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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 19
Previously on the beginning of a friendship:
Tina:
How about I call you tomorrow afternoon and well go lunch somewhere, my treat, for your birthday?
*I couldnt believe I had it in me to be so decisive… And to lie like that!*
That sounds great T, Im sorry I havent asked you before about my party, it just absolutly slipped my mind…
Hey… dont worry Bette… Its ok really, Im sorry I wont be able to make it, but Ill see you tomorrow then
She sounded slightly relieved and I heard something else in her voice (could it be happiness?) when she hoarsly said: Yeah, Im looking forward to it
So am I! Have a great birthday… and party of course!
When we had ended the call I glanced in a window and saw the big smile on my face.
*Well that woman sure makes me happy*
And without further ado I continue my hunt for the perfect present.
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Chapter 19, the party
Bette:
When Alice picked me up at 5 that afternoon, I felt it was my birthday through and through… Kit had spoiled me immensly, just staying with me all day, chatting, giving me attention and several small gifts (one of them was a bottle of non-alcoholic wine which made me laugh)
She had just left me at 4.30 telling me she would get dressed and meet me at MILK later.
Hey there beautifull!
Alice said, hanging out of the window of her car she had decorated generously
Get in the car birthdaygirl
Are you serious Al? What have you done to this thing?
I said smiling to my friend as I approached the heavily ornamented car.
Just a few thingies I thought youd like She said with a broad grin Just hop in baby!
And, smiling at her childlike enthousiasm I got in the car only to find…
Balloons Al?
Yeah, I thought youd like it She winked, turning to me for a tight embrace Happy birthday!!!
Thanks Al I couldnt help it, I laughed out loud… It was great to see Alice so exited. She laughed with me
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(27 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
wow! so sweet! this chater was incredible nice! the way you put their feelings througthout the wonderful song is amazing! enjoy your vacations take care! i hope on monday i will read other great chapter, what will happen after the song?
That was beautiful. Great update. So you will leave us hanging until next week. Have a great vacation and we will be here waiting for you. Thanks for the post.
Oh boy, Tina has finally admitted to herself that she loves Bette. I hope that you had a good vacation in the sun. I am waiting for the rest of your story.
Aww that was sweet and beautiful and love the way they are. Ok post soon please, thanks!
If I wasn’t at work I would have screamed. OMG, how could you stop there. You must post as soon as you can. Love this story.
Why’d you stop here! That was so sweet! Hey you’re Dutch, guess what, so am I! Where are you from? Well I love your story so post again soon!
‘It felt like our hands were making love…’ Whoa… I had something to say and now I can’t remember what it was. But MAN what a place to leave us hanging for a WHOLE WEEK! lol Soooooooooo mean, but hey we can always go back and read from the beginning. And now I must get back to work. Have fun! =D
thank you so much for commenting! I think you’re English is fine! It’s better than my french anyway LMOA! Although it’s a very biautifull language! I’m dutch myself… What I wanted to say: I’ll be back next week with fresh material LOL I’ll probably post on monday ( april 3rd)then… It was kind of goofy the way I wrote it in my authors comments but I am afraid to change it because I had to edit this story for like 5 times before the song would come out the way I wanted! CU guys!!!!!
I love this story!!!!!!!!!i can’t wait for your next post!!and i can’t wait till they’ll both tell their love to each other!!thank you!!and post soon pleaseee!!!!!!!I’m sorry i try my best to speak english but i’m not really good!lol (i’m french)!!! Continue comme ça, j’adore cette histoire, et si bien Bette & tina sont faite l’une pour l’autre!!c’est clair!!!!!!bisous!!!!
Absolutely Perfect!!!!
that was beautiful… thank you so much… have a womdeful vacation… you did a great job with this song… thanks
i love this story but why stop there pleasepost soon
OMG… this is soooooo BEAUTIFUL and seriously GOOOOOOOD…. God… I even sang along with those songs… I couldn’t stop smiling :D
You’re so mean! did u know that? finished the chapter like that!! what were you thinking?? Anyway, I love your story more and more and this was my fave chapter. Have a nice weekend!
‘hands making love comment’ was brilliant…this was perfect…what a way to express your feelings…i know we have to wait a week now but thanks for leaving us with this beauty…i hope tina won’t run away after the song is over
sweetttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can’t wait?
Awwwwwwwww so sweet and great – I love it, absolutely perfect – I could totally see it happen….normally I don’t like songs in fanfic, but this – WOW, so beautifully written. I hope you have had a great vacation, but I’m hoping it will end soon, so you can post again LOL….