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The Way It Should Have Always Been (Tina’s Point of View)
She smiles at me and says, “I’ve missed you.” I feel the tears threatening to flood my eyes, and I try to blink them back. If only she knew how much I missed her. This is something I’ve dreamt about for so long. I don’t know why I denied my feelings for her for so long. I will never ever do that again. I don’t say anything after her confession. I flip her over onto her back and kiss her. My tongue enters her mouth and immediately begins battling with hers. Oh God I’ve missed that tongue. I pull away from our heated kiss and begin to kiss and suck on her neck. I know I’m marking her but I don’t care. She belongs to me and no one else. I kiss her breasts and lick down her stomach. I could spend the rest of my life worshiping her. I finally reach her center, and I can smell her arousal. I’ve missed this so much. I lick her outer lips and taste her wetness, and I almost faint. My hands find their way to her breasts and squeeze her nipples to double her sensation. My tongue works its way to her hardened clit and I wrap my mouth around it and suck. I feel her hand in my hair and she moan.
“Ohh!” I continue to suck and lick her hard clit, and she begins thrusting her hips. God her moaning is so erotic. I don’t remember her being this vocal in our previous love making sessions. She gets me so hot. I run my hands along her body, and they make their way underneath Bette’s incredible ass and squeeze. I move her hips so that she is now sitting on my face, and she yelps when my tongue penetrates her wet core.
“Oh God…” she moans, “T…” I moan into her core, and she starts riding me harder and harder. I can feel her contracting, and I brace myself for her to cum all over me. The next thing I know, she removes herself from my face and roughly pulls me up to my knees. She grabs my face and kisses me passionately. Our tongues are battling and I begin to grind up against her.
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(69 votes, average: 4.01 out of 5)
Your first post? WOW! Hope there are many to follow.
Your first post? WOW! Hope there are many to follow.
Oh my! Perfect! I could “see” the whole scene in my head. Perfect job!
Excellent!
This might be your first post on this site but you must be writing for years. NC-17s are difficult to write the right way . This was outstanding.
Amazing Job!!
Great start, hope there is more to come, thanks for sharing.
For a first post that was incredibly, INCREDIBLY hot. I just took a shower and now I need another one. Wow. I have no other comments for your post but wow.
Wow what an amazing first post. Just plain excellent. Thank you.
That was your first?? You did an amazing job. Excellent! And so fucking hot. Please please please continue. :-)
You are good!!!! OMG!!!! Please, post soon!
Wonderful, you are very talented. Keep it up and post soon. First time… unbelievably good.
You’ve been holding out on us. You’re a fantastic writer. Please come back soon with another story.
WOW.Please continue writing.
If this is the first can’t wait to see what the second is! Great job!
what a wonderful post. i love it PPS
that was awesome. I could see it all play out in my head. great start!
stunning, amazing and brilliant! great first post!
Brilliant!
Wow!! Great start!! Please continue!
Bravo so much talent and feeling keep writing and post soon
That was amazing for yor first post. I love how you captured Tina in the telling of your story. I would love to read Bette’s Pov-if not the same night, then maybe another scene. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Fantastic chapter. If this is your first post, then the others are guaranteed to slay me. Tina’s overriding theme in this chapter is wondering if Bette knows how much she misses her and how much she loves her. Well, she should tell Bette those things because Bette truly wants and needs to know these things. It is imperative that both of them know how the other feels if they are to make a go of it.
Very well written! I hope that you will share more stories!
That was so freakin hot!!. If this is your first time to write then by all means pls continue to do so because you sure has talent.. You writing captured the intense passion and love between the two and it was absolutely delicious:-D keep it up!!
That was awesome and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!