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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 38
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Her shoulder fitted perfectly below my chin, her head in the curve of my neck… it seemed like we were cut out of the same piece of wood and we now merged together into one heart… One soul… One life…
At once she stepped back and looked upto me with determination and mischief… I felt my heart pound faster as she placed my fingers around the bottom of her shirt before raising her arms…
I looked at her in confusement, not entirely sure of what she wanted from me…
And when it hit me, I felt my eyes grow wide
Tina:
Finally I had convinced myself that taking of my top would do no harm…
I mean…
It wasn’t like it was doing much to cover me anyway…
And somehow I felt more and more like I was presenting Bette with pieces of me… The delight and happiness in her eyes every time she opened one of my gifts (whether it was a kiss, an embrace of a word) was so intensly bright it took my breath away… I could see the love in her eyes when she looked at me, feel it quiver in her fingertips when she touched me, and flow out of her lips when she kissed me…
I took a step back and brought her hands to my shirt… I looked deeply in those magnificent eyes while raising my hands when I saw them widen with surprise…
I felt my confidence waver, but then that surprise evolved into that incredible twinkling I had just been thinking about… She minimised the space between us, placing her hands carefully around my waist, her thumbs wrapped around the side of my shirt…
Pressing her hands against my skin she let them slowly slide upwards and I gasped as I felt her fingers leave a trace of burning desire…
Her fingertips softly brushed the sides af my breasts, and even though the bikinitop still covered them, they resonded vividly to her touch… And I shivered as she gently pulled the shirt over my head…
Arousal and passion got a hold of me as I took the garment out of her hands and threw it on the floor, cupping her face in my hands to pull her into a kiss that was filled with desire… Her hands tenderly discovered my back, leaving goosebumps as she pulled me even closer and let our tongues intertwine… i teased her a little, trying to avoid her tongue and she laughed, trying to capture it, pulling me into a tight embrace…
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I am happy you warned before hand of the eefect this story could have on a person! I am in awe of this story and you are keeping the excitment in it, by prolonging the moment of making love. But damn, make them get it on already! (haha) OMG the way these two girls flirt an seduce each other. Please more!!!
WOW!!!! You write so well. But you are such a TEASE!!!!! thank you More Soon PLEASE!!!!!!
You´re a tease girl!!!I love the update… thanks!!!
loving this babe… and the way you are teasing us… getting us all hot and wet along the way… hmmmmmmm… please continue
JLBT tht was fuckin hot..Thank god i havnt had a shower yet so i can rush for a cold one…this one was as hot as the lapdance i had lastnight in the stripclub ..yes tht hot..pls post soon ms tease..
dead dead as a stone!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update thanks 4 pages tease grrrrrrr
Howdy neighbor! ;) “But somehow now it felt as if my world had been upsidedown and she just had put it right again… ” LOVE IT! Shower, Bette doing a striptease… Tina’s SO a goner. Lovin’ all of it, as always, still enjoying the slow burn (even in the loving)… just makes it all so much better! Thanks! Looking forward to more!
awasome! this was incredible beautiful! and the end! well you always enjoy tease us! i see you weekend was great cause yours posting has a lot of funny and seductivity! you are doing really really great! take care
Bette, shower, hot, cold, doesn’t matter. Slow strip tease, Tina against the wall gone. OMG, so glad you warned us. I was eating as I was reading this and found myself stuck with just my mouth opened, hmmmmmmmmmm. Such a tease, but were lovin it. Please continue now that we’ve caught our breath.
Well…thanks for the warning…I should haved listen…my jaw is on the floor… :) damn it girl…you are the best!!! Post soon…please and meantime I collect my jaw…
You Have placed a huge smile on my face – thank you!
Oh My God!! What is it about you authors that you have to get us all worked up then you leave us with a ‘TBC!’ You and Ally are gonna kill me! …I wonder if anyone has ever died from anticipation!!! Thanks for your story and Pleeeeease post soon!
That was beautiful, awesome
Oh man, you are Queen of TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! Urgh…Its sooooo unfair, I shouldn’t have read this story before shower, big mistake! Man, such a torture to shower alone after reading this. TEASE!!!!!!
Wow I think you melted my brain. My heart is kinda mushy too – great combination! Fantastic chapter. I still love the teasing pace – you give us just enough. Thanks for posting and keep it up.
Life experience? *envy* *envy* Haha… glad that u’re still surviving from all these teases so that you can write us this special slow torturous burning story ;) :D I’m late for work again but I don’t care.. haha
WOW!! You just added totally HOT to the romance you write. You are the biggest tease and I love it, so keep it up. I can’t wait to see how many chapters it will take before Bette and Tina make love. If it’s even half as long as it took before their first kiss you are going to pleasantly kill us. Please post soon!
God, I have to quit working so that I will not be the last one to leave comments all the time. Oh well, I like to eat so I guess that means I have to work, bummer. Your writings are intense, beautiful, and just down right hot. You are the director of every scene, every word, and all the essence that make Bette and Tina. You bring their life, and love to us so that we can enjoy their oneness. I can not live without your words that bring joy, happiness, and hope.
they tease each other too much, so are you…good one LOL
you are such a tease!!!!!! and rome was f**king awesome ;)
That was beautiful…I feel honored to have read this. I have tears in my eyes girl. That was so sexy, hot, tempting, luring, seductive, jaw dropping, cheek raising, lip licking, a.k.a fucking amazing. When are you posting again? I need to know. Damn, that has me wanting more and more and more. I am so addicted to your story. Fantastic. Three thumps for me if I can find and extra finger. LOL. PLEASE POST SOON…REAL SOON. I’m dying of ******. Hey, my mother always said speak your mind. Hmm. What just happened here? Excuse me while I pick my tongue up off the floor. Jesus…Some one please call the fire department. I’m in dying need of a release. There I said it. :)
Tease, tease, TEASE !!!! But it is oh sooooo good !…. at this pace, it should take.. about 8 more chapters before they eventually reach the bed… lol… Love it ! post soon please..
Thanks for the warning, my jaw wouldn’t survive another one LOL. God you are a tease, but I loooooooove this slow pace (did I just write that :o))) This is so beautiful, sweet, hot and romantic. Post very very soon – I’m willing to BEG!!!!
WOW WOW WOW ….. POST SOON JUST!!!
Man, it’s getting HOT in here!!! i love the sexual chemistry these two have going, keep it up!! Please post really soon i need to know what is going to happen next, like right this very minute!!! Cheers
Chocolatemama23-LOL. You always say what I wanna say but better than me. Hmm. Why is that? Lol. Anyway, JustloveB+T sweetie that was amazing. I loved every page that you wrote. Splendid. I admire your writing. Fantastic. I’m lost of words at the moment, but, that means I’m satisfied. Lovely, sweet, hot, and torturing. I love this little game they’ll playing. Play on Bette…play on. Please post soon.
………Oh my…were am I, I’ve just past out I think…my computer, what was I doing overhere…can’t remember….I was reading something, I guess….OH NO, SHE DID IT AGAIN !!!!Well, if you can write this after visiting you’re parents in law in the weekend, I’ll say girl, move overthere and stay with them as much as possible.Weer een geweldig hoofdstuk liefje, ik zit weer in de problemen, en mijn vrouwtje slaapt nog…..zou ik toch maar proberen om…..ze iets vroeger wakker te maken….
repeat repeat repeat,….oh, I still didn’t get that, could you repeat that all again….Love reading it….TKS
I think I read the whole thing with my jaw on the desk. God I love Bette, she is soooo sexy!!!!
Tease away ms. lady. I’ll be here to read each and every page. You see I told you I was addicted to this story. LOL! Crazy girl I am. Hey, CFTW where you at baby?
I wonder if they were in the shower long enough for the water to go totally cold? Heh wouldn’t that be a hoot if they both ended up with a cold and had to take care of each other? Bette would be such a big baby. LOL DAMN so some of this comes from life experience huh? Lucky duck. lol Well, if Bette is gonna tease Tina like that, then Tina should completely strip and walk by Bette totally naked a couple of times as if it’s something she does all the time. *evil grin*
Araid of sounding repetitive, greap chapter, it’s the perfect description of the first time of a woman with another woman who has experience, couldn’t be any other way and you narrated perfectly.
I thought my heart was going to pop out of my chest.I can’t wait to read the next chapter =)
What to say when words seem pointless…. Amazing chapter!
My, my, Bette obviously isn’t the only one wearing a mischievous smile here : you too, so obviously, am I wrong ?? To call you a tease would be such an euphemism… “Dangerous temptress” is more what crosses my mind right now ! It should be a punishment against sadistic fanfic authors who let their poor addicted readers this way ! God, the warning was right and I’m pretty sure there was a huge amount of forgotting-to-breath-and-quite-dead readers with our favorite lovebirds in this cold shower !! ^_^ — Two chapters now flowing in this powerful mix of passion and tenderness, this irresistible journey through an amorous discovery of each other, slowly, slowly… Artfully you create this masterpiece that is your story, adding each chapter of yours like a new pearl in a shining necklace… And you make us BEG for the next step, each time ! Yes, you’re such a dangerous addictive writer… I love so much this story, thank you so much for everything. From the deep of my heart.
aww just your teasing me here cant wait for the next chapter and thanks for you know what catch you soon
Ahh such a tease, thsi is awesome, love it!