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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 38
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God Bette… you’re so beautifull…
Before her hoarsly spoken words had time to sink in she took a step closer and pressed her body against mine…
Skin on skin…
*Unbelievable*
it seemed like when our skins touched, they merged together in this velvetly soft substance… It felt as if I was soft and she was soft and together we were ultrasoft… There is no way to put that intense feeling in words…
I felt her hands hesitate as they wandered to my stomach and shortly covered her hand with mine, pressing it against my skin…
Whispering those words that so easily exited my mouth when I was with her I shivered under her touch
I love you…
Tina
I love you…
I was awestruck by her beauty… her tanned and tight abdomen, her perfectly shaped breasts captured in that black bra… Her navel…
I moaned and heard her gasp as i let my fingertip graze the edge of her bellybutton…
I pressed my lips on hers, hunglily seeking acces into her mouth… she awoke a desire in me had never been evoked and than I never even knew existed…
I love you too…
Letting my fingertips wander over her skin was a thrilling sensation… I stared at her face, grazing her lips and cheeks… Carressing the curve of her neck and shoulders in which i so perfectly seemed to fit, stroking her back and slowly moving my hands to her stomach…
Goosebumps appeared on the pieces of her skin I had just touched and she took a step back, cupping my face and softly kissing my lips before she, panting, placed her forehead against mine…
Bette:
I don’t know how I managed to withdrew, but the waves of sexual tension her touches were evoking were so incredibly strong…
Her velvet hands on my skin made me crave her caring but passionate touch more than ever… But I knew that if she would coninue her teasing exploration of my body, I would have to fight extremely hard to control myself… A fight I wasn’t sure I would win… I didn’t want to fight… I just wanted to love and cherish… and win the trust of his incredible woman who was giving me her heart…
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I am happy you warned before hand of the eefect this story could have on a person! I am in awe of this story and you are keeping the excitment in it, by prolonging the moment of making love. But damn, make them get it on already! (haha) OMG the way these two girls flirt an seduce each other. Please more!!!
WOW!!!! You write so well. But you are such a TEASE!!!!! thank you More Soon PLEASE!!!!!!
You´re a tease girl!!!I love the update… thanks!!!
loving this babe… and the way you are teasing us… getting us all hot and wet along the way… hmmmmmmm… please continue
JLBT tht was fuckin hot..Thank god i havnt had a shower yet so i can rush for a cold one…this one was as hot as the lapdance i had lastnight in the stripclub ..yes tht hot..pls post soon ms tease..
dead dead as a stone!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update thanks 4 pages tease grrrrrrr
Howdy neighbor! ;) “But somehow now it felt as if my world had been upsidedown and she just had put it right again… ” LOVE IT! Shower, Bette doing a striptease… Tina’s SO a goner. Lovin’ all of it, as always, still enjoying the slow burn (even in the loving)… just makes it all so much better! Thanks! Looking forward to more!
awasome! this was incredible beautiful! and the end! well you always enjoy tease us! i see you weekend was great cause yours posting has a lot of funny and seductivity! you are doing really really great! take care
Bette, shower, hot, cold, doesn’t matter. Slow strip tease, Tina against the wall gone. OMG, so glad you warned us. I was eating as I was reading this and found myself stuck with just my mouth opened, hmmmmmmmmmm. Such a tease, but were lovin it. Please continue now that we’ve caught our breath.
Well…thanks for the warning…I should haved listen…my jaw is on the floor… :) damn it girl…you are the best!!! Post soon…please and meantime I collect my jaw…
You Have placed a huge smile on my face – thank you!
Oh My God!! What is it about you authors that you have to get us all worked up then you leave us with a ‘TBC!’ You and Ally are gonna kill me! …I wonder if anyone has ever died from anticipation!!! Thanks for your story and Pleeeeease post soon!
That was beautiful, awesome
Oh man, you are Queen of TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! Urgh…Its sooooo unfair, I shouldn’t have read this story before shower, big mistake! Man, such a torture to shower alone after reading this. TEASE!!!!!!
Wow I think you melted my brain. My heart is kinda mushy too – great combination! Fantastic chapter. I still love the teasing pace – you give us just enough. Thanks for posting and keep it up.
Life experience? *envy* *envy* Haha… glad that u’re still surviving from all these teases so that you can write us this special slow torturous burning story ;) :D I’m late for work again but I don’t care.. haha
WOW!! You just added totally HOT to the romance you write. You are the biggest tease and I love it, so keep it up. I can’t wait to see how many chapters it will take before Bette and Tina make love. If it’s even half as long as it took before their first kiss you are going to pleasantly kill us. Please post soon!
