you know it, I’ll have myself transformed into a fully flipped locked-n-loaded womb-fruit waiting for the countdown to launch!
Most of my development from now on will be weight gain. It will be hers too! That plus a whole lot of nervous system improvements.
Her is Tina and Tina is my mom!
I know she is not happy about the whole piling on the pounds thing! I know because I can hear her. That’s right you don’t know but I got my ears last week.
What a trip that was! I can hear the outside world perfectly now. It made me jar a little and I kicked harder than usual when I heard her cellphone ring the first time. The same ringtone all the time. I think it is this other person who seems to be there also; Bette, you call her and my mom Tina really seems to like her very much and every time the phone rings my mom feels really happy.
Tina complains to Bette a lot and you know what? Bette doesn’t seem to mind. In actual fact the latest is Tina’s sore back and Bette was really nice about it, offering to massage her aching joints and even drawing her a nice hot bath.
I enjoyed that too. Tina was worried that I might get too warm if she got into hot water but Bette, who is very intelligent by the way, told her to not listen to Old wives’ tales and that her body would regulate the temperature of her womb.
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I enjoy your writing, Kins. I’ve been meaning to comment and tell for some time, but I haven’t been able to get on the site to read for awhile. Keep up the good work!
😍 I just love your stories K. Thank you for this awesome series 😘
Your stories and writing are so unique. Thank you.
Such wonderful stories…love your writing!
Short but sweet! Thank you.
My number’s turn! And I love what you did with it!
Thanks for the posting! I loved both numbers, especially the last one. Kismet!
Flip me your imagination knows no boundsKins! Should I be awed or scared that you can convincingly give voice to a 25 week old in womb? That was absolutely precious :) And so was that predestined encounter you had them both experience as kids – chills!!! Your stories no matter their length are always filled with wonderful gems and an absolute pleasure to read. Cheers – iHH xx
Amazing…love your writing.
25… So sweet! I love pre-birth Angie’s perspective on her moms! Especially the “It’s grown ups time, I’m going to rest!” As for 29… Well, is that fate, or what? Love the idea that B and T could have crossed paths when they were kids. As in “You know what? you and I belong together, but we’re far too young to do anything about it, so see you in 29 years, babe!” LOL! Great chappy K, and OMG, what an amazing imaginative mind you have here! Hugs ;) Kw
Wow! … It’s amazing stories Kins!! :-) thanks for made me speechless after reading the second story! ;-) it’s so sweet yet so unbelievable, but I also know that something like that happens in real life, though sometimes I am wondering if fate is really exist or it just an excuse of explaining the unexplainable. anyway … I am looking forward for more updates from you for sure… And if you need more numbers, just let us know… Lol… I am sure that not only me who will be eager to share those numbers ;-)
So very wonderful. I love your stories and your imagination. Thank you for these wonderful wonderful stories.
Amazing, as always.
Loved them both. Thank you!
I …can’t find a word……your 1st is soo Ingenious…Imagine a baby “talking”..while still in a womb ….and being funny too. lol… Ears: doneFingernails: doneTesticles….mmmmm…. not growing any of those….just like her Momma…lol.. and your 2nd…Gives me Goosebumps… “Wow the are meant to be in each others life.” thank you Kins40. …really enjoyed this one.
Both parts were great, and thanks for using my number :)
Hahaha sooo cute! I love it!
Wonderful stories.Thank you.
I don’t comment very often, but I just had to on this one. So very different, interesting, touching, exciting, unique. I could go on and on. I just love your stories and the way you write about these two. I so enjoy reading anytime I see a post from you. These little snippets are the best and I think you could turn many of them into longer stories if you’d like. hint hint. :) Anyway, please continue…I love and look forward to them. Thanks again!! :)
That embryology lesson was really cute. Thank you kins40. I just love your stories!
“I’ll have myself transformed into a fully flipped locked-n-loaded womb-fruit waiting for the countdown to launch!” hahahaha!!!!
I could just picture this in my head and it totally made me laugh out loud! So so good…
So loved the baby in the womb perspective and the roundabout photo – Unusual stories, nice, leave a warm glow – thanks.