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Sensory Overload
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“What are you doing here? I thought we had agreed that I would just take a cab home and see you after work tonight?”
“I couldn’t wait T. I had to see you. I missed you so much! So, I thought this would be a nice surprise. I hope wasn’t wrong about that?”
“No, not at all! I’m so glad you’re here! Thank you.”
I give her a wink and we grab her bags and make our way to the car.
“I hope you don’t mind, but I thought we could go back to my place and I’ll cook dinner for you.”
“Really? You’re going to cook? Ok.”
“Don’t act so shocked T! I CAN cook, I simply choose not to. It is hard to cook for one person, so I ordered out all the time. Now, I have someone to cook for, so I want to do it.”
“Hey, I’m flattered, really! I can’t wait to try your cooking.”
The rest of the ride home was spent catching up and Tina telling me all about the week she had in New York. I didn’t think she needed to know about the kind of week I had, so I kept it simple and light. Fine, fine….everything went fine.
We arrived safely at my house around 5:00pm and I went in to start the bath while T grabbed some clean clothes from her bag. She liked my bath idea and I told her she would have a nice long soak while I made dinner. While she was relaxing I cooked the tuna steaks and rice pilaf with grilled veggies. I also lit the candles and put out the flowers. I opened the wine to let it breath. Everything was set. Tina emerged from the bathroom after about an hour of soaking and entered the kitchen/dining area. I was waiting for her and had her chair already pulled out ready to seat her.
“Why thank you madam.” She sits and I scoot her up to the table a bit.
“You’re quite welcome my sweet.” I take my seat next to her.
“Everything looks amazing babe. Thank you for doing all of this.”
“It’s my pleasure. Here, allow me to serve you.” I fill her plate and then her wine glass. Then, I fill my own and we begin to eat.
“Wow, Bette, this is so good! You can cook for me anytime babe.”
“Thank you and I look forward to many more meals together.”
We finished up dinner and I walked her to the couch to sit while I cleaned up the dishes. She wanted to help, but I refused.
“Not tonight T. Just relax. I’ve got it.”
I got everything loaded in the dishwasher and made coffee and joined Tina on the couch. Now’s the time Bette. Don’t be a chicken shit. Just tell her. Nice and easy. Just say it…
“T?”
“Yes babe?”
I take her hands in mine and turn until we are face to face. I look into those gorgeous hazel eyes that I could get lost in for days. I take a deep breath…
“I love you.”
She gasps and the tears start streaming down her perfect cheeks. Oh fuck, what have I done? Fuck! Too soon! Stupid Bette! Stupid! But wait, she’s smiling! Those must be happy tears. It’s ok. It’s got to be ok right?
“I love you too babe. So much.”
Then, she grabs my face and pulled me in for the most passionate kiss I’ve ever experienced.
And all I could think was ‘Oh thank God, it’s contagious!’
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Absolutely loved it. Had me laughing. Thanks
This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.
You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.
It was very funny.
Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…
Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…
Yes I agree we need another chapter pretty please by the way this was so good pps.
fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
Bette and Tina love.
I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
You’re a great writer.
Congratulations!
anxious for a new chapter…
You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.
Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!
It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)
Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.
Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!
Thanks! I love Bette like this in their relationship. By that I mean unsure of herself! Too cute! PPS
Love it,please continue writing.
I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
I really love the way you write your story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Brilliant. The “major Tom” bit made me laugh like a maniac for some reason. (and now that song is stuck in my head, lol)
Very enjoyable glad there will be more to come. A fun read for sure.
Great story and funny. Can’t wait for the next post. Maybe some nc17, hint hint. Thanks
Lovely tale! So emotional and yet funny. I wish we could see this story of yours going forward. Thank you!
Loved it!! Thank you
Great story loved it..