God, I have to quit working so that I will not be the last one to leave comments all the time. Oh well, I like to eat so I guess that means I have to work, bummer. Your writings are intense, beautiful, and just down right hot. You are the director of every scene, every word, and all the essence that make Bette and Tina. You bring their life, and love to us so that we can enjoy their oneness. I can not live without your words that bring joy, happiness, and hope.
they tease each other too much, so are you…good one LOL
you are such a tease!!!!!! and rome was f**king awesome ;)
That was beautiful…I feel honored to have read this. I have tears in my eyes girl. That was so sexy, hot, tempting, luring, seductive, jaw dropping, cheek raising, lip licking, a.k.a fucking amazing. When are you posting again? I need to know. Damn, that has me wanting more and more and more. I am so addicted to your story. Fantastic. Three thumps for me if I can find and extra finger. LOL. PLEASE POST SOON…REAL SOON. I’m dying of ******. Hey, my mother always said speak your mind. Hmm. What just happened here? Excuse me while I pick my tongue up off the floor. Jesus…Some one please call the fire department. I’m in dying need of a release. There I said it. :)
Tease, tease, TEASE !!!! But it is oh sooooo good !…. at this pace, it should take.. about 8 more chapters before they eventually reach the bed… lol… Love it ! post soon please..
Thanks for the warning, my jaw wouldn’t survive another one LOL. God you are a tease, but I loooooooove this slow pace (did I just write that :o))) This is so beautiful, sweet, hot and romantic. Post very very soon – I’m willing to BEG!!!!
WOW WOW WOW ….. POST SOON JUST!!!
Man, it’s getting HOT in here!!! i love the sexual chemistry these two have going, keep it up!! Please post really soon i need to know what is going to happen next, like right this very minute!!! Cheers
Chocolatemama23-LOL. You always say what I wanna say but better than me. Hmm. Why is that? Lol. Anyway, JustloveB+T sweetie that was amazing. I loved every page that you wrote. Splendid. I admire your writing. Fantastic. I’m lost of words at the moment, but, that means I’m satisfied. Lovely, sweet, hot, and torturing. I love this little game they’ll playing. Play on Bette…play on. Please post soon.
………Oh my…were am I, I’ve just past out I think…my computer, what was I doing overhere…can’t remember….I was reading something, I guess….OH NO, SHE DID IT AGAIN !!!!Well, if you can write this after visiting you’re parents in law in the weekend, I’ll say girl, move overthere and stay with them as much as possible.Weer een geweldig hoofdstuk liefje, ik zit weer in de problemen, en mijn vrouwtje slaapt nog…..zou ik toch maar proberen om…..ze iets vroeger wakker te maken….
repeat repeat repeat,….oh, I still didn’t get that, could you repeat that all again….Love reading it….TKS
I think I read the whole thing with my jaw on the desk. God I love Bette, she is soooo sexy!!!!
Tease away ms. lady. I’ll be here to read each and every page. You see I told you I was addicted to this story. LOL! Crazy girl I am. Hey, CFTW where you at baby?
I wonder if they were in the shower long enough for the water to go totally cold? Heh wouldn’t that be a hoot if they both ended up with a cold and had to take care of each other? Bette would be such a big baby. LOL DAMN so some of this comes from life experience huh? Lucky duck. lol Well, if Bette is gonna tease Tina like that, then Tina should completely strip and walk by Bette totally naked a couple of times as if it’s something she does all the time. *evil grin*
Araid of sounding repetitive, greap chapter, it’s the perfect description of the first time of a woman with another woman who has experience, couldn’t be any other way and you narrated perfectly.
I thought my heart was going to pop out of my chest.I can’t wait to read the next chapter =)
What to say when words seem pointless…. Amazing chapter!
My, my, Bette obviously isn’t the only one wearing a mischievous smile here : you too, so obviously, am I wrong ?? To call you a tease would be such an euphemism… “Dangerous temptress” is more what crosses my mind right now ! It should be a punishment against sadistic fanfic authors who let their poor addicted readers this way ! God, the warning was right and I’m pretty sure there was a huge amount of forgotting-to-breath-and-quite-dead readers with our favorite lovebirds in this cold shower !! ^_^ — Two chapters now flowing in this powerful mix of passion and tenderness, this irresistible journey through an amorous discovery of each other, slowly, slowly… Artfully you create this masterpiece that is your story, adding each chapter of yours like a new pearl in a shining necklace… And you make us BEG for the next step, each time ! Yes, you’re such a dangerous addictive writer… I love so much this story, thank you so much for everything. From the deep of my heart.
aww just your teasing me here cant wait for the next chapter and thanks for you know what catch you soon
Ahh such a tease, thsi is awesome, love it!