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Sensory Overload
I woke up around 10:00am on Sunday. Man, I needed that! I felt like a completely different person. Revived and ready for anything. I went to the Planet for breakfast. Surprisingly none of the girls were there. I guess I was a little late for the breakfast crowd though. I spent my time alone devising a plan to welcome my love home properly. I stopped by the market on my way home and got food to make a special dinner. Yes, that’s right, I am going to COOK! I also picked up a fresh boquette of flowers for the table and some new candles. I want to create a soft ambiance for our romantic evening together. I’m sure she’ll be tired and want to take a shower after her flight, so maybe I’ll pick up some nice bath salts and convince her that a long soak in the tub would be more fulfilling. I called James and informed him that I will be leaving work around 3:00pm to pick Tina up from the airport so that he can make sure my schedule is clear. Everything is coming together. I managed to get a little more work done Sunday evening to off set leaving early on Monday. I went to bed early again as my body was still trying to catch up for lost time.
Monday morning arrived soon enough and off to work I went. The day passed quickly and I managed to leave a little earlier than I had planned. Since I had the extra time, I ran home and showered and made sure everything was ready for the special evening that lie ahead. I made it to the airport and to the baggage claim just in time.
There she was, my T. We locked eyes and ran to each other with arms open wide. I picked her up and wrapped my arms around her tightly and spun her around before placing her gently back on solid ground. Then, I couldn’t wait another second and went in for a kiss. Not just any kiss either. A kiss that would convey just how much I missed her and that she should never go away for that long again! I think she got the message too. When we finally broke apart to breath I heard her whisper “fuck.” Yeah, I would have to agree wholeheartedly.
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(20 votes, average: 4.85 out of 5)
Absolutely loved it. Had me laughing. Thanks
This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.
You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.
It was very funny.
Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…
Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…
Yes I agree we need another chapter pretty please by the way this was so good pps.
fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
Bette and Tina love.
I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
You’re a great writer.
Congratulations!
anxious for a new chapter…
You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.
Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!
It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)
Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.
Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!
Thanks! I love Bette like this in their relationship. By that I mean unsure of herself! Too cute! PPS
Love it,please continue writing.
I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
I really love the way you write your story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Brilliant. The “major Tom” bit made me laugh like a maniac for some reason. (and now that song is stuck in my head, lol)
Very enjoyable glad there will be more to come. A fun read for sure.
Great story and funny. Can’t wait for the next post. Maybe some nc17, hint hint. Thanks
Lovely tale! So emotional and yet funny. I wish we could see this story of yours going forward. Thank you!
Loved it!! Thank you
Great story loved it..