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The Set Up (11)
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“Being honest, even when you’re afraid …?”
That was when Tina really opened her eyes and noticed what was on the bed. Rose petals. Bon Jovi’s “Bed of Roses” played gently in her head from memory, and Tina hated that Bette knew her so well in such little time. She was so perfect, and yet Tina was hurt.
“Let me make it right.”
“You can’t just … do this,” Tina insisted, taking her arm back as she turned to face Bette, stepping to the other side of her bed. Watching Bette start the CD player just as her favorite song started. “Bette … come on. This isn’t fair. You know how I feel when I hear this.”
“And I want you to feel better, T.”
“Well you can’t! You can’t just … walk in here and make me feel better!” she whispered, because no one had ever done that for her. No one cared enough to try so hard, and it was upsetting her. “This won’t change things, Bette.” But it did.
“I want to do everything I can,” Bette answered, reaching her hand out, standing on the other side of the bed.
“Why?” Tina complained, thinking of how sweet and gentle with her, and how that infuriated her. Bette could always fix her so easily. But Tina was still upset. She wanted to be upset because of what Bette had kept from her. She felt used. “Why can’t you just let me be angry?!”
“Because I love you!”
With the chorus of “Bed of Roses” playing out for inspiration, Tina bravely did what she’d wanted to do. Not what she thought was right or what she had planned. It was instinct.
Before Bette could try to explain what else she’d just confessed, Tina had climbed onto the bed, and was pulling her in for a kiss between them. Tina was on her knees, holding Bette’s neck. Kissing her madly, like they were lovers who had been kept apart for years.
Bette could feel that Tina couldn’t help herself – and she didn’t mind. Was glad for it, in fact. She gave just as much into their kiss, holding Tina as closely as she possibly could, praying that this wasn’t goodbye. She’d grown far too attached to Tina to leave her now. “I … please don’t … leave … don’t ask me to …”
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Great Chapter!!! Angie I think is a little jealous of Bette. I hope it’s time for Tina to tell Bette about Angies dad. Glad Tina called Bette and left a message. Thank you PPS
i weally enjoy it thank you this story is awesome mmmmmmmooooorrrreeee please!!!
Great update. thank you.
I just can´t get enough! I need more! :)
this story has me hooked bad!.I love Bette to go ahead,despite being afraid,that she says i am this,take me or leave me. She really is playing for the love! and about Angie i don’t think she has a problem with Bette and Tina relationship,maybe she is being bullied at the school or maybe she doesn’t understand her mother being a lesbian (kids are complicated)and i also have the same question like seduction,Tina referring to herself as being a lesbian virgin is an accurate reason for Bette’s lust? it worth for me ha! it’s HOT. PPVS!!!
Really enjoying this story. Its emotion packed and you give us more hot scenes than anyone could ask for. Thank you. PPS.
so glad tina called bette… hey this all happened way before they even met… i have a feeling tina’s ex is the real reason… can’t wait to read what happened with them… aldo wondering whats up with angie… i have a idera, but i’ll wait to see how you write it… great chapter… pps
Great chapter!! I really love your writing. Some people that write great NC-17’s ,like you, dont always do so good with the heavy emotional stuff and yours is great! PPS!
Glad that Tina called Bette, I believe that Bette can now sleep more peaceful.I love your stories, awaiting the next update. thank you.
Thank you very much for another amazing chapter GR!! :-) I am glad that Tina was calling Bette. Also happy that finally Bette do her confession and I guess from Tina’s reaction is more on her personal bad experience.. Maybe Angie’s father was a player who take gullible Tina for granted and then leave her when she was pregnant!? Hm.. I wonder what happen to Angie.. Is she worry sick about Tibette closeness?! Well… I should stop babbling and wait for your update, so there won’t be anymore wild guessing :-p lol PPVS GR!! ;-) thanks!!
Bette did the right thing,she was honest with Tina.Tina really overreactet.Great update,thank you.
The Birthday Wish Hello GrindRight, I ‘m enjoying this story. Although I must admit it’sbringing back memories from my past. I too was once a player. I knew justwhat to say and do. “Dam the kitty cats tight.” Sorry I got lost for a moment.Back to the subject, my greatest concern is for Angelica. Bette mentioned to Shane that she does not love Angelica while confessing her love for Tina. Is it possible for Bette to give Tina real love while she herself is learning what love means? On the other hand, was Tina’s inference referring to herself as being a lesbian virgin an accurate reason for Bette’s lust? Do your thing keep grinding right!
Well, Bette, that might not have been the most artful delivery of the “player” news, but you can’t be smooth all the time. Listen to the yoda, you must. :)
Hey GR ✋😃 so loving this story and the direction you’re taking it in. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Thanks for the update. I think Tina had a right to be upset. Bette is the first woman she has been with so this is all new to her. For all she knows Bette tells all the women that she’s with that they are special and she’s a “changed woman” because of it. I think Tina is right to be skeptical. People don’t usually change. Bette will need to prove it over time. I’m glad Bette told her before she found out another way. It’s a good start for her new way of relating to a woman. I hope she sticks with it and I hope Tina gives her a chance. Looking forward to the next update.
Bette was a player and changed because of Tina. Great chapter.
Daaaammmnnn Bette got it bad!!!!
That was great and hope they will talk more