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The Long and Winding Road – chp 30
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“Can I ask you three women a personal question ? “
“of course Paul “ Helena slipped into her most well-mannered English tone.
“As gay women – how easily did you find getting a sperm donor. You can tell me to mind my own business but my girlfriend and I are considering it as an option if we cannot get pregnant”
Helena raised an eyebrow at Tina.
“Well darling — Winnie – that is the ex wife and serpent from the bowels of hell picked a couple of our friends as donors “
“And are those friends happy at not playing a part in their children’s lives ? “ Paul persisted.
“My son’s father moved away not long before the baby was born but the father of my daughter is around New York. You see Winnie hates me so much she needs a few time zones between us “
“I don’t know how I would deal with having someone else in my child’s life – what about you Bette — if you don’t mind ? “
“The donor is my business partner in London “
“Oh – you have a business in London “ Andrew said “ What sort of business ? “
“Art gallery and auction house – it is named after my wonderful wife “
Bette took Tina’s hand and kissed it – hoping the gesture would reassure her.
“Do you spend much time over there ? “ Paul asked a little too casually.
It was immediately obvious to Tina that Paul thought that she took advantage of Bette’s foreign business trips to sleep with men.
“A fair bit -but the baby has put a end to that for a few months – But we were talking about sperm donors — as I was saying – the father has a grown up family of his own — he has no interest in my son — other than he is healthy and we love him “
“Do you find it odd that a man could give up his rights to his child ? “
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First…runnnin back stumblin back to read the story
alli could say was wow…ally u are certainly a gifted writer
This story is great, but you can’t leave it there, god I was waiting to see what Bette had on her mind. Your being very cruel leaving it there. The heatwave in sunny England must be getting to you. Just wait for tommorrow it gets hotter hopefully like your story. Please post soon.
I tell you Bette’s a saint for letting Tina back in her life under these circumstances. You’re one hell of a writer.
great read ally, smart move to stay out of the smoldering heat! brilliant writing as always
Sounds like it would be a shot in the dark for Paul to be the father, which is just as well since he seems like a bit of a wanker.
Definately needed that after the day I’ve had! Another great chapter in the epic life of B&T, god I love Bette Porter…
Gee, Ally, I just checked your weather for the day, sounds pretty pleasant to me. None the less, I’m glad you stayed in and wrote. And I’m glad that things look promising for the health of Tina and her baby. Also glad that when she went trawling for men, she wasn’t quite so desperate as to go for a bottom-feeder (well, other than Henry). So we know why Tina slept with the men, but what excuse did these deeply committed, highly honorable (would-be) family men have for sleeping with her?
I agreed with Bette frustration in the beginning wanting answers to all imagined questions about Tina and these two men, but I LOVED the conclusion that she arrived at “she would never let Tina get so lost again”. Sometimes the end IS more important than the means to get there :o).
wow! very good chapter! i rather Andrew than Paul! and i think taht maybe is him the person! i am glad you post again and excellent as usual! i hope you are doing better! take care!
You are a genius, poor Tina she must have been soo Lost, hope they can get past this
Ally great chapter! Did Paul mention wether he got tested for std’s? please post again soon =).
Great chapter AllyE, loved it. Sure hope Andrew is the father, good man and it appears that Paul is shooting blanks, so I don’t think we will have to worry about him. Love those girls. Helena is turning out to be some great friend to them both. Wonderful.
I guess if you pick It would be Andrew. Por Tina boy was she ever lost. Bette went about this like a pro. Must have been hard on her. thanks
Another great chapter. Thanks Ally
And you leave us hanging like that?? How cruel can you be, woman! Lovin’ this story as much as the others.
I’m not sure one of these guys wasn’t onto what this dinner was all about. Very well written – patiently pacing the room for the next post.
The only thing I walked away from this dinner feeling is that Paul may be shooting blanks with his girlfriend; maybe there’s a chance that one of his blanks may have found its mark in Tina. Other than pleasant conversation and a lot of baby talk, I don’t see what they profoundly learned.
I just went back and reread the story, and I actually found it kind of creepy that these men would sit there and chat so easily…as funnyone said, both have partners which they have cheated on,and seem to have no problem with at all and the consequence of a child, and they are all talking about sperm donors and whatever? If Paul thought that Tina took advantage of Bette’s traveling to sleep around,what’s Paul’s reason? I also would have a really big problem with this if I were Bette.
This was another wonderful chapter and I hope Bette will realize that the answers to all those questions is better left alone. She would only be hurting herself and Tina if she asked those questions. Please don’t make us wait to long to find out what Bette says to Tina.
My heart is breaking for Tina. I know that she screwed everything up by sleeping with these two men, but my heart still goes out to her. I kind of wondered why they led the guys to believe that Tina was sleeping around on Bette. Yeah Tina was sleeping around but not on Bette but on Henry. I am hoping that the baby is healthy and that Tina does find some piece of mind. Bette already loves her and is willing to stand with her through out this entire ordeal.
great update Ally….I guess the baby will look a bit like one or the other of the men, cuz Paul’s girlfriend/wife might be the one unableto get pregnant, most people get onto the ‘fertility tests’ pretty quickly…I’m keep them both out of the picture…but I guess they’ll put one and one togther when she shows or the news comes out, hope they don’t present future problems…betta get T and B to London asap…great you in the northern hemisphere have heat, we in the south have cold…take care…more soon please
I’m back Ally and caught up…please post soon
There is no way I would have been able to sit through that. Excellent writing as always ally!
Great chapter, Ally. It certainly was a weird conversation. Seems like the father is Andrew. I think its best Bette forget about trying to find the answers to her questions and move on … ^_^
Awesome chapter, I bet neither one of them wants to know if they will be a father to Tina’s child, but then again if it is the one who is tryng to have a baby with his girlfriend, that might be some drama in the future they might want to lay claim to the baby like Marcus’ girlfriend in season 1. Please post soon.
Good chapter. First I don’t think Paul answer he taka a test or not. Ok its seem Andrew is a father here, and Bette and Tina need to talk and can’t wait to see whats next, thanks!