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Shhh…Don’t tell anyone Part.11
– Fuck Shane I won’t be able to hold them back much longer, they already think I’m crazy.-
– Alice the always have, but it’s ok, you guys can come home now, but please make sure Carmen goes to the backyard as soon as she gets in the house, ok? Bye. – With that Shane was only left with her own demons and fears, ‘till Carmen arrived.
Twenty minutes that felt like twenty years went by and now the gang was opening the door, Shane ran to her hiding spot so she could see everything and not be seen. Everyone came in chatting and you could hear the kids laugh and play. But then Alice told Carmen if she could check out the pool for her, everyone just turned around and stared at Alice, but she just told Carmen to please go check out the pool, so Carmen went to the backyard and found the words: “I LOVE YOU, WILL YOU MARRY ME?” Just as Carmen started to cry Shane appeared right behind her.
– Please… Will you? –
– But… I thought… Oh my God…- Carmen was too touched to say anything. Shane grabbed her hand and led her to the table were they both sat down.
– Carmen, yes I did went over to Cherie’s house, but it was only to prove myself and you that I don’t love her anymore. She was someone very important in my life, and yes I had a very hard time trying to forget her, but I did. And now I’m in love with you and you only. I have no interest in being with anyone else but you. So please I’m begging you to take me back and also take a chance with me and I promise I’ll live everyday to love you and our baby, so what do you say? –
– Oh Shane… I love you… And I would marry you tonight if that was possible… I just thought… I thought that I lost you… It felt like I did. – Tears were flooding Carmen’s face, and she could barely speak. Shane hold her and then whispered into her ear.
– You could never lose me, ever, you are the owner of my heart, so that’s all there is to it, you own the damn thing so unless you give it back I won’t ever love anyone else but you.- Shane at this point was a crying baby too. Carmen just said yes and they hold each other for a long time while the rest of the girls were watching from inside the house. Suddenly Shane remembered that the ring still wasn’t on Carmen’s finger, so she let go of her embrace to look in the table for the right box. But she was too emotional to find it.
– Umm…I… I can’t find the fucking ring… it has to be in one of these boxes…- Shane looked embarrassed, and Carmen amused.
– Don’t worry babe, we’ll find it.- finally Carmen was the one to get the right box, and when she saw the ring she just stared at it, wondering if this was just a work of her imagination or if it was really happening. Just then Shane took the ring and bent down on one knee, grabbed Carmen’s hand and placed the ring on her finger. Then went up and kissed Carmen.
* Meanwhile inside the House*
Everyone is just amazed, they’re all crying and everyone hold their wives closer, and Bette and Tina were kissing, and Dana and Alice just said I love you to each other. Just then Alice spoke to the whole group.
– Shit! I didn’t picture Shane to be the type of girl that would do that, I actually thought she was fucking Cherie Jaffe.-
– Well I guess that it’s been hard for all of us to actually see Shane the way she is now, and not the way she was when we met her, but I really believe that she has changed and for the good.- Bette said, she really trusted that Shane was now were she always wanted to be. So everyone went to their bedroom and left Shane and Carmen alone. What everyone did that night was so full of Love Lust and passion that can’t be described here. It was a good thing that all the kids slept together in one single room for all, that way their moms could “sleep” alone.
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Yes no more Sherie!! Im glad that u decided to cut the drama..its great to see a happy Sharmen story :D
Fuckin’ awesome, Baby-girl!!! Please post soon, which means now!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
Yay for happy Sharmen! I love it.
It’s about time Shane popped the question, since Carmen’s already pregnant with their baby. :) But what a romantic way to propose! How can Carmen say no to that? I’m really digging the story, by the way. Keep it up.