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Thief of my heart – chapter 19
The Date part 2
Previously
They looked each other in the eyes for minutes until the sound of a phone took them back to reality. Bette started to get up
‘Excuse me. I will take that and be back in a minute.’
She walked over to the phone and took it.
‘Hello?…..Oh hey sweetie. How are you?…That is good to hear. I am good too….Of course I remember our date next weekend baby……Yeah sure I will bring everything and we will have a great time….. Don’t forget to pack a dress because I booked a room in a very nice hotel and I want to go to dinner with you…..You know that you look always beautiful to me sweetie….Okay I have to go now. I will pick you up on Friday… Have great week….I love you too. Okay bye.
As Bette turned around she saw Tina walking with her jacket in hand to the door.
‘Hey where are you going?’
‘I think that phone call was obvious. And you didn’t even try to hide it. I thought you were different but….huh you know what? Forget it!’
She turned around and made her way to the door.
Bette grabbed Tina’s wrist just in time before she could leave and turned her around.
‘Tina please let me explain..’
‘Explain what Bette? That you lied to me? That you have some other girls at the side but I am the one you really really like?’ She said sarcastically
‘No it’s not what you think!’
‘Yeah sure. Of course not. Then tell me Bette…what is it?’
‘The girl on the phone…I do love her. Very much….’
‘Let go of me! I don’t want to hear any more of this!’
‘…but in an innocent way. She is my goddaughter!’
‘What?’
‘That was my goddaughter Hannah.’
‘But you said…’
Tina looked at Bette in shock. All of a sudden she felt stupid and wanted to leave before she made a total fool of herself. Bette didn’t let go of her hand and led her slowly back to the couch. They sat down and Bette continued to explain because she realised how it must have sounded to Tina what she was saying on the phone.
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Jay….that was a great kiss…thank you so much for the update. pps
Getting well is more important, Jay! This chapter was sweet! Please post soon!
Awwwwwwwwwww Jay all the hard work you’ve done so far is paying off, just taking time the trip will be waiting for you. So while you still doing the work you story gets more and more amazing, please keep writing for us. Feel better. Thank you, Md aka Oma
aaahhh the meeting of the lips..hmmm
Great update. Thank you and the kiss was awesome!
Sorry to hear that you are still having so many issues with your injury. Maybe you can take that vacation when all is better with the back. Love the update and of course the scorching hot kiss.
Hi, dear sweet Jay! Yaaayy!!! You posted!!! *doing a happy dance* Too bad you will not be able to make the trip you wanted, but YOUR health is much more important. Sooo, how about if you take it easy, do your rehab exercises and write more for these avid readers of your stories, huh? Ah, you will recover promptly and you will make us VERY happy. Everyone will be satisfied. Yep. That’s our advice. *wink* Take care of yourself, sweetie. Please. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Ahhhhhhhhhhh………………. please continue. whew!!!!!!!
Great update! The kiss was perfect
WOW! PPS
So glad Tina is getting to trust Bette a little more each chapter. And the kiss at the end of the night was perfect. Great Update. Sorry to hear about your trip – just concentrate on feeling better! PPS
Wow, Indeed! Sorry to hear about your trip, but getting well is more important, besides you might even enjoy that trip more later when your well. Hope that’s in the near future for ya! Thank you for still posting, even when life seems to be getting you down! PPS:)
You know I have waited fo rthe kiss! You did not let me down, it was perfect. I know you know that you are in my thoughts my friend. Thank you for being there for me when I need you. You are a GREAT friend, and you mean the world to me. Take care. Love this story