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The beginning of a friendship, chapter 52
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I mumbled shakily, feeling how the quivers became less intense.
Bette:
I could feel her slip away as my eyes followed the car that rushed off. With a snap of my head, my focus was on her, and I could see the struggle in her eyes, as well as the more obvious struggle, for air… Never had I been so glad to reach my destination, and I pulled my Saab up on the driveway, faster then I ever had.
I turned towards her, feeling concern wash over me with every beat of my jumpy heart… What kind of consequenses would it have, if that car had indeed been driven my Eric? Her respons indicated that that indeed was true, and somehow that though made my heart wince… Afraid of losing her…
For a split second I felt desparation wash over me, not knowing what to do to help the woman I loved more then anything, she seemed to calm slightly, but the fierce panic was still in those magnificent hazel eyes, and I didn’t know what to say to take it away.
But after that second of helplessness, my body solved that problem for me, because at once I was certain that it weren’t words she needed, but actions.
Pulling her into an embrace, maybe even more to calm my own pounding heart then hers, I heard how she let out her breath, sighing as she pressed herself against me.
Warmth,
Safety,
Love…
I felt how our strenght, our love, our emotions, merged together in one pool of something undescribable
She shook, like a leaf would in autumn-wind, but I wouldn’t let gravity get a hold of her… Oh no, she would be the forever and the everlasting.
*Porter, who would have thought you could ever attempt to be a romantic…*
I’m sorry
She uttered softly, her voice still quivery, and all I could do was press my lips against her hair, feeling that sweet softness… I wouldn’t lose her, would I? I closed my eyes, trying to regain control over my pounding heart. Why was she apoligizing?
At once decisive, I cupped her face in my hands, forcing her tenderly to look at me.
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I’m holding you to the promise you made. I mean it! If you break it, you may not receive anymore comments from me. =O xD
brilliant ending to the chapter :) i can’t wait for the next one :)
That was great and love it!!!!!!!!
hey hun,I’m good, suffering from lack of net access tho, lol. Of course I enjoyed this chapter :) Can hardly wait for more!! Happy New Year to you also! Hope u have a good one!!
Maybe this chapter was influenced for all that Tina’s straight life crap that was the end of S3 and all the same maybe not, you always have the last word and I always like it, this is not exception. That little fight proved that they mean what they’ve been saying since chapter number I don’t recall LOL. I must insist on the song for THE moment. Goodluck with the intership pal!
great all my begging worked you heard me !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and we cant be close to the end and you love it when i say longer
They just keeping getting beter with each new chapter totally awesome Loe it
They just keeping getting beter with each new chapter totally awesome Love it
I’ve missed this story. I wish you could post more often. It was great and i loved it. PPS
This was A Great Chapter. You are not that mean. I am so loving this story. Can not wait for more. Thank you PPS
Now I can handle this kind of drama. It was not really bad but more of a misunderstanding between them. But I think that it brought them closer to each other. When is Bette going to tell Tina about the house and I am holding to that promise of getting them together.
Okay – this is my first comment ever on any story on this board, mostly because I’m just too lazy. But I really have to comment on this now, my all time favorite story. When I first discovered it there were already like 50 chapters written. I printed everything on paper so that I could read it in peace in my bed before sleeping. ‘Cause this is just the kind of story that it needs to be absolutly quiet for so you can get lost in every word you’re writing and let these two characters and there feelings wash all over you. And afterwards you go to sleep with the most warm and fuzzy feeling like everything is good in the world. I know, I’m a hopeless romantic but I can’t help it and I have to say that this story touches me deeply. The only bad thing now that I caught up with all the chapters is that I can’t just read on and on anymore, but have to wait now for every new chapter. Well, just know that among many, many others I’m waiting patiently for every new post, knowing that it will be absolutely worth it (okay, maybe not always THAT patiently…). Just keep this amazing story coming. Thank you.
can you just skip a few chapters and go straight to 54 or 55? you’ve been teasing us long enough LOL…great chapter, little drama is always good, keeps our girls alive and feeling
You sure always put a smile on my face with this story – amazing and you know it to – I just love it. Post soon
I Love this chapter it was beautiful Mom =) I look forward to next chapter…BIG HUGXoX Dani
Oh ya… I’m gonna be soooo suffered with my lack of net access too (just like aisling too) My broadband broke down… and I have to SNEAK use my siblings’ dial up account… without their permission!! And I can’t download TLW S4 (Sorry… the show will never ever legally shown here… believe me… if it’s showing here, I won’t have to download it :P)!!! Argghhh!!!
Come out come out… wherever you’re… watch out JLBT, Lament is giving out the final warning :P LOL. This is sooooo good and all those emotions churning… wow… love… then anxiety… then tears… then love… then laugh… then fear… what did I miss… hmm… just WOW… and tell me about it… I think stories write on their own too… arent they? ;) Especially drama I must say… it just create themselves when you don’t even planned them… EVER… ;) Hey… but don’t ever suddenly drift into ‘drama’ in the middle of a nice romantic NC-17 ;) Arrggghhh… “Shoo shooo” *shoo-ing the ‘Drama ideas’ from your head* LOL Big big hugggg~~
Well done, a story needs a little drama…Post soon
i just caught up with your story and i think it’s time for me to actually leave a comment and tell you what a wonderful job you’re doing. this story is soooooooooo great. keep it coming…speaking of which, i think i speak for everyone when i say (repeat) that we’re holding you to that promise. pps
I am looking to read the chapter 55! my friend this post was so good! i like so much ths kind of drama cause this talk will make them stronger than before. take care! big hug!
Geee you’re dragging this out LOL – but remember your promise or I’ll come after you!!! Great post my friend, but I smell trouble with the jerk Eric. Post soon, I’ve started the NC-17 countdown LOL
Wow. How in the holy hell did I manage to first last time?! Ah, to have constant internet access again… soon. Anyway, I GUESS I’ll forgive you for the characters taking you somewhere else. I know how it goes; it’s happened to me before where my ending got completely switched around from what I intended… Glad we’re on the same page with B&T’s destination, and I’m with you ’til the end! HUG to you too, my friend!
Ya know what? Those two should really stop doubting the other and start enjoying each other… Okay, scratch that! I love that style of yours and the constant angst about each other’s feelings. I guess that’s what happens when you find yourself so in love and so happy that you fear every second that you gonna wake up from the most wonderful dream. I guess I can understand the feeling. Oh, and don’t we love this drama that you’re such an expert at unfolding for us… ya know… the banter, the arguing, the chase, and finally the finding each other again! *Heavy sigh*… More, please more… oh, and you crack me up with these promises of yours J, as if you could ever lose us on the way! Thanks!
I am so ashamed that I missed this chapter, normally I’m looking everyday to see if you posted something but this time I must overlooked it sorry.As usual an excellent piece of work with the slowburn which is your trademark. Love the way how you describe the emotions that emerge from them. Thanks for letting me feel the way I feel now. Prachtig staaltje schrijfkunst weeral JLBT. Now I’m waiting for an update of my favourite ‘Pretty Woman’….