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The Way It Should Have Always Been (Tina’s Point of View)
“You’re in love with Jodi, right?” It was more of a question than a statement. I hold my breath as I wait for Bette’s answer.
“I adore her,” Bette begins, “I respect and admire her but…” She hesitates. Her hesitation is killing me.
“But what?” I ask. I can feel the anticipation building. Please Bette, tell me what we both know is true. Tell me you love me, the same way I love you. Tell me you never stopped loving me, just like I never stopped loving you.
“It doesn’t really compare.” I feel myself let out the breath that I was holding. I look at Bette, and she gives me a small smile. I do the same. I need to make love to her right now, I know we shouldn’t do this to Jodi but at this moment I don’t care. I can’t loose this wonderful woman again. I get up from my seat on the porch and hold out my hand to Bette. She looks up to me and takes my hand. I walk her inside my house.
“Where are we going?” she whispers. As she asks me her question, she grips my hand tightly.
“My bedroom.” I state simply. When we reach the bed I get on it and face Bette who is still standing. I pull her to me and kiss her. I kiss her with all the love and passion I can put in to it, and she does the same with me. Oh God how did I ever live without her? I feel her hands roam all over my body. I hear myself moan in pleasure as Bette rakes her hands over the curves of my body. I know what she’s doing; she’s reclaiming me as hers. And I am more than willing to let her. I pull away from our sensual kiss long enough to pull my dress over my head. I dive right back in for another kiss, but she is the one who pulls away this time. She takes off her shirt, and I find that she is braless. All I can do is stare at her beauty. I have never been able to put into words how stunning this woman is. It doesn’t matter if she is clothed or not, she is by far the most gorgeous woman on Earth. But I think it’s her beauty on the inside that makes her so beautiful.
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(69 votes, average: 4.01 out of 5)
Your first post? WOW! Hope there are many to follow.
Your first post? WOW! Hope there are many to follow.
Oh my! Perfect! I could “see” the whole scene in my head. Perfect job!
Excellent!
This might be your first post on this site but you must be writing for years. NC-17s are difficult to write the right way . This was outstanding.
Amazing Job!!
Great start, hope there is more to come, thanks for sharing.
For a first post that was incredibly, INCREDIBLY hot. I just took a shower and now I need another one. Wow. I have no other comments for your post but wow.
Wow what an amazing first post. Just plain excellent. Thank you.
That was your first?? You did an amazing job. Excellent! And so fucking hot. Please please please continue. :-)
You are good!!!! OMG!!!! Please, post soon!
Wonderful, you are very talented. Keep it up and post soon. First time… unbelievably good.
You’ve been holding out on us. You’re a fantastic writer. Please come back soon with another story.
WOW.Please continue writing.
If this is the first can’t wait to see what the second is! Great job!
what a wonderful post. i love it PPS
that was awesome. I could see it all play out in my head. great start!
stunning, amazing and brilliant! great first post!
Brilliant!
Wow!! Great start!! Please continue!
Bravo so much talent and feeling keep writing and post soon
That was amazing for yor first post. I love how you captured Tina in the telling of your story. I would love to read Bette’s Pov-if not the same night, then maybe another scene. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Fantastic chapter. If this is your first post, then the others are guaranteed to slay me. Tina’s overriding theme in this chapter is wondering if Bette knows how much she misses her and how much she loves her. Well, she should tell Bette those things because Bette truly wants and needs to know these things. It is imperative that both of them know how the other feels if they are to make a go of it.
Very well written! I hope that you will share more stories!
That was so freakin hot!!. If this is your first time to write then by all means pls continue to do so because you sure has talent.. You writing captured the intense passion and love between the two and it was absolutely delicious:-D keep it up!!
That was awesome and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!