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Phobia (Chapter Two)
Carmen-
After Alice had basically ditched me at The Planet, the atmosphere around our table quickly returned to awkward prompting me to leave as well, mumbling an incoherent excuse.
My only problem now was deciding what to do since I didn’t have to work for the next few days and it was still early morning. So I just got into my Jeep and drove. Somehow though, I found myself parked in front of the old apartment I used to share with Shane, staring at the front door through the passenger’s window and debating whether or not to go inside.
Eventually, I stepped out of my vehicle and strolled up the narrow walkway then quietly let myself in and stood in the doorway.
The place smelled of abandon and traces of disinfectant while the once cluttered, hardwood floors were now bare and in great need of polishing. Even the walls were pale and tattered with dusty windows.
Whenever the landlord had informed me that someone was soon to take over the property since nobody had been living there anymore, my friends helped me get through cleaning the place out. I kept what was mine and moved back in with my family; Alice stored Shane’s belongings at her apartment.
Walking further inside the house, listening to the floorboards creak under my feet every time I took a step, I inched further towards the one room I didn’t want to remember, but at the same time my feet still lead me down the hallway and I stopped short of the closed bedroom door.
After a minute’s hesitation I finally turned the doorknob and lightly pushed the door open as I braced myself for the memories that were sure to come flooding back to me. And not long after, that’s exactly what happened.
Various scenes of history played over again before my eyes and although the room had been stripped of it’s furniture, I still remembered everything as vividly as it had happened.
I remembered time when Shane would lay me back down on the bed and whispered words of lust as she unbuttoned my shirt.
Times when she’d feel experimental and tie my hands to the headboard leaving me at her mercy.
Times when she’d hold me tight as I came down from my high. And even the times when she’d watch me wake up in the morning and bring me the occasional breakfast in bed.
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yesssssssss loved it cant wait for more please more soooooooooon omg it was great but please let it be a happy sharmen , to much sad angry sharmen let them work it out pleaseeeeeee
you are a very bad person how can you stope there?!?!! lol love this chap and im loving whats coming… i want drama now im ready for THE DRAMA lol
Yay, Shane’s back! I’m ready to sit back and watch/read the drama unfold. It’s good to know that Dana isn’t as over Alice as Alice thinks.
(*groans)……….you can’t stop there. Damn cliffhangers. LOL. Anyway, I’m enjoying the fic and look forward to the next update. :-)
i’m sticking around:). i enjoy the different narratives…and the fact that the narratives aren’t selfish; they help tell other characters’ stories despite not necessarily being in a relationship with them. i hope carmen loves.
hooorayy- yep its always what comes up either when you post a comment or NOW when you post a chap! : bows down to ur greatness : lol oh and first… u r an evil genius somehow it slipped my mind that Alice and Dana didn’t hook up.. lol so as i was reading ur evil work i was all.. how’d we get here? did i miss something? lol so GREAT WORK on Dana’s dream :) uh oh Carmen’s home Shane’s got some explaining to do lol i luv Alice, and her forgetful ways. you’ve done it again, so ty ty ty for doing it again and filler-shimiller you don’t do those trust me :) Plz post soon, ur like a drug and im so hooked. x0x0x
omg omg omg omg.. i love it.. i can’t stop smiling… wonderful update, you have just made my day.. can’t wait to see what carmen does, love that last line, pure Alice and her forgetfulness.. oh, and before i forget i was wondering if you were still planing on continuing ‘WHO KNEW’ cus thats like one of my favorite fics.. anyways, great update.. looking forward to the next update, please make it soon.. :P
Ok I was totally fooled by that dream, damn you and your teasing ways hehe. I too love the different narratives and you do each of them justice, trust me. Can’t wait for the next chap xx