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Secret Love chapter 10
Previously “If you’re so dedicated to her Why don’t you take your time to do things right And prove to her that she’s the one for you and you’re the one for her? I mean, If you really want to make her happy and if you love her so much you have to know that she’ll maybe decide to stay with her girlfriend and by the light of her decision you’ll have to let go of things I know that it’s hard to take, but if you really want her to be happy, this will be the most logical way to deal with this.” Says Alice ” I’ll think about all this I’m really sorry, but I have a phone conference this afternoon with my boss and the head of The New York Times. Thank you so much for your time. And I will think about all this” ” It’s my pleasure Give me some news!” ” I will.” And I leave The planet. On my way out I pay my bill and pop by Marina’s office and say hello. On the way home, I start to think about the conversation that just occurred. Hummm ****************************************************************************************** ALICE’S HOME 4:30 PM Alice arrives home after being at The Planet and going to different places for groceries. She picks up the phone and dials Tina and Bette’s phone number.
” Hello.”
“Tina? It’s Alice.
” Hi! Alice!”
” Am I bothering you guys?”
” No, Bette just came back from work, and I was reading a magazine. “
” Are you two doing something for diner?”
” No, I don’t think so Why?”
” Because I would like you to come over for diner Shane will be there and she needs to get opinions and set her mind loose on some things She doesn’t want de alone, I think And she wanted me to call you to invite you guys over”
” Sounds interesting I hope everything is okay with Shane!” Tina replies with a slight sound of nervousness in her voice.
” I think that everything is under control, I just think that she wants a second opinion on something” Alice says to comfort Tina.
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I hope you see this as the constructive comment it is intended to be.
I realize that Meg is your character, and since it was taking so long (10 chapters) for the mystery person to be revealed, I started loosing my zest to see if anything new had been posted.
Yes, you reeled me in and I remained glued here, but IMO, the mystery would have carried more weight and made the suspense worth it, IF the mystery person had been someone we were familiar with…..unless there’s a Meg floating around that I am unaware of.
Somehow, I feel that the fizzle is gone.