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The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Tina (Part 2, Chapter 6)
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The Adventures Of Bette Porter And Sissee Gardner Schmidt After Tina (Part 2, Chapter 6)
PART TWO: MAUI
Chapter 6
The four of us went for a walk on the beach. It was hard to see ahead because of the black sand but the darker the sky got, the more stars came out to light our way. The fresh air felt good and it helped dry up the alcohol we had consumed. We walked as far as we could until we came to a barrier of lava rock and had to turn around to come back.
Patsy was a very hands-on person. She was either holding Linda’s hand or had her arm around her shoulder or they walked arm in arm. It was nice to see all that affection especially since they had been together for four years already. They knew they could not get officially married on Maui so they had plans to make it legal in Canada in the spring. But Maui was a romantic place which is why they made arrangements in advance to exchange vows at Kapalua Bay Beach.
Now, here on a beach that was black, Bette and I walked behind them for the most part. We had our hands swinging at our sides as we moved along briskly. Sometimes our hands touched and at one such encounter, I glanced over at her. She looked back and then impulsively put her arm around my shoulder, actually around my neck and pulled my head toward hers. She withdrew her arm quickly however, saying one of her favorite expletives. In fact, she almost hissed it. I looked at her again as we moved along but she kept her eyes forward. I was not sure what was going on in her head. It was as if she wanted to touch me and yet she made herself stop.
In spite of the darkness we could see it was clouding up. We quickened our pace but suddenly it started to rain. It came down in sheets but was wonderfully warm. Then Patsy surprised us. She stopped ahead and just stood still, throwing out her hands, lifting her face and letting the rain, wash over her, shouting. “Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!” at the top of her lungs. We all laughed and then one by one we joined her, walking around in circles, yelling, getting soaking wet and loving it.
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I really am in awe of your writing now more than when I first read the story. Your attention to the geographic detail is amazing. Some readers are not interested b/c it doesn’t involve Tina w/Bette but if one can get past that idea and be more open and accepting, they will realize how exceptionally good is this story and your writing. Keep posting, Sissee.
So descriptive and beautiful, I always look forward to your posts. Thanks for writing.
azmama, Ahh, you’re my new best friend which says a lot since we are by now, old friends. You were the one who inspired me to try fanfic, so I am very happy you came along for the ride. Thank you very much for your continued encouragement. It means alot to me.
sarah_schuster, Thank you very much for your kind words.
I always welcome a new post from you with delight. I love the way you write. There is somekind of a serenity in the way you describe and write your story. Pretty realistic of Bette to say that some people will definitely get hurt if they go on this way. It is not possible to go through life without sometimes hurting people you love. I like to way Sissy and Bette’s relationship is growing right now. Thank you for posting.
brouhaha, Wow! I really am touched as you try to describe how my writing affects you. Thank you for feeling the “serenity”. As for Bette and Sissee’s relationship growing deeper and deeper, that’s exactly what I mean to convey. Something is building and we all know what it is. In the real world it’s called love and the expression of it. In fanfic, it’s called NC-17. Have a great day!
Sissee, I am so glad you have posted another chapter today. I know this story was done years ago, as indicated by azmama’c comment. I wish I have known you before, then I would know what the storyline would be for the rest of the adventure. Anyhow, I like the idea of B & S talk in the middle of the night, and B & T sleeping together (even without any intimate action). It just melts my heart when I feel B is loved by S so much. She definitely deserve it after so much hurt happened to her, especially re: Angie, and her previous love of S.
Oops, I wish there were an edit button, I need to make two to three corrections on my previous comment, I meant azmama’s comment, and B & S sleeping together. Please forgive my grammer as English is not my first language. (Also, I need to add an ‘s’ on the word deserve).
My Dear Bette’s Babe, It’s okay. Don’t worry about the error. I knew what you meant and I am just happy to see you take the time to make comments.I can’t tell you what is coming up in future “After’s”, but I wrote a series after each TLW season starting in 2005, that means there are four. We’re in the second one here.
LOL I noticed the ad at the bottom for Maui Oceanfront Condos! on you last post. I think they thought your doing a great job promoting Maui so we will take Sissee as our private agent ;P Great update. Bette is still fighting to much with herself all through it’s understanable it’s human. But it makes me impatient i want them togehter lol, I can’t wait for the next post.
I just read what you wrote for lb18. Your a great, good writer don’t let anyone els make you think different. It’s just the fact most people believe in the love Tina and Bette have and because of that they can’t picture Bette nor Tina with someone els. But that has nothing to do with your writing ability. It’s a great story and well writen. You know I’m a great B/T fan but in this case I will love to see S/T together.
Azmama, Sissee does “center Bette”. I like that way of putting it and yes, I did have a great 4th of July weekend with fireworks on both Friday and Saturday nights. Lots of food and drink with a restful Sunday. So it was great!
kbergin47, I know what everyone is anticipating and it’s coming very soon.
September, Reference to that Hawaiian ad below, it seems to keep changing but still appropriate to be on this page. Thanks for all those other good things you said, regarding my writing. I wish you would have been around earlier when I was getting put down. I suspect you might have stuck up for me but I am always gentle with my critics, hoping to win them over. It would please me to no end to still hear from them in a good way.
Sissee, you are telling me there are 2-3 more adventures you wrote about B & S? Wow, I can’t wait to read them all. I know I have to be patient here. After reading so many chapters of B & S, I start to believe Bette would be the one who makes the next move. Sissee is always there waiting for Bette to initiate things! :-) Bette is lucky to have her as a friend all these years.
Bette’s Babe, Yes, there are four Adventure stories and all of them will be posted here before the last TLW show begins in 2009. The first was called After Yale, the second is After Tina and I can’t really tell you what the next two are called because it would give the story line away.
azmama is right–this is a great story. It took me a while to warm up to it, but now I’m hooked! Thanks!
Hey! I just now noticed the ad at the bottom of this page for Maui Oceanfront Condos! It’s nice to see this Maui story has picked up a Maui ad. I wonder if that is on purpose or a coincidence?
brouhaha’s comment is spot on. You do write B & S’s interaction w/serenity and love. Sissee is always completely accepting of Bette. She centers Bette. They have a wonderful, soon to be more wonderful, relationship. Hope you had a good July 4th.
ld18, Good! I’m glad you’re hooked and I appreciate your letting me know it. I always consider the comments, good or bad, as my royalties for writing the story and as you can see, I’m not a wealthy person. I’ve made some progress though because those who were hard on me have not been around lately.
Sissee’s being very patient with Bette. Thanks for the helicopter experience